AsYa FF: Only in the darkness can you see the stars THREAD #1

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@Rarepearl

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Posted: 11 years ago

#511

Hey Simi,

The part was so beautifully written. All the emotions were well described.

Its so nice to see Zoe finally feeling content with love & support of Asad, she thinks of him as her own family. I just hope he stays by her side always & there's no one to separate them.

I could understand how nervous & edgy Zoe must be thinking about meeting her lost father of so many years & that too you don't know whether he'll accept you now or not. I just hope she takes courage from Asad & speaks to her abbu & please don't let him be the villain of their love life here too.

Love.

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Nitya Suresh

@TheAutumnFizz

Voyager

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Posted: 11 years ago

#512

Very nice update... Beautifully written... Loved the romance between the two of them... Aadil is adorable... :)

So they found him... So glad.. :)

Looking forward to Zoya and Gaffur's reaction... :)

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Snow_kf

@Snow_kf

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#513

Beautiful update.waiting for next update to know the reaction.

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KaranSG_01

@KaranSG_01

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#514

why did you have to stop now?
im so eager for gaffur's reaction when he will find out about zoya.
the part was beautifully written.
loved asad-zoya romance
loved aadil and zoya's moment amd totally loved the kiss by the door.
cont soon.

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lasya13

@lasya13

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#515

Loved it... loved it... loved it...
haha little adil burst their little bubble...
cant wait for siddiqui-zoya meet...

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Simi

@saida.m

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#516

Originally posted by: Azraa01
After reading this chapter, I'm assuming there's no animosity between Asad and Gaffur.. And that definitly a plus point.. But now I'm dying to know why Zoya's mother hid the truth from her..

Now to the happy part.. I'm loving Asad and Zoya's bonding. And the love Zoya is showering on Aadil. I could only picture Asad's face when Aadil called out to him..

You'll find out about all that in the next update. 😉😉

😆😆

Glad that you liked the update! Aadil is my little guy, who would not love him? 😃

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nilusoni

@nilusoni

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#517

Superb part
thanx for pm
do pm me for next part
continue soon

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Simi

@saida.m

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#518

Originally posted by: SBanoMalik
Loving it!!! 😃

😃😃😃

Thanks!

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Simi

@saida.m

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#519

Originally posted by: zola007
awesome update !
loved asad-zoya moments!
loving adil and zoya !
can't wait to see gaffur reaction when he'll learn that zoya is his daughter and how will zoya react also !
continue soon ! (:

Thank you!

Glad you liked the update! 😃

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Simi

@saida.m

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#520

Originally posted by: Rarepearl
Hey Simi,

The part was so beautifully written. All the emotions were well described.

Its so nice to see Zoe finally feeling content with love & support of Asad, she thinks of him as her own family. I just hope he stays by her side always & there's no one to separate them.

I could understand how nervous & edgy Zoe must be thinking about meeting her lost father of so many years & that too you don't know whether he'll accept you now or not. I just hope she takes courage from Asad & speaks to her abbu & please don't let him be the villain of their love life here too.

Love.

Hi!!

Thank you so much for the lovely comment! I am glad that you liked the update and I could get the emotions across to my readers!

I will never ruin my Asad and Zoya! Have some faith me! I am hardcore romantic with a very cheesy and corny heart! 😆😆😆