AsYa FS: Real love stories never have endings - last part up! - Page 9

Dilshad Khan had engulfed her into her arms and for the first time in ten years, Zoya had felt the warmth of a mother's touch. She could hardly contain herself and had been reduced to a blubbering mess. She had instantly blamed the pregnancy hormones.

Lines like the ones above show what an amazing writer you are👍🏼...you have cleverly incorporated compassion, love and a bit of humour in it ...which is great!

"Are you sure? I mean, I can wait. I-"

And here my heart went out for Asad...poor guy!...he was literally waiting for this moment to arrive❤️...

But now, she felt the need for him to know the real her. Previously, Asad had known that she worked as a freelance photographer but now he learned about Zoya's love and passion for photography. Earlier, he had known about her parents' death and about husband's tragic fire accident, but now, he held her and soothed her as she cried while telling him about her life before she had met him.

I loved these lines too.❤️...It gives the reader a very clear Idea of the bond Zoya has formed with Asad as compared to what she started out with...and how it is going strong!👏

and he walked over to where she sat. Kneeling before her

Hayye! 'kneeling'...trust me I love the whole 'Guy on one knee' concept...*Fangirling*😳

"The future was always more important from the past"

And then comes my Fav lines-❤️

Renee was Atif's last gift to her, and it had led her to Asad. Atif would always be with them. In memory, in heart and in Renee. He had been her guardian angel, just not her soul mate. With Asad was her real love story

And, Real love stories never have endings.