FAASLE IV: END/EPILOGUE Pg 130 Nov 30 - Page 82

Originally posted by: bheegi

Hi Subhi, Deepa...

On everyone's request, I have decided to continue the ff as i had planned...(3-4 more parts)

look forward to Honeymoon, pregnancy, kids part in next few weeks...

As Zoya said: mohabbat se sab faasle door ho jaate hain

Originally posted by: bheegi

Hi Subhi, Deepa...

On everyone's request, I have decided to continue the ff as i had planned...(3-4 more parts)

look forward to Honeymoon, pregnancy, kids part in next few weeks...

As Zoya said: mohabbat se sab faasle door ho jaate hain

FAASLE, for me has been a beautiful novel, which I read from chapter one to 49^th in one take and when it ended the single line came in my mind "ARE ITNI JALDI KATM HO GAYA"

All I can say it was amazing reading "faasle"

I loved it from the core of my heart. What an amazing journey of love, with each phase explaining different stages of love.

Journey from Newyork to Istabul my favorite, was indeed the journey of love which started from dislike.I could visualize the journey of ASAD ZOYA and progress in their relationship. (IMO, that's the beauty of an amazing writer.)

ALMOST MITWA ISHQ PE JOR NAHI WAY.

Now circumstances come between the love.

Asad leaving Zoya at airport touched my heart.

FINALLY PYAR THO HO GAYA KOI MANE YA NA MANE!

Now starts a new journey ,for ZOYAit is to win her love and for ASAD it was a battle between heart and mind.

Here our ZOYA comes to INDIA...

LE MAIN TERE WAASTE JAG CHHOD KE AA GAYI

Zoya finally in KV.

LOVED interactions between all three ladies of khan Vila.

And here comes our AAK.

Beatifully written di,I loved the inner turmoil of ASAD."SHIKWE BHI BAHUT HAIN,SHIKAYAT BHI BAHUT HAI,IS DIL KO MAGAR UNSE MOHHABAT BHI BAHUT HAI"

Eid celebration and asad saving zoya touched my heart.

AND HOW TO FORGET THEIR FIRST KISS.

AND U TURN by ASAD having known zoya is zoya shiddiqui.

What an emotional roller coaster !

AMAZING...

Dilshad hospital scene was very touchy specially when zoya signs on the document as her DIL.

Here ASAD accepts zoya,in influence of ARJUN and here Dilshad throws ZOYA out.

DUSHMAN KI BETI HAI,DUSHMAN TO NAHI-KAB SE YE DIALOGUE SUNNA CHATI HOON SHOW ME

HERE COMES MOQADDAR KA FAISLA-

ASAD is supposedly killed and zoya goes to ART HOUSE,unconsciously guided by ASAD.

AND NEW PHASE OF JOURNY STARTS

Time has come where love will have to fight with the world,

FAASLON KE MITNE KI SURUAT...

LOVED ZOYA RASHID CONNECTION,ZOYA AYAN HUMAIRA FARHAAN ANGLE WAS TOUCHY..

AND HERE COMES...5 YEAR ...LEAP IN FAASLESo FARHAAN calls zoya ammi!

ZOR KA JHATKA DHEERE SE!

Here we come to know that AAK is alive waise I knew ki wo marega nahi ,and ZOYA KA JABARDAST VISHWAS! No chance of death...

And AAK ON A MISSION AGAINST RASHID...So time has come to check realities MR.khan ..amazing...

ZOYA KA TAAJMAHAL AND FLASHBACKS WITH MUMBAI DARSHAN TOUCHED MY HEART.

(MAR GAYE HUM KHULI RAHI AANKHEN,YE MERE INTZAAR KI HAD THI)

Finally they met...wow what a masterpiece I must say

MR.AAK thinks that she is ZOYA AYAAN KHAN NOW...

"AAPKE LIYE MAIN KABHI ZOYA FARUQUI ,KABHI ZOYA SHIDDHIQUI,KABHI ZOYA AYAN KHAN HUN,KABHI SIRF ZOYA KYON NAHI MR. KHAN?" I got emotional indeed.

Reunion was epic,loved their romance bunter everything.

Bomb explosion in car reminded me Mangalpur,but aapke story me Mangalpur Ki koi kami nahin hai.

Loved ZOYA and Khan family reunion...

AAPKI Shirin bhi show wali shirin se kam nahi hai di,

ZOYAAN MARRIAGE TALKS ARE GOING ON ,

But bigger picture of zoyaan track touched me.It was a reality check for both ASAD and ZOYA,and ultimately leads towards RD(OLD IS GOLD LOVE)

Liked DILSHAD RASHID interaction.

AYAN DILSHAD interaction was intresting too.

Finally zoya helps asad and he gets the secrets of office of RASHID

Very logically writeen.

ASAD AYAN FIGHTING and AYAN REALISES THAT ASAD IS HIS BROTHER,COMPLETELY ACTION DRAMA EMOTION PACKED CHAPTER

OMG! Rashid dies!sad but it was needed,glad that he could unite his family at the last moment of life.

HERE COMES THE CLIMAX -SAARE FAASLE MIT GAYE GAFOOR REDEEMED,AYAN REDEEMED ,BUT AAP NE USE MAAR KYON DIYA?

For all these I can just say-

"life is the best teacher but it teaches in very cruel way"

LOVED HOSPITAL WALA NIKAH,I AM MOVING FAST BUT COMMENT BAHUT LAMBA HO GAYA...

ALL I CAN SAY LOVED FAASLE FROM MY HEART,

HATES OFF TO U , FOR WRITING SR UPDATE IN SUCH A DIGNIFIED WAY...

