AsYa FF: Only in the darkness can you see the stars THREAD #1 - Page 80

Nice update!!!
Yaay AsYa getting married!!! with everyones permission!!!
Adil!! on moon happy dat he got a Ammi & wants a baby brother!!!!! 😳!!!!

thanks 4 pm

update soon!!!

Hey Simi,

Aww nice update

Lovely update Simi. I smiled from ear to ear reading the reactions of Anwar n Zeenat.

The reactions of all the 6 members was hilarious. Loved the way Asad told Gafoor that Zoya n he were getting married. Adil's reaction was so cute.

Can't wait to read further. Please update soon n please pm me for the next part too.

Just when I think it can't get any better ,you raise the bar a notch higher every single time 👏 This update was as usual brilliantly written and the pace of the story is also very fluid and perfect.It is going in sync and I appreciate it 👍🏼
I absolutely loved how you brought out the varied factions of all the family members so distinguishably and accordingly-Najma and Dilshad's happiness,Rashid-Ayaan's confusion and Gaffaur's skepticism and finally Aadil's pure elation 👍🏼
But the highlight of the update was Zoya and Anwar-Zeenat's phone conversation..It had all the emotions-their concern for Zoya's well being,her happiness and finally how much they really mean to her..It was amazing 😳
And Oh My God Zeenat's "Please tell me you did not get pregnant!" had me cracking up..She is just so adorable 🤣
Great great work.

super eager for wedding

Awesome update !