New ASYA FF 'HUMRAAH' Part 17 'LAST PART' ; UPDT ;NOV 28 ; Pg -90 - Page 15

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Posted: 11 years ago
IT WAS SHORT BUT GOOD I HOPE ASAD COMES BACK FOR HER PLEASE PM ME ONCE U UPDATE AND UPDATE SOON😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Linsie

Zoya is depress ... just came.. now the fight
so ugly ... now asad is in full blast..


Do not dare 2 take my name from ur dirty mouth 😡 😡...
I'll drop u back 2 ur parents house and free u from this forced marriage ... roared Asad .😡 😡

.. so scary from asad..

he really did reach his maximum

Sorry 2 all the readers for short and sad update ,,,, but the story has 2 move forward...
isn't it ? 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: princess101

IT WAS SHORT BUT GOOD I HOPE ASAD COMES BACK FOR HER PLEASE PM ME ONCE U UPDATE AND UPDATE SOON😃

😃 THANKS ... Surely... i'll PM . I Have added u in the buddy list .
Edited by delka - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: --Mahima--

oh no

this was a huge twist

update soon

😭

Smile 😃 i'll try and update soon 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
one short n second short update but very touchy .i think zoya should tell him about her insecurities rather then baffling on him i want asad to treat dr.kaali zubaan good to shut her mouth forever and should realize his mistake n take zoya back.u can even include him missing zoya presnce at home n so zoya should miss him.plz update soon n this time long one n also unite them soon.
u can use above things it would be a treat to read as i think.
thanx for the pm
update soon.

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: delka

Sorry 2 all the readers for short and sad update ,,,, but the story has 2 move forward...
isn't it ? 😊


but it is need to happen ... i hope asad did not mean it... sending zoya away...
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Posted: 11 years ago


