FAASLE IV: END/EPILOGUE Pg 130 Nov 30 - Page 78

Originally posted by: Annu..

Valimey ki dulhan sleeveless backless blouse mein?? 🤔 check out Atif Aslam's valima pic.. although his family is so modern but still bride is looking so traditional and classy on the occasion..

http://i.imgur.com/oN61z66.jpg

and why Asad had to say to her that as long as you stay next to me.. its obvious, bride has to stay/sit next to the groom the whole time..

I found the entire rain sequence very filmi and forced.. since when valimey ke dulha-dulhan themselves go the caterer for the payment right after the reception.. where does it happen?? and the way they get stuck in the rain.. typical Balaji stuff.. rain sequence could have been done on their home terrace too.. kam az kam realistic toh lagta..

Originally posted by: anushreemishra

I didn't want to but i had to ask do you like anything in Faasle?because everytime i read your comment you are upset or not satisfied with something😕I mean yes healthy criticizm is good but from the looks of it i find that you don't like anything about Faasle and most people who don't like anything about something like to keep away from that thing.I am sorry if i am sounding rude it is just that Faasle is too close to my heart and i just want to know that if you indeed like something about Fassle why don't you appreciate it ever along with criticizing,appreciation is always very inspiring for a writer nd if you don't like anything about Faasle then why read at all?😕

the way people love watching their favorite actors movies bcoz they have to but end up not liking it doesn't mean that they should have left the theatre mid way if they were not liking that movie.. I read Faasle bcoz I love reading Bheegi's fanfics.. if I say I m not liking the story or certain things that's my personal opinion.. I have every right to say to the writer that I m reading it but not with great interest.. nothing wrong in it, in my eyes at least.. I m not her new reader.. as a fanfic writer, I know Bheegi more than you coz I have read many old ffs of her in the past so have a very fair idea abt her good writing skills.. I used to write lengthy comments in couple of ffs of her too where I just argued with her over any lil thing and she had always encouraged me a lot too.. and bcoz I am not liking this story that much that's why I did not comment here the way I did in the past.. main ne toh bhooley bhattke se hi kabhi kuch kaha hai yahan.. moreover if I like any fanfic of any writer be it Bheegi, Pallavi, Vamita, Anisha (all AK/KYPH writers) I don't praise my writers for their writing in my comments.. mujhe ye sab kehna nahin aata.. I like to question and have a debate with them and they are quite okay with it too.. and do I like anything in Faasle.. yes I do.. Ayaan's character.. but as I hardly said anything abt the story so talking abt Ayaan only makes no sense..

http://www.pinkvilla.com/files/imagecache/ImageFull/images/kareena1_10.jpg

and since you mentioned how Atif's wife dressed on her valima i attached a link to the dress that Kareena kappor changed for the dinner after her nikaah.It is a sleeve less blouse and from the looks of it i don't think the back will be much covered either.Maybe sangeeta di imagined Kareena while deciding zoya's dress and not atif's wife nd well i think most of will prefer it that way.

Also i don't know if you follow QH or not but zoya wore a jeans under her wedding dress so well a sleeveless and backless blouse isn't odd for her character.

Yess its only for the dinner but on her nikaah and valima main receptions she wore some traditional gharara and lehenga.. check out the pics of both the occasions..

http://i.imgur.com/h4GQQaZ.jpg

http://i.imgur.com/izRpPtl.jpg

so even a modern woman like Kareena didn't wear sleeveless backless blouse on that occasions.. if I remember correctly once Bheegi told me that Asad (of Faasle) is a very RELIGIOUS and righteous muslim.. does a religious and righteous muslim make his wife wear a sleeveless backless blouse in her own valima.. definitely NOT! it looks weird.. other occasions per koi is tarha ke blouses pehne, okay hai but apne hi Valima mein koi upper mid class family ki ladki/bahu (like Zoya of Faasle) nahin pehenti.. personal observation since childhood.. I never saw a hindu bride wearing that kind of revealing blouse on her wedding and taking 7 pheres in any serial/movie.. even if you wear a sari, it should look traditional and not sexy.. toh bas Valima reception mein bhi kuch aisi hi baat hai..

Also the consummation set up is alos related to QH...QH had an epic BNHH scene and di was trying to recreate that and i think she did excellent.

now that's ur opinion and I respect it too but I didn't like it.. this is Faasle and not QH.. so why anything should be related to QH in the first place.. and getting stuck in the rain is not romantic in my eyes.. aur agar mujhe aik cheez pasand nahin aayi toh main jhoot kyun boloon Bheegi se ke I liked it too..😕 its not like I come over here after reading each part and criticizing everything right left and center..

About all of this seeming too filmy and unrealistic there is reason why it is a FF-Fan Fiction.

It is a fiction it isn't supposed to be realistic after all none of this will actually happen in real life and i think we all read such stuff with awe because we want to live that filmy dream escaping from reality.

If you ever watched any Pakistani serials like Zindagi Gulzar Hai, Daam and few others.. all of them are piece of fiction but at the same time they are so close to reality.. is liye ye kehna ke fiction isn't supposed to be realistic is not true.. aik writer ka yehi toh kamaal hai ke wo fiction ko aise likhe ke uss per haqeeqat ka gumaan ho.. read Bheegi's To Err is Human (her best work till date, IMO).. where you'll feel like you are reading someone's diary and not a fiction.. aur rahi baat ke we all read such stuff to escape from reality.. no, not in my case at least.. I do it for time passing but while reading any fiction this question should not pop up in my mind that where on earth does it happen??

Again no offence intended.I just wanted to say something that i felt and i am sorry if i had hurt you.😃

u made me feel bad as if I did something wrong.. chalo koi baat nahin..

Originally posted by: rachnaraju

Finally u updated di... was waiting from the past 3 days.

Well coming to the update...OMG ..brilliant brilliant brilliant.I guess writing stories is a talent u were born with...Everyone gets thoughts and ideas...even i do..but expressing them is the most important part of the whole process(which i cant do) but u can execute this brilliantly...SIMPLY VISIBLE IN YOUR WORK...👏

Well,back to the update...i simply loved it..asad being possessive and following zoya everywhere was the best part 😆😆 🤣.

I cant believe asad said such naughty stuff to karan .

And its so true that asad is a man of action .

I know that this was a very challenging part to write...and u didnt want it to look so explicit...but dont worry everything seemed so pure to me...😊

Originally posted by: Oldestfan

That was beautiful. Finally! Loved the scene reminiscent of bnhh.

Originally posted by: manognasai

Amazing update Sangeeta di...🤗
Loved it a lot!
We cant always control our lives...Can we?so might as well have fun😃
AsYa's convo before walima is heart touching!
Their walima is filled with relatives and guests for whom Zoya always craved for😃
Zoya-No actions only words,Asad-No words only actions😉
So again they are stuck in rain...!😳
Loved the way he said thank allah we have three-fourths of water so we can always find love somwhere on this planet!😊
Waiting for next part😃