AsYA FF Jeenay Laga Hoon (New) Chap 4 pg19 updated 27/11 - Page 6

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Posted: 11 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: Linsie

Chapter 1...
Ayaan try to have zoya... hmmm
she is not giving in..

Zoya need the money... ayaan using her weakness...
to get her... so cruel


She shook her head. This was so not happening.

"Over my dead body." She quoted and stormed out of the room in tears. 👏 👏






thankyou love!
your apreciation really matters!😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: mysticlover

Ayaan is such a creep!! Douche bag!!
Adil is Zoya's son... love the name Adil...
The guy who involuntarily helped out Zoya is Asad??
I loved this story... please pm me whenever you update... :)


i love the name tooo! yeah it is! and thanks!😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#53

thanks and sure!😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#54

Originally posted by: Applef

awesome..


such an adorable kid zoya have..😊

update soon..


thanks for liking! i love the kid😆😉
sure!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#55
Hey nice update...
Feel so bad for Zoya...After listening to strangers words,maybe she got some hosla to be face her problems!
Adil...her 5yr old kid is adorable!
Update soon...😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#56
Interesting story...
Stranger who helped Zoya must be Asad..
Adil is so Adorable kid..
Waiting to see what Zoya have in mind...
Liked ur story very much...
PM me whenever u update...
I've sent u Buddy Request...


--MARIAM--
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Posted: 11 years ago
#57

Originally posted by: LazyLad



Love you! sure i will love to have you on my reader list! can i know your name plz? becoming a groupbie on your post!😳

Hey😛
I'm Navitha, Everyone calls me Navi...
Congrats on becoming a groupie😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
#58

Originally posted by: manognasai

Hey nice update...
Feel so bad for Zoya...After listening to strangers words,maybe she got some hosla to be face her problems!
Adil...her 5yr old kid is adorable!
Update soon...😊

Thanks for the review. loved it esp the hosla wali line.
updating soon.😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Mariam.2187

Interesting story...
Stranger who helped Zoya must be Asad..
Adil is so Adorable kid..
Waiting to see what Zoya have in mind...
Liked ur story very much...
PM me whenever u update...
I've sent u Buddy Request...


--MARIAM--

haye and wcm marium!😃
thankyou so much for liking!
sure dear!😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Chapter 3a

Zoya was packing her and Adil's stuff early the next morning. Adil came and gazed at her through the door way. Sleep disturbed his eyes as he tried to shhooo it away by rubbing them intently.

"Mom! We are going somewhere?" He inquired. Zoya, startled for a moment, looked up at him.

"Come here Adi!" She signaled him to come sit in her lap.

"We are leaving this place for a few days to live with Areej aunty."

"But why mom?" He asked innocently.

"Mama has left the job and this house came with it."

"Why did you leave the job mom?" His question worried her but she didn't want to lie to him.

"It was becoming very difficult for me, besides I couldn't give you much time."

"I know its your boss."

She gaped in utter shock.

"How do you know?"

"You were never pleased with his calls these days, he aint a good guy na?"

She smiled sadly. Even this little soul could see her discomfort; she kissed his forehead.

"Go change and get ready."

*0*

Zoya settled on the couch in Areej's lounge. Areej, her childhood friend, slim and smart in a very manner not of a mother of two kids. She had been a support throughout Zoya's life, through every thick and thin, through every downfall and through every success. She had been one constant source of constructive, positive thinking for Zoya. Not a friend but more of a sister. You are just like my family.' She used to quote every time Zoya felt she had no one in the world.

"I am glad you finally made this decision Zoya. I know it was difficult for you to do Par Allah Koi rasta nikal de ga!" She coaxed Zoya handing her the butter dipped almond cake she knew Zoya loved.

(Allah will guide you through your way.)

"Shayad nikal chukka hai."

(May be he has already done that.)

"Matlab?"

(Meaning?)

"I think I have decided what I want to do..." And Zoya elaborated the threads of her plans to Areej who went silent after hearing them. After a long pause she finally managed,

"Yeh bohat bara step ho ga Zoya, I am very scared for you. Ayan Khan is that filthy rich tyrant who can go to any extent to harm people, I think you better stay away from him... after all now he must be adamant to destroy you..."

"I know but I have decided to take this risk... I need to make one last attempt and besides this fear and alarm was there in my life for a long time now... therefore I had applied for Adil and my VISAs last year, we might soon fly..." She scuffed. "Rather flee to the states soon..."

"What? Aur tum yeh sub kuch mujhe abhi bata rahi ho?"

(And yo are telling me now.)

Areej was clearly disappointed and more than that shocked.

"I am sorry, I never wanted this to happen... I wanted to get Adil operated from her but rightnow he is under a constant threat with me... I cant take that risk.. he is all I have... you don't know uski beemari mujhe roz larti hai... I want him protected, hale and hearty like all other children his age..."

(His disease kills me every day.)

She started sobbing like a broken, wrecked being.

"Don't cry... Sab theek ho jaye ga!" Areej hugged her tight.

(Everything is going to be alright.)

Just 5 months back the sky fell on Zoya when the doctors informed her that her life, her five year old son had a hole in his little heart. He needed to be operated an open heart surgery to remove it. Since then Zoya left no stone unturned in gathering up each penny that would save his dear life. But fate wasn't very fortunate for her yet again. And now Ayan had become a serpent in her life, she found it hard to keep all her pieces together.

Her heart tore apart every time she saw her little son unable to breathe properly, unable to eat properly, his under nourished existence brought salty water in her eyes. Whenever she compared him with other children his age she wanted to be a magician who could cure him by the swing of a wand.

But reality strikes and it strikes hard. She was also adamant to overcome any hurdle and obstacle which came in her and her son's life's way.

*0*

I know this is super short. Giving its part B' in a while. Kindly leave your comments and likes behind.

Chapter 3b Page 13😃

Edited by LazyLad - 11 years ago

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