TS: Halloween Horror - Last part on pg 13 - Page 2

You are an amazing writer... 😊

Zoya is so irresponsible. 😆

Do u guys celebrate Halloween in India too?!?

Green ji,

Originally posted by: anushreemishra

Yay yay yay🥳🤪i can't believe how happy i was seeing that my dear sweet "goingreen" wrote something...i had an instant smile on my face😃and i just rushed to read your story😳

I am glad my constant nagging and pestering could get you to finally pen down your ideas😆

Comin to the story it was amazing as usual...you are best at your forte...no one does romantic comedy better than you(waise you are best at other stuff too especially emotional scenes which we have seen in your stories"

I loved the concept of halloween only you could have thought about that😆

I love how you show small little things and use technology in your stories...girls whatsapping their pics and chatting lol that is so us😆you make us connect to small little day to day things and i love that

Tabhi toh! I'm more motivated to do things that your bhaijaan is against, mazaa hi kuch aur hai

Typical zoya kuch bhi karegi asad ko pareshan karne ke liye😆

I knew it the moment zoya thought that she would try her look with dilshad i knew that asad will be the one to walk on her pretending to be a corpse😆

Oh man she really did scare asad😆he dropped his suitcase😆poor asad and zoya always lands herself in trouble...

oh i loved how asad cupped zoya's face and asked what she was upto and i especially loved how he tried to hide how shaken he was😳

So he did understnad that it was all a prank without even zoya uttering a word😆

man i expected him to shout but he didn't..i guess he was a little too scared after seeing zoya like that

"You got a horrible scare when you thought I was dead?"

oh i want to see what asad has to say to this...so asad was so scared after seeing zoya like a corpse and all zoya can think is about her makeup😆

continue soon

And thanku so much for dedicating this story to me...i can't believe how happy this makes to have been dedicated a story by the marvellous storyteller "goingreen"

continue soon...can't wait for the next part

love you🤗

p.s.-green for you😳

You have no idea how pleasing your comment is to my eyes hahaha. Glad you liked my idea of incorporating Halloween into the story haha, wanted to bring more of Zoya's quirky ways to light (: Yeah show mein yeh log technology ka sahi istimaal nahi karte hahaha so I do it in my stories :p

Glad you liked it!! And you're welcome about the dedication thing haha, you're always so sweet about my work anyway (:

Originally posted by: me2you

Woohoo!!! I will be back... Res :)

me2you ji!! Aap res karke kahan bhaag gayi?! I wanna read your comment!! Hahaha.

Originally posted by: MisHumptyDumpty

"Scare my mother?! Whose heart is still recovering from a gunshot wound from not too long ago? Aap kitni irresponsible ho Miss Farooqui! Allah ka lakh lakh shukr hai ke main pehle aagaya. I managed to save Ammi from receiving that horrible scare that I got," Asad bit out in anger, as he got up from the sofa. He walked over to the area in front of the main door to pick up the briefcase he had dropped in horror earlier.

"You got a horrible scare when you thought I was dead?" Zoya asked, a tinge of triumph in her voice. She looked earnestly at Asad who froze for a second, but then resumed picking up his briefcase and walking off, ignoring her completely.

loved this part 😆

Zoya crying Wolf Wolf? 🤣

Hahaha glad you liked it (: We all know about the boy who cried wolf, now we know about the Zoya who cried corpse :p

Originally posted by: ...SankaDevi...

Zoya is so irresponsible. 😆

Do u guys celebrate Halloween in India too?!?

Haha well I don't know, I don't live in India. So that's why I decided to play on the safe side and just say it isn't celebrated in Asad's house, coz I don't know about the rest of India hahaha.

Originally posted by: DancingDiva.

Green ji,

Hum phir se waapas aye :P

YAYYYE AWESOME Jaldi update karna :)

Nisha

Nisha ji! Aapko yahan dekhke mujhe bohut khushi hui haha. Glad you liked it!! (: