FAASLE IV: END/EPILOGUE Pg 130 Nov 30 - Page 80

Originally posted by: webuser7

Ha! Ha! Shona is back in action!! Time zone wins yet again!!

Res for comments!

Unres

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First special note for my Narges bachha: Thank you darling for the PM! Yeah, yeah, I know what you are implying with the unsaid: Mom's busy and works too hard! Kya kare paapi peth ka sawaal hai! Took two days to unres!! So our family lost the 1st seat. It's OK. It's our very own buddy Shona/Tamatar!! 🤗

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Sangeeta, sorry for the late unres!! You know I went shopping for boots! Got 4 pairs!! I'll PM you the part two of the story later!! 😆

Finally, coming to the main reason for this comment.

What a brilliant chapter!! It was naughty, romantic, sensuous and sweet! Just purrrfect!! 😃

Zoya, dressed in the pretty red chiffon saree, sleeveless and backless blouse, a beautiful necklace, gold bracelets, bangles, nose ring and a golden belly chain (kamarband) took Asad's breath away as he descended the stairs in his black suit and red tie.

Enraptured, Asad asked jaana jaruri hai kya!! So I guessed right after the last update:"Bet that's one party he'd love to miss!!"" Dulhan and Dulha missing the Valima would have created kaafi tamasha!

The scar scene was very poignant! Zoya stammering "wo ... wo... " was so cute! For a second I thought she was going to say woh actually!

Zoya's love speech was so cute and romantic. It was fabulous!😆 She has come a long way from being the spoilt bat .

Asad's "jitna bhulaana chaaha utna tum mere khayalon mein aati rahi-----jitna door jaana chaaha, utna kareeb aati gayi. " was another aww moment!!

Cut to the Valima ...

Asad was shocked to see the gathering, "ammi, itne log? Mujhey nahin pata tha hum itne logon ko jaante hain?" Ha! Ha!

Karan Wahi got another scene!! His lucky day! 😆

"Mrs. Zoya Khan is right Najma," Asad replied with a semi-serious expression, "agar yeh na ho tho hamari life sach much bahut dull and boring ho jaaye. I am not romantic at all. Saare initiative Mrs. Khan hi leti hain."

"Achcha, India bhaag kar kaun aaya tha?"

"Pehla kiss kis ne diya tha?" He retorted.

"Oh really?" Zoya elbowed him playfully, "ab dekhte hain kaun initiative leta hai. We all know who has just been talking these past few weeks. Action tho door ki baat hai."

Oye hoye! Open challenge!!

After Valima: did Zoya know of the shortcut in advance? Was it planned or not??

Mirchi icecream again!! Yummy!

Frustrated Ahmed Khan is ready to take out anyone in his path!

What fun Mrs Khan? We are stuck in a bl**dy car! I had prepared our room so perfectly for us."

Aww, poor baby.funny think is that she wanted a perfect Nikaah and he wanted the perfect SR! Both got variations!!

"Yeah right! You think they will have a spar tire sitting at home?"

🤣

Asad was being funny!!

Aah! The perfect BNHH setting! Without the bhaang ke pakoode! They didn't need it!!

Lovely background song!! Lovely setting:

As he stood behind Zoya, his wet shirt acted as a thin veil between her bare back and his chest. A gentle shiver ran down her spine as she felt his warmth against her skin. Swiftly, she turned around and gazed at him lovingly. A faint streetlight streamed its way through the broken window. His face glimmered with the drops of rain; wet hair stuck to his forehead---he took her breath away for a few seconds.

Your writing takes my breath away. Beautifully said! 👏

Mr. Khan and SR on dusty bed!! Now I have seen it all!!😆 Divine plot!!

Mrs. Khan had arrived, legally, officially, spiritually and bodily.

Yes! Finally Zoya called him Asad!! The SR was beautifully portrayed!! Well done!! ☺️

I loved how you brought the water element into it! That was amazing!!

"What should we do now?" She groaned and rested her head on his chest.

" We can't do anything till the rain stops. How about an encore?" He rolled over and pulled the dusty bed sheet over them, "we can't always control our lives, can we? So might as well have fun!"

Encore? Horny much Mr. Khan?!

we can't always control our lives, can we? So might as well have fun!"

How true for all of us! 😉

Once again, a brilliantly written, romantic and sensual update! Bravo!!

Originally posted by: ..vidhi..

hello diii!!!
hw r u??
m really very sorry I haven't been able to comment due to this stupid college nd my exams r cuming too...ab login kiya to yaha comment na karu esa ho hi ni sakta lol
update is as usual awesome...loved loved it!!!
waiting fr the next part...cont soon...

Originally posted by: jeenia123

MG...The best romantic night.that too in a dusty room...but you know my dirty mind is thinking...their clothes are flowing in water.how will they go home??????😉

Originally posted by: Annu..

Valimey ki dulhan sleeveless backless blouse mein?? 🤔 check out Atif Aslam's valima pic.. although his family is so modern but still bride is looking so traditional and classy on the occasion..

http://i.imgur.com/oN61z66.jpg

and why Asad had to say to her that as long as you stay next to me.. its obvious, bride has to stay/sit next to the groom the whole time..

I found the entire rain sequence very filmi and forced.. since when valimey ke dulha-dulhan themselves go the caterer for the payment right after the reception.. where does it happen?? and the way they get stuck in the rain.. typical Balaji stuff.. rain sequence could have been done on their home terrace too.. kam az kam realistic toh lagta..

Originally posted by: rogerrocks

Sangeetha di, please don stop writing..I just read your post I don post on the forum cos i stopped watching but i love this FF I couldn't read a few chapters in between but i caught up with it yesterday night..Trust me, you are awesome..This is the only FF i read apart from Palygirl's mysteries😆 So please please don stop writing

Originally posted by: sona_naksh

plzzz dont end d ff sangeeta ...as an individual i respect ur decision ...but plzzz reconsider it ...

Originally posted by: fanraya

Sangeeta, I am truly going to miss your amazing writing😕, you are really gifted, 👍🏼and I can not tell you how much I enjoyed your stories and posts, reviews. You are awesome, one of the best writers here. Gosh what will I do without your stories. My suggestion take a break and come back again. Please let us know if you write any stories, I just LOVE them, and 'd love to read them.. Lots of Luv and wishes..

Originally posted by: mariya_a

I'm so upset your leaving and I will miss ur posts and ffs
Please put kids at the epilogue I would love this ff to finish this way
:((
Thank you for an amazing story
Xx

Originally posted by: Sana70

Awesome!! Just brilliant,you are a wonderful writer Sangeeta 👏⭐️ The scar scene is so beautifully written.👍🏼

I respect your decision but this is my humble request to you...Plzzz dear don't leave.