AsYA FF Jeenay Laga Hoon (New) Chap 4 pg19 updated 27/11

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AOA all members this is Suri. although not new to this forum i am penning something down for the very first time. i used to read some awesome stuff around the forum a couple ov years back. here i thought i would do something on our AsYa. you guys need to tell if its going to work or not. Love to all.

AsYa FF

Jeenay Laga Hoon

By LazyLad aka Suri


Foreword:-

The story of a girl Zoya and her struggle through life, her love, her dreams, her painful past and uncertain future. Taken down by her Company's MD, Ayan Khan, Zoy afinds no ultimate escape but to flee with her five year old son, Adil. She encounters Asad before she leaves and doesn't realize how this one man could imprint himself in her mind for the rest of her life. They are separated by fate to meet again but can their be a unioun of these two souls. Can every story have a happy ending?

For everyone there is something missing in them and for everyone life has someone to complete them.

Giving here part 1. Please do read and tell if I should continue or not! Pretty please.

INDEX

Chapter 1 Scroll down

Chapter 2 Page 5

Chapter 3a Page 11

Chapter 3b Page 13

Chapter 4 Page 19


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Chapter 1

Zoya furiously stormed out of the cabin without even bothering to knock once. She slammed his laptop shut and yelled at the top of her voice.

"Kia badtameezi hai yeh?"

He smiled surpisingly and stood from where he was standing.

"Woa woa Zoya darling calm down now... kia badtameezi kar di maine?" Hie voice was cold colder then a winter evening.

"Dare not bring my name on your filthy tongue you... " she stopped midway.

He rose a brow smiling mockingly all the time. Zoya felt her already red cheeks burning with anger.

"How dare you Ayan? How dare you think so low about me?" She yelled through her teeth.

"My plan seems to work... That intercom was deliberately kept aside so that you know my intentions for you..."

"Hell with your intentions...I am telling you..."

HE cut her in between.

"Relax honey..its no big deal... You are living in the 21st century... it is pretty normal."

"21st century or not what makes you think you can play with a girls self-respect and dignity like that?" The lioness inside her roared.

"Oh please merey pe ye dignity aur self-respect ke lectures mat jharo... they don't do me any good... One night stand and your life changes..." He said as if trying to solve her greatest problems.

"Mr. Ayan Khan stay in your limits..." She yelled again equally furiously. Her face was dripping aggression.

"Limits hun?... you of all the people very well know my philosophies Zoya... It's a Man's World. I being one can do whatever I feel like, what you call using a girl I call it having fun... despite I know how desperately you need money at this time. Just one nihgt can change your whole life... From Chief Head Designer to the CEO. You will have this world under your feet."

"Shut this bullshit of your's Ayan...you..." She forced herself to stop saying those filthy words for him.

"Ruk ku gai?... I really don't mind. Call me a son of a bitch a chauvinist pig anything."

"You have no right to exploit others through your dirty doings. Why are you forgetting only a few years back you were nothing... Meray designs ne tumhe market mein naam dia... meray hardwork pet um ayashi karte phir rahe ho... meray din raat ne tumhe zameen se asmaan pe la kar bitha dia aura b tum mujh se aisi giri hui baatien kar sakte ho? Kon mane ga? You want to harass me right? But remember mein bhi 21st century ki llarki hun... I will burn this company to ashes befor you even toch me. I will bring you on streets for doing this to me... You wont be spared Ayan you wont be spared I tell you!"

"Enough!" He yelled. "I don't owe you a penny you have done everything for a price... Tonight sharp 8, Galaxy Hotel be there or prepare your stay in hell. Remember you cant challenge me... I can go to any extents to harm you." He threatened.

She gaped at him in utter disbelief. The being in front of him was so not a human being. He was a leech a parasite who wanted to enjoy life on the expense of infuriating others. He sat down again like a monster, a merciless monster, a serpent whose venom was stinging her whole existence.

He enjoyed the helpless and defeated look on her face. All he knew was Man is not made for defeat.' Then who is? He always used to wonder. Women of course.' Was what he could summon with that ever evil laugh drowning every other voice in the world.

For Ayan every beautiful girl was a challenge and Zoya was the biggest of them. He could never accept defeat from her. Never. He smirked his usual mocking smile plastered on his ugly existence.

She shook her head. This was so not happening.

"Over my dead body." She quoted and stormed out of the room in tears.



Precap:- "Crying aint gonna help?" She heard a voice and snapped out of her thoughts. Her gaze was directed towards the source of the voice. She was a little startled to find someone sitting right next to her and she being so oblivious to that.

HE looked at her very intently before continuing, "They will only block your vision furthermore."

She smiled sacristy and shook her head.

"Crying aint gonna help hun?... then what is?...

Edited by LazyLad - 11 years ago
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For those who read do let me know your reviews!🤔
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i'm first
i like u r story😃
nice😃
continue soon
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interesting start
hate ayaan
plz cont soon n pm me
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I liked ur story plzzz update soon and do pm me next part
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Imteresting ...continue soon 😃
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its reallyyy goood... continue sooon...
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this is a great concept, plzx do pm the further parts
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Originally posted by: Diviya27

i'm first

i like u r story😃
nice😃
continue soon

yayyy! thanks!😳

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