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went is the next update ??
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Posted: 11 years ago
read all parts together...nice story 😊
update soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
DEDICATED TO ALL THE READERS WHO KIND OF EMOTIONALLY BLACKMAILED ME 2 UPDATE SOON AND THE FIRST NAME IN THE LIST IS LINSIE 😉 😆 👍🏼
PART 9 21 OCT 13
Zoya was standing outside her house nervous and cheerless . She somehow composed herself and gathered the courage 2 go inside the house . She rang the door bell and was excitedly greeted by Adeeba and ammi .They shrieked in joy on seeing Zoya all of a sudden .😃. Dr SIkander MIRZa was also pleasantly surprised by his little princess's visit when he came back home after work .
When the euphoria subsided ... they all asked about ASad . Zoya made vague xcuses and her lies were easily caught ... after all they were her parents .
Their suspicion was confirmed by Zoya's demeanour . Her red swollen eyes were telling them the other tale .They had also seen Zoya crying secretly in her room .Most importantly ... it was more than a day since Zoya arrived but Asad did'nt called even once .. They knew things were not hunky -dory in their daughter 's life so after lot of waiting ... they decided 2 ask Zoya directly .
Ammi , abbu and Adeeba all were in Zoya's room.
Ammi said ...beta hum samjh gaye hai ke tum bahut pareshaan ho .. humlogo ko nahi batao gi... ki baat kya hai ?
Zoya couldn't control herself after listening 2 her mother's words .She started crying like a small girl in her mother's arms . 😭
Adeeba ,, ammi , abbu all got emotional and cried with Zoya .😭
Dr Sikander finally asked Zoya ... beta ... kya Asad tumhe acche se nahi rakhta. tumhara khayal nahi karta .. tum kyun itni pareshaan ho ?
Ammi Shama asked if Asad physically or mentally abuses .. torture's her ?
Zoya was shocked with her parents queries . She patiently answered all their questions. she told them that Asad takes very good care of her. He is very loving and kind 2 her.
Toh kya koi financial problem hai .. asked a concerned abbu .
Nahi abbu ... Asad is very hard working .He gets a very handsome salary for his age and experience .. she also told them that Asad gives her full financial freedom and fullfills all her needs and desires .
Abhi tak tumne jo bhi baaten ASad bhai ke bare main batayi hai usse toh lagta hai ke Asad bhai bahut acche hain... said a confused ADEEba .
Par beta aakhir aisi kon si baat ho gayi ki Asad tumhe ghar pahucha ke chala gaya ? zaroor koi bahut badi baat hai . said ammi anxiously ... batao na beta ?
Zoya looked at her ammi and then glanced at her father but kept quiet .
Zoya's abbu understood that Zoya is hesitating 2 talk in front of him ... so he went outside citing some work .
When abbu left ... Zoya told her ammi all the truth about Dr kaali Zubaan .. her taunting words ... Cougar thing ... her insecurities... her fear of losing Asad ... her not letting Asad get physically closer ... everything .
Lekin Kya Asad ne kabhi tumse Age difference wali baat kahi ya kuch aur .? ... asked a disturbed ammi .
Nahi Ammi ...kabhi nahi ... replied Zoya
Toh tumne sirf us pagal , manhoos kaali zubaan ki baaton main aake apna ghar barbad kar diya ? asked ammi sorrowfully .🤢
Ammi please mujhe maaf kar dijiye ... said a weeping Zoya
AApi tumhe Ammi se nahi Asad bhai se maafi mangni chahiye .. said Adeeba .
Ammi Shama went 2 abbu Sikander and told that according 2 her opinion its Zoya 's fault .
Dr Sikander told that whoever's fault it is ... they should immediately go to the KHAN HOUSE and try 2 solve this matter as soon as possible for Zoya's happiness .
KHAN HOUSE
Zoya along with her parents and Adeeba went 2 her in -laws house ..
They were utterly surprised 2 see Zoya ..
ARRE !!!! ZOYA beta tum !!!! Tum kab aai ? mamma Rehana asked 😲
AUR Asad kaha hai ? asked papa FAIZ
Asad kaha hai ? Aap ye kyun puuch rahe hai ... asked a shocked Dr Sikander ... kal hi toh Asad ne Zoya ko ghar par pahuchya tha ..
Asad BHOPAL aaya tha ? asked Rehana...who was completely shocked with the news .
AAP log kaisi baat kar rahe hain ... please mazak mat kijiye ... hum sab pahle se hi bahut pareshhan hain ... pleaded Ammi Shama.
hum sab bilkul sach kah rahe hain ...Asad ghar nahi aaya ... said Faiz sahab ... par baat kya ? ...
ASAD Bhopal aaya ... par ghar nahi aaya toh ... gaya kaha ? asked maamma Rehana ... Ya ALLAH ! mere bacche ki hifazat karna ... prayed Rehana ..
Zoya was listening to all the conversation quietly ... started crying bitterly and kept saying repeatedly ...sab meri ghalti hai ... sab meri ghalti hai ..
Ammi shama xplained 2 them about the situation and the entire scenario ..
DADAJAAN who was listening 2 all the discussions calmly said ...Mere khayal se Asad
MANGALPUR main hai .!!
MANGALPUR may..? .!... asked a shocked FAIZ ... abbajaan Kya ASad ne aap se kaha hai?
Nahi ...par ... kal raat jab main Asad se BAAT kar raha tha tab mujhe MANGALPUR ki AZZAAN ( call for prayer ) ki awwaz sunai di ... .. par maine dhayan nahi diya ke Asad toh GURGAON main hai ... aur Asad toh har roz usi waqt humsab se baat karta hai . its a part of his daily routine ... nothing unusual ... lekin ab saari baaten jaan kar mera shak confirm ho gaya ki Asad MANGALPUR main hi hai !
DADAjaan went 2 Zoya and patted on her head .
Zoya said ... DADAjaan ... I am sorry ...please ... maaf kar dijiye ...
Rona band karo beta ... jaldi se mangalpur jao aur Asad ko mere paas le kar aao . main uski bahut pitai karunga ... meri pyari Zoya ko pareshaan kar ta hai . namakool Asad 😊 said DADAJAAN to cheer up Zoya who was crying continuously .. ALLAH mere ASAD - ZOYA ko hamesha khush rakhe ... DADAJAAN ne dil se dua di !
Mamma REHANa and papa FAIZ also pacified Zoya in their own ways .
Zoya with her mamma in law and papa in law went 2 MANGALPUR .
But is ASAD really in MANGALPUR .?
To be continued
Eagerly waiting for the feedback and LIKES.
LINK FOR PART 10 (PAGE -37 )
Edited by delka - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hope all gets fine soon

And Zoya tells Asad the truth

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