AsYA FF Jeenay Laga Hoon (New) Chap 4 pg19 updated 27/11

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Suri

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Posted: 11 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: NAVI55
Hi...Just came across this now...It seems very interesting😃 I always like to read somthing new...

So zoya is a single mum...Hmmm...I'm wondering howcome??? Her boss ayaan is a slime😡

Who was that stranger on the bench??? And where is your story set, India or new york???

So many questions, i'm sure you'll answer them all😉

Your writing is superb👍🏼 I'm looking forward to reading this...Thank you for adding the english translations, i'm not very good with hindi/urdu...

Only 3 more posts more for you to become a groupie, Then you can pm😉 Would love to recieve pms from you...

Thank you for sharing your FF🤗

Love you! sure i will love to have you on my reader list! can i know your name plz? becoming a groupbie on your post!😳

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Suri

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Posted: 11 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: JULIEL
Nice update.

thnku!😃

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Suri

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Posted: 11 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: hottytotty
lovely

thnksss😃

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Suri

@BlackJack.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: NAVI55
Hi...Just came across this now...It seems very interesting😃 I always like to read somthing new...

So zoya is a single mum...Hmmm...I'm wondering howcome??? Her boss ayaan is a slime😡

Who was that stranger on the bench??? And where is your story set, India or new york???

So many questions, i'm sure you'll answer them all😉

Your writing is superb👍🏼 I'm looking forward to reading this...Thank you for adding the english translations, i'm not very good with hindi/urdu...

Only 3 more posts more for you to become a groupie, Then you can pm😉 Would love to recieve pms from you...

Thank you for sharing your FF🤗

for now in INd and soon in NY!

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Archana

@mysticlover

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Posted: 11 years ago

#45

Ayaan is such a creep!! Douche bag!!
Adil is Zoya's son... love the name Adil...
The guy who involuntarily helped out Zoya is Asad??
I loved this story... please pm me whenever you update... :)

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Linsie

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Posted: 11 years ago

#46

Chapter 1...
Ayaan try to have zoya... hmmm
she is not giving in..

Zoya need the money... ayaan using her weakness...
to get her... so cruel

She shook her head. This was so not happening.

"Over my dead body." She quoted and stormed out of the room in tears. 👏 👏

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Linsie

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Posted: 11 years ago

#47

"Crying aint gonna help?" 👏

"They will only block your vision furthermore." 👏 👍🏼

"You will be even more weak once you start 👏considering yourself one... life can never lock all doors on us. You can always turn the tables." 👏

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Linsie

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Posted: 11 years ago

#48

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Linsie

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Posted: 11 years ago

#49

Chapter 2..

Zoya got defeted .. think not going get her
life back...

well there is still hope... she can work against it...

now how she is going to do that...

waiting for the next update...