AsYa FS: Real love stories never have endings - last part up! - Page 10

Originally posted by: MisZoobieDoobie

Ok

Can i just say i LOVED LOVED LOVED the last part !

It was amazing i love the quotes that you have used

And the way you have written it down .Wow

Yeah atif was a chapter in zoe's life her real love lies in asad 😳

You write so well ya ! <3

I loved this OS :D

And surely you got to write more now !

I just love your writing girl :D <3

Originally posted by: MisHumptyDumpty

*snfiff sniff* it was soo daamm ggoooddd simmii ❤️

Originally posted by: -SB-

Ohhh...This was the last part already!!

*sniff sniff* ... how could you do this

Ok Ok you can its your story 😆

the update was awesome , fantastic n lovely😳

Originally posted by: sarbrathan

Wow. 👏 Beautifully written (especially the ending). I watched City of Bones, should I read the books? Do they commit incest?

Originally posted by: McdreamyKSG

This was so good👏...and now I am sad...why did it end??😭

But really this was probably my favorite part...each and every sentence...the little details...were BANG ON!👏⭐️

Dilshad Khan had engulfed her into her arms and for the first time in ten years, Zoya had felt the warmth of a mother's touch. She could hardly contain herself and had been reduced to a blubbering mess. She had instantly blamed the pregnancy hormones.

Lines like the ones above show what an amazing writer you are👍🏼...you have cleverly incorporated compassion, love and a bit of humour in it ...which is great!

"Are you sure? I mean, I can wait. I-"

And here my heart went out for Asad...poor guy!...he was literally waiting for this moment to arrive❤️...

But now, she felt the need for him to know the real her. Previously, Asad had known that she worked as a freelance photographer but now he learned about Zoya's love and passion for photography. Earlier, he had known about her parents' death and about husband's tragic fire accident, but now, he held her and soothed her as she cried while telling him about her life before she had met him.

I loved these lines too.❤️...It gives the reader a very clear Idea of the bond Zoya has formed with Asad as compared to what she started out with...and how it is going strong!👏

and he walked over to where she sat. Kneeling before her

Hayye! 'kneeling'...trust me I love the whole 'Guy on one knee' concept...*Fangirling*😳

"The future was always more important from the past"

Okay so this was a really impactful line...It explains what Zoya feels as she moves ahead in life...Bravo!👍🏼

And then comes my Fav lines-❤️

Renee was Atif's last gift to her, and it had led her to Asad. Atif would always be with them. In memory, in heart and in Renee. He had been her guardian angel, just not her soul mate. With Asad was her real love story

And, Real love stories never have endings.

These gave me goosebumps, really!❤️ Amazing ending to a beautiful story! Take a Bow...you wrote it really really well!😃

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Okay so this was my viewpoint...I loved your story and looking forward to more such stories from you...only this time Keep it long😉...Really Really long...I am greedy that way!😆

PS. I love the nam you decided for Zoya's daughter...the meaning it holds is so apt for this story and Zoya's journey!😃

Originally posted by: NAVI55

Sniff...Sniff...Sniff...Did this have to end???😭

This was so beautifully written👍🏼 A standing ovation to you👏

This was an inspirational story and i loved everyword that you penned.

I'm actually following all your stories and hope that you write more😃

You are a brilliant writer👍🏼

Originally posted by: love_kash

firstly sorry for not commenting earlier. was on vacation and caught up with the story just yesterday.
it was so good.i have always loved your stories.all the happy and beautiful moments in it used to fill me with positive energy.but you don't always need to read stories which make you feel happy...there should be some which makes you think about life,relationships.and this one was such story.
in some way it reminded me of p.s i love you.
the way you portrayed asad and zoya's relationship,asad's love and support,zoya's dilemma...it was all just beautiful.

Originally posted by: Zanutix

I fell in love with this FS with the first part itself!

You actually managed to potray the battles one has with his/her inner self, which is not at all an easy task to achieve.

The intricate emotions were beautifully expressed!

You are an AMAZING writer!
Keep up the good work! 😎

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