loved it.
awesome.
read all parts in one go.
beautifully written
poor zoya always craved for fathers love.
hoe her mother behave with her seemed cruel.
an asad what to say.
ma
u made his character wonderfully anyone can fell in love with.
he is such a genuine personality.
n the khan siblings nazma is really nice.
loved her n her bonding with zoya.
liked ayaan too.
here dilshad is not silent she is different from her character in soap.
loved the way u created dilshad.
n liked rashid too.
loved the adil n asya bonding alottt.
it seems so pure so serene.
last but not least gaffur. i loved him in ur story.
what he has gone through is really bad that his own daughter dont know him she dont even know he existed in her life.
felt bad for gaffur -zoya. both craved for each other alottt.
tanveer is nice person here n also victim of imran's actions.
this is indeed the long comment i have ever written.
plz update soon.
plz pm me
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