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Posted: 11 years ago
#61
loved it, superb
read all the parts in one go
update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#62
See I loved this! However, I am in desperate need of happy endings currently. Things have been going downhill so my search for happy endings continues. However, I still loved this SS. It was so heart touching! Asya and Asad's bonding was cute too and I know I've said this previously too, but I love the word play that you brought into the story.
Take care and keep writing!
xx
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Posted: 11 years ago
#63
[I support zoya decision what's the gurrantee that after their marriage if ayaan again asks for the bride the aak won't sacrifice let's see if he can do something unimaginable so we will be forced to reject zoyas decision warna at present she is looking like a thing to be loned.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#64
i lovd dis..waitng for happywala ending.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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part8
asad house
as zoya closed the door, asad silently went back to asya room...his cute daughter was sleeping with a cute smile
he went and kissed her daugter forehead, and laid on the side where zoya slept.
he was at peace knowing that zoya still loved him, he thought after the fate game.. she hated him for choosing his
sister happiness and sacrificed her for his family,asad tried to talk to her saying at that moment he wanted to
save a life... he tried to reach her assure her everything will set right, but he couldnt reach zoya bcoz she never
spoke to him afterwards.the only time zoya looked at him with love was on the day of nighat wedding...he wanted to speak
with her but she moved away. then after some days she came over to his house, and asked them to attend her sister wedding.
and left. later ayaan came over and explained about gaffur being zoya father, and also about the invalid nikah which qazi realized
during nighat wedding, and also that zoya insisting that ayaan and humeira should get married.ayaan agreed to the marriage, but
he asked zoya to forgive him for putting her in a situation in the past, she said she would. ayaan thought if she could forgive me
then she will forgive bhaijaan too..and was hoping that they all could move forward .
asad saw zoya for the last time on ayaan wedding, she looked simple and yet beautifull, and she was in red.but hardly looked at him,after sometime she was not there,ayaan saw his restlessness went to zoya room, and came back with a message for him.
Mr.Khan,

forget that zoya ever existed in ur life

looking at that asad just said..."if zoya doesnt exist..neither does asad". and kind of went into deeper hole,
in the past 3 years, it was zoya, zoya memories and work.His siblings came and visited him, ayaan and nighat always had
guilt in their eyes,but he tried to assure them it was not their fault,it was his destiny,but whenever they came around, he tried
act so they could move forward, and somehow he was able to do with nighat,but ayaan... he still feel guilty for what he did
with zoya and asad.

the only person she was in touch was humeira. from humeira he came to know that she is in NY.sometime asad thought he should go there and
talk to her. but looking at their past, he thought zoya should move with her life,though it killed him to think that way, his old fears surfaced a
again,that he was misfit for zoya.
but now looking at asya... he know god has given him one more chance.in the war between destiny and love, he thought destiny has own, but now, because of his daughter he know that their love has own.even though living in the same house for months even after realising their love, they never overstepped the boundaries. asad being a man of principle even though zoya being from new york, zoya and asad never strayed beyond a hug. asad still remember that night,it was like both of them possessed by love they have for each other, and took the final step of their relationship.later that night it was zoya assurance,of their love..made him realise that what happened was not wrong,...and their aftertalk about asya and afzal.. those are the dreams he always dreamed when
zoya left. he kind of lived in the imaginary world of his happy family ...but now he saw their dream became a reality. their daughter.

now he have cinvince zoya that their love has own.but from whatever he heard from zoya in the past one hour..he know he has a tough job at hand.. he knows his zoya is ziddi...she will never talk to him straight...but also he has make her realise what kind of idiot she is... really brainless too...(smiles himself)..after knowing about asya in the last 2 days, asad hasnt left asya for a single second. his zoya was thinking about leaving her daughter and going back. which he knows she will never able
to do. now he know zoya didnt come back yday just bcoz of his love but also her love for their daughter, she was not able live through a night without..her .she is planning to do that for most of her life.

Asad knows the importance of a mother in the life of a child,he knows that zoya knows that better then anyone.. he felt happy that zoya trusted him with asya... but felt guilty.. she didnt trust him for herself.he vowed he will bring zoya back... his daughter will grow with her mother.He promised himself he wont let anything or anybody come in between his life anymore. he decided...he will start living for himself and Zoya...Now he has to find a way to bring zoya back into his life...but how?
it is question keep repeating in his mind...he know he has biggest alliance sleeping next to him...HE HAS TO SHOW ZOYA...THE NEED OF MOTHER IN HER DAUGHTER LIFE...
so in his.



Hospital:

zoya reached the hospital, one way she was relieved...after talking to poophi.she felt light.. as a burden was removed from her heart. but few things kept flashing in her mind the frames in the walls, and one thing that never left her eyes was the asad face. how all the three slept in the same bed and asad hugging asya and zoya.zoya herself slept well after years,she was herself in her room.Dilshad words also rang in her words. to give asad one more chance...is it possible...can i have a happy life...
happy family...she still missed asad in every moment of her life, and most was when she was carrying asya... she wanted share first sonogram, the execise program, the first kick with asad. she questioned why didnt he came in search of her. in NY the seperation was bearable, but being in the same city,..her mind slowly started losing the
battle with her heart. ASYA... zoya hasnt spent a moment away from her... past 2 days...she has hardly spent time with her daughter...she is missing her daughter more..
though she told poophi that she will leave asya with asad... is it possible for her...and she knows she cant take asya with her... she cant punish asad anymore by keeping his daughter away from him. should she stay at bhopal for the sake of her daughter. if she stays here.. is it possible for her to stay away from asad..wont she run right into his arms...after seeing his pain in his eyes...confused she closed her eyes... she prayed the almighty to show her the way. and walked into her abbu room.

Asad house:

asya and asad got ready and came to dining hall, D served breakfast, and was kind of silent, asad understood the reason, but he didnt ask anything, he was feeding asya..
AS: abbu where is ammi
A: she has gone to hospital to look after ur dadu..
As: ok. will u take me to see her
A: ofcourse u get ready we will go and see ammi
As:ok abbu..

Hospital:
asad was carrying his princess in his arms and walked towards the room, and zoya came out of the room and unknowingly collided into zoya...but catches zoya before she
falls, the picture perfect family photo...zoya in one hand and asya in other hand.


to be continue...
note:thank you all for reading this..and for commenting too.. i thought of bringing a third person( little jealousy a good person like a friend) to bring in the bubbly zoya back. do u guys think so..or only presence of asya is enough. asya will bring her back to KHAN villa, but to MR. khan room...possessive zoya...??? let me know..ur views and i would move in
that direction
I planned to end in the previous chapter.. but here i am continue... i really hope the serial give us some inspiration...hope the crap zoyaan track ends soon

next 2 chapters will be mix of past and present

Edited by kals82 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#66
im totally up for the 3 rd person as long as asad and zoya and asya are together
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Posted: 11 years ago
#67
Actually i think asya sud play the cupid between her parents.
THNKS for such a lovely update
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Posted: 11 years ago
#68
awesum update ...
i guess asya is enuf ..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#69
awesome part
i think 3 person trick is nice
continue soon
plzzz pm me for next part
eagerly waiting...for next interesting partsss
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Posted: 11 years ago
#70
loved it👏👏👏... I wud love to see the bubbly jealousy Zoya..

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