New ASYA FF 'HUMRAAH' Part 17 'LAST PART' ; UPDT ;NOV 28 ; Pg -90 - Page 19

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Posted: 11 years ago
read all the parts great story 👍🏼
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Originally posted by: aish-au

just read all parts of u r ff, loved it to bits.

update soon and plz pm me wen u update next.

THAT'S VERY SWEET OF U.😊 WILL SURELY PM.😃
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DEDICATED 2 ALL THE AMAZING READERS.😃
PART 10 27 OCT 13
MANGALPUR , MADHYA PRADESH
The KHANS had their ancestral house in Mangalpur .The family had shifted 2 BHOPAL for work and city life but they kept coming back once in a while for FESTIVALS and vacations .
Asad had a very unique trait, whenever he was disturbed or had 2 take any major decision he would come 2 Mangalpur . The calm and serenity of the village soothed his mind . HIs family members were very much aware of Asad's this characteristic .
It was around 4 o clock in the evening . The October weather was very pleasant . FAIZ AHMAD KHAN and his wife REHANA directly went 2 the terrace of the house .
Asad was sitting on a wooden chair . He was grumpy and in a pensive mood .
AS-SALAM -WALEKUM ... Asad mian... kaha khoye hue hain ? asked Mr Faiz
WALE KUM SALAM !!!!!! papa ...mamaa aap log yaha ...sab khairiyat hai na? Asad was astonished 2 see his parents..
KHAIRIYAT hai ke nahi ye toh tum batao beta ... yeh Mangalpur acchanak kaise aagaye ? asked his mamma.
Arre yaar hume bhi bata dete ... hum sab saath aate ... Abbajaan ko bhi saath le aate . said Mr faiz 2 lighten up his mood .
Woh... main... actually... dar asal ...Asad kept searching for words .
MERE bete ko abhi tak bahana banana nahi aata ... commented mamma Rehana . 😛
Khair ...Asad ... tum se koi bahut 'important person' milna chahta hai ... wo hamare saath hi aaya hai . said papa
kon milna chahta hai papa? he asked
hai koi tumhara ... CLOSE RELATIVE ... SAID mammaa and she brought Zoya who was standing near the staircase.
pahchante ho isse ? asked papa teasingly .😉
The Lion ASAD gazed at the Goat ZOya as if he will eat her up 'RAW'.
CHALO bhai humne apna kaam kar diya ... ab hum chalte hai wapas BHOPAL ..Abbajaan ghar par akele hain ... waise bhi BHOPal toh bas 2 ghante ka drive hai .. 7 -8 baje tak pahuch jaaye ge INSHALLAH ... tum dono chaho toh kuch din yaha ruk sakte ho . chaliye Rehana ... said mr FAIz
Asad jo bhi program ho mujhe phone kar ke batana ... thik hai beta ...
Zoya... ASAd ka khayal rakhna ...ALLAH HAFIZ ... said REHANa
ALLAH Hafiz... said ASAD and Zoya . THey went 2 see off the parents.
Asad was very quiet and composed in front of his parents but the moment they were out of sight ... his temper flared up...
Kyun aai ho yaha TUM ? ASKED ASAD bluntly
Asad !!! please ... please ... meri baatt suno ... I am sorry Asad ... please mujhe maaf kar do ... please mujhe maaf kar do ... main tumhe saari baat sach -sach batati hun ...please mujhe maaf kar do ... said Zoya and started sobbing uncontrolably.
kyun maaf karu main tumhe.? ... tumhe toh mujhse koi hamdardi nahi ... tumhe toh
mujhse koi rishta nahi rakhna . phir yeh maafi ka drama kyun ? SAID angry Asad 😡
nahi Asad...nahi Asad... aisi baat nahi ...please mujhe ...sorry ...sorry ... sorry
...please ...mujhe... maaf ... kar ...do ...please ...sorry ...Zoya kept repeating and she sat on the floor weeping 😭
Zoya's heart -rending cry and apology melted away Asad's anger.
Zoya!!! bacho ki tarah rona band karo ... said a worried Asad
Nahi ... Nahi ... pahle tum mujhe maaf kardo ... said Zoya ...😭 crying unceasingly.
Thik hai ...thik hai Zoya ... Maine Tumhe Maaf Kiya !!! said Asad ...
He picked up Zoya from the floor and hugged her as tightly as he could ..
Shhh...chup raho ... bas karo Zoya ... tabiyat kharab ho gayegi tumhari ... please stop crying... said Asad trying 2 pacify and calm her .
Asad ...tum mujhe kyun ghar par pahucha ke chale gaye the ? dobaara kabhi aisa nahi karna ... nahi toh main ...
AAArre wah !!! ek toh ghalti karti ho... uspar se dhamki bhi de ti ho ? Asad said and tickled Zoya to make her laugh ..
Asad ... stooop... stop ...tickling ...zoya laughed and tried 2 protect herself .
Asad smiled and said ...OK ! fine !!! ab jaldi se mujhe puri baat batao? yeh Kaali Zubaan kaun hai ?
KAALI ZUBAAN !! Zoya was shocked 2 hear this name from Asad ... tumhe ... tumhe kaise pata yeh naam .
Tumhaari friend hai na DR DAisy ... she called me ... ur cell was not reachable ... she was worried about u ... ki tum duty par nahi aayi ?... I told her that u were in BHOPAL ... Then Dr DAIsy told me that u needed the break coz u were disturbed due to that KAALI ZUbaan's taunts.
ZOYA told Asad the entire truth ... about KAALI ZUBAAn .. COUGAR ... physical aspects of marriage ... every thing .
TOH yeh baat hai ... main toh kuch aur hi samajh raha tha ?said Asad
Par tum kya samjhe the Asad ? ASKED a worried Zoya
That's not important anymore ... main tumse bahut naraaz tha Zoya ... main tumhara husband hun ... ur well being is my responsibility ... tumne mujhe iss layak bhi nahi samjha ke apna dukh ,, problem ...mere saath share karo ? said Asad sadly 😲
NAHI ASAD .. aisi baat nahi hai ... main DAR gayi thi ... said Zoya
DAR gayi thi ? ... kis baat se ... asked a confused Asad 😕
KI kahi tum mujhse rishta na thod do ? THAT u'lll leave me forever ... Zoya revealed her worst fear in front of Asad ...
ASAD was shell shocked !!!!!!!!!!😲
2 B CONTINUED
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Edited by delka - 11 years ago
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ASYA FF UPDATED 27 OCT 😊
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FF UPDATED😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
wonder how asad will react to her fear. anyways amazing update 👏
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awesome and fantastic update.. thanks for updating such a nice part..
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Posted: 11 years ago
reallyy nice.. asya together... continue ASAP... And plzz add me to ur pm list...!!
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how asad will react to
her fear. anyways amazing
update
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Awesome part
thanx for pm
do pm me for next part

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