LOVE YOU DI,

Originally posted by: bheegi

Thanks sana...don't worry, I will continue to write stories. Maybe on the fanfiction forum though. Will let you all know😊

Originally posted by: abhi.sweet

FAASLE, for me has been a beautiful novel, which I read from chapter one to 49^th in one take and when it ended the single line came in my mind "ARE ITNI JALDI KATM HO GAYA"

thanks a ton Abhi. I know you must be very busy at college...but u took out the time to read this story means a lot to me

All I can say it was amazing reading "faasle" thanks again

I loved it from the core of my heart. What an amazing journey of love, with each phase explaining different stages of love.

Journey from Newyork to Istabul my favorite, was indeed the journey of love which started from dislike.I could visualize the journey of ASAD ZOYA and progress in their relationship. (IMO, that's the beauty of an amazing writer.)

ALMOST MITWA ISHQ PE JOR NAHI WAY.

Now circumstances come between the love.

Asad leaving Zoya at airport touched my heart.

FINALLY PYAR THO HO GAYA KOI MANE YA NA MANE!

Now starts a new journey ,for ZOYAit is to win her love and for ASAD it was a battle between heart and mind.

Here our ZOYA comes to INDIA...

LE MAIN TERE WAASTE JAG CHHOD KE AA GAYI

Zoya finally in KV.

LOVED interactions between all three ladies of khan Vila.

And here comes our AAK.

Beatifully written di,I loved the inner turmoil of ASAD."SHIKWE BHI BAHUT HAIN,SHIKAYAT BHI BAHUT HAI,IS DIL KO MAGAR UNSE MOHHABAT BHI BAHUT HAI"

have i told u before...i love the way you quote ghazals and shayari in your post👏

Eid celebration and asad saving zoya touched my heart.

AND HOW TO FORGET THEIR FIRST KISS.

AND U TURN by ASAD having known zoya is zoya shiddiqui.

What an emotional roller coaster !

AMAZING...

Dilshad hospital scene was very touchy specially when zoya signs on the document as her DIL.

Here ASAD accepts zoya,in influence of ARJUN and here Dilshad throws ZOYA out.

DUSHMAN KI BETI HAI,DUSHMAN TO NAHI-KAB SE YE DIALOGUE SUNNA CHATI HOON SHOW ME

HERE COMES MOQADDAR KA FAISLA-

ASAD is supposedly killed and zoya goes to ART HOUSE,unconsciously guided by ASAD.

AND NEW PHASE OF JOURNY STARTS

Time has come where love will have to fight with the world,

FAASLON KE MITNE KI SURUAT...

LOVED ZOYA RASHID CONNECTION,ZOYA AYAN HUMAIRA FARHAAN ANGLE WAS TOUCHY..

AND HERE COMES...5 YEAR ...LEAP IN FAASLESo FARHAAN calls zoya ammi!

ZOR KA JHATKA DHEERE SE!

Here we come to know that AAK is alive waise I knew ki wo marega nahi ,and ZOYA KA JABARDAST VISHWAS! No chance of death...

And AAK ON A MISSION AGAINST RASHID...So time has come to check realities MR.khan ..amazing...

ZOYA KA TAAJMAHAL AND FLASHBACKS WITH MUMBAI DARSHAN TOUCHED MY HEART.

(MAR GAYE HUM KHULI RAHI AANKHEN,YE MERE INTZAAR KI HAD THI)

Finally they met...wow what a masterpiece I must say

MR.AAK thinks that she is ZOYA AYAAN KHAN NOW...

"AAPKE LIYE MAIN KABHI ZOYA FARUQUI ,KABHI ZOYA SHIDDHIQUI,KABHI ZOYA AYAN KHAN HUN,KABHI SIRF ZOYA KYON NAHI MR. KHAN?" I got emotional indeed.

Reunion was epic,loved their romance bunter everything.

Bomb explosion in car reminded me Mangalpur,but aapke story me Mangalpur Ki koi kami nahin hai. Yes, i have too many mangalpurs in my story because all asya lovers can never forget mangalpur😆

Loved ZOYA and Khan family reunion...

AAPKI Shirin bhi show wali shirin se kam nahi hai di,

ZOYAAN MARRIAGE TALKS ARE GOING ON ,

But bigger picture of zoyaan track touched me.It was a reality check for both ASAD and ZOYA,and ultimately leads towards RD(OLD IS GOLD LOVE)

Liked DILSHAD RASHID interaction.

AYAN DILSHAD interaction was intresting too.

Finally zoya helps asad and he gets the secrets of office of RASHID

Very logically writeen.

ASAD AYAN FIGHTING and AYAN REALISES THAT ASAD IS HIS BROTHER,COMPLETELY ACTION DRAMA EMOTION PACKED CHAPTER

OMG! Rashid dies!sad but it was needed,glad that he could unite his family at the last moment of life.

HERE COMES THE CLIMAX -SAARE FAASLE MIT GAYE GAFOOR REDEEMED,AYAN REDEEMED ,BUT AAP NE USE MAAR KYON DIYA? Ayaan ko marnaa hi that...otherwise jail jaata and i didn't want him to find out that he was not really Rashid's son

For all these I can just say-

"life is the best teacher but it teaches in very cruel way"

LOVED HOSPITAL WALA NIKAH,I AM MOVING FAST BUT COMMENT BAHUT LAMBA HO GAYA...

ALL I CAN SAY LOVED FAASLE FROM MY HEART,

HATES OFF TO U , FOR WRITING SR UPDATE IN SUCH A DIGNIFIED WAY...

LOVE YOU DI,

shukriya once again...thanks for taking time from your busy schedule. I can't imagine I could have done that when I was at your stage lekin tab smart phones bhi nahin the😉