AsYa FS: Real love stories never have endings - last part up! - Page 7

Originally posted by: McdreamyKSG

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Okay...The tiltle...It's so awesome👍🏼...automatically holds your attention...

Loved the prologue...very very well and beautifully written😃...

Asad's a doc...how I love doctor stories!.😊...And Asad was disappointed when Zoya told him that she was preganant...Loved that!😊

Honestly, why can't the hospitals make this part of the whole deal less humiliating?😆

"Oh. I take it that the baby was not planned."

Zoya snorted, "Understatement."

Wohooo! The first chapter was AMAZING!!👏

Coming to the second chapter..

"Take care, Zoya. Maybe your family will help you. You won't be all alone."

Without turning back she replied, "I don't have any, Dr. Khan."

Aww poor Zoe..😭

But why did his mind kept chanting her name? Zoya, Zoya, Zoya Zoya Zoya...

Coz you are in LOVE dumbo!😳

Why did her thoughts keep going back to him? She had bigger things to worry about that her infatuation with the doctor!...

Hahaa...lovely this was!😃

Zoya's body had gone numb. Words like "loose wires" "only person inside" "identify the body" registered her mind. Her world was reeling. The world around her titled and shifted angles. She could hear someone calling her name. Everything seemed to be fading.

Great writing...loved these lines!👏

And then the third chapter...

Yayyy Asad- Zoya meet!

you probably though I was homeless!" ..😆..

And our confident Asad becomes a stammering loverboy in front of Zoya! Love it...😆

I beg...PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!😃

This was a great story and even if you are writing such a thing for the first time...you were great!👏

And SORRY for boring you with such a long comment...I just felt like!😳

And did I tell you...you are one of my fav writers out here!

Keep writing!❤️

Originally posted by: nityasuresh93

Awww... Very sweet story.. Love it.. Zoya talking to her baby was very cute.. Asad zoya scenes were very nice.. I also liked Zoya's dead husband's and her love story.. Adorable.. Waiting for the next update..

Originally posted by: MisZoobieDoobie

Awww that was a sweet update !

Zoe declined :(

I hope she accepts it the next time 😆

Lovely story .Continue soon :D

Originally posted by: rajnid68

Very very beautifully penned...

Hope both come out of their inhibitions...

Waiting for the next update. ...

Thanks for the pm ...

Touchwood ...for your creativity. .