TS: Halloween Horror - Last part on pg 13

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hello (: Well I'd been thinking of this for hell of long now, but didn't write it because I wasn't happy with it yet. But then Anushree vote of confidence in me made me decide to at least start writing it. And when I did, I was suddenly struck with inspiration haha so here I present to you guys the first half of my first attempt at a two-shot (: For Anushree!

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Halloween Horror: Part 1

"Najma, did you receive the picture I sent you on Whatsapp? What do you think? Convincing enough?" Zoya asked excitedly over the phone as she paced up and down her room. She stopped in front of the mirror and admired her handiwork as she waited for Najma to answer her.

"Haan mila... but I don't understand why you're planning for Halloween from now. It's still a month away! Besides, maine aapse pehle bhi kaha tha, nobody celebrates Halloween in our house! I'm pretty sure Bhaijaan would never allow it," Najma replied, shaking her head amusedly. Zoya was always finding new ways to get under her brother's skin.

"Tabhi toh! I'm more motivated to do things that your bhaijaan is against, mazaa hi kuch aur hai. Okay woh sab chodo aur yeh bataao, does it look convincing enough? Did I apply enough powder to look as pale as a corpse?" Zoya asked again, not satisfied with Najma's earlier response. She picked up her compact and dabbed more powder around her eyes.

"I guess so! Accha dekho ab main rakhti hoon. Ammi is done with her shopping so I think we'll be heading home now. See you soon!" Najma replied quickly before hanging up. Zoya wrinkled her nose in annoyance. Just a flimsy 'I guess so' wasn't enough for Zoya.

Zoya pouted unhappily as she wondered about her plan to dress up as a corpse on Halloween, but her pout slowly turned into a mischievous smile as a thought crossed her mind. Najma had just said that she and Phuphi were going to be coming home soon right? Maybe she could test her make-up on Phuphi!

She hurried to the living room and waited, pacing impatiently around the area in front of the main door. After a while, she heard the sound of a car pulling over outside. Biting her lower lip to control her laughter, Zoya rushed to the long sofa and laid down on it, closing her eyes and crossing her arms over her stomach.

With her eyes closed, her sense of hearing was the only thing that could help her decipher what was going on. Soon enough, she heard the front door swing open, and she held her breath immediately, hoping that it would hide the rise and fall of her chest. She heard the clutter of something dropping on the floor seconds later, and then heavy footsteps approaching her. She stopped herself from swallowing nervously, trying her best to keep in character.

"Zoya?!" She heard someone say in a familiar male voice, laced with panic. Asad! She felt a wave of panic run through her own body, suddenly realizing that she was stuck. Whether she snapped out of the act or not, Asad was going to yell at her. She found herself unable to open her eyes because of the fear of making eye contact with Asad. The smell of Asad's familiar cologne wafted up to her nose as she sensed his face nearing hers.

"ZOYA?!?!" Asad yelled, as he forcefully grabbed her by the shoulders and pulled her into a firm hug. Her eyes flew open at the suddenness of it all, and she gasped out loud, her hot breath hitting Asad's neck where her face was buried.

Asad felt the worry and tension ease out of his body in a jiffy as he felt Zoya's breathing against his skin, and it suddenly occurred to him as he hugged her that her entire body was warm. As warm as the body of the person who's alive should be. He slowly pulled away from the hug, holding Zoya's face in his palms as he sat next to her on the sofa.

"Yeh sab kya hai Miss Farooqui?" Asad asked sternly, making sure his question came out without the quiver. Zoya blinked absent-mindedly in response, before looking down after a while, a sheepish expression on her face. Asad removed his hands from her face, easily understanding that it was one of Zoya's childish pranks yet again.

"I'm sorry Mr Khan, maine yeh sab Halloween ki tayaari mein ki thi. I just wanted to see if my make-up was convincing enough. Anyway my plan was to scare Phuphi, not you," Zoya replied nervously, playing with the lapel of her shirt as she avoided eye contact.

"Scare my mother?! Whose heart is still recovering from a gunshot wound from not too long ago? Aap kitni irresponsible ho Miss Farooqui! Allah ka lakh lakh shukr hai ke main pehle aagaya. I managed to save Ammi from receiving that horrible scare that I got," Asad bit out in anger, as he got up from the sofa. He walked over to the area in front of the main door to pick up the briefcase he had dropped in horror earlier.

"You got a horrible scare when you thought I was dead?" Zoya asked, a tinge of triumph in her voice. She looked earnestly at Asad who froze for a second, but then resumed picking up his briefcase and walking off, ignoring her completely.

Zoya sighed loudly and exaggeratedly after Asad disappeared into his room and slammed the door shut. She may not have managed to get Asad to express what he was feeling as usual, but at least now she knew for a fact that her make-up was definitely very convincing.

XXX

I really am wondering what I should say here, but I don't wanna say anything or it'll just spoil the fun for the next part hahaha. So I'll keep quiet till then!! (:

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome yaar...update soon... And when are u gonna start a new ff? I am really excited...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Irina321

Awesome yaar...update soon... And when are u gonna start a new ff? I am really excited...



Thanks (: No idea about another FF haha I haven't thought of anything yet (:
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Haha! Zoya and her ideas 😆
Eager to see whats next in store for us 😉

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Amazing ...plss update soon 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Yay yay yay🥳🤪i can't believe how happy i was seeing that my dear sweet "goingreen" wrote something...i had an instant smile on my face😃and i just rushed to read your story😳
I am glad my constant nagging and pestering could get you to finally pen down your ideas😆
Comin to the story it was amazing as usual...you are best at your forte...no one does romantic comedy better than you(waise you are best at other stuff too especially emotional scenes which we have seen in your stories"
I loved the concept of halloween only you could have thought about that😆
I love how you show small little things and use technology in your stories...girls whatsapping their pics and chatting lol that is so us😆you make us connect to small little day to day things and i love that
Tabhi toh! I'm more motivated to do things that your bhaijaan is against, mazaa hi kuch aur hai
Typical zoya kuch bhi karegi asad ko pareshan karne ke liye😆
I knew it the moment zoya thought that she would try her look with dilshad i knew that asad will be the one to walk on her pretending to be a corpse😆
Oh man she really did scare asad😆he dropped his suitcase😆poor asad and zoya always lands herself in trouble...
oh i loved how asad cupped zoya's face and asked what she was upto and i especially loved how he tried to hide how shaken he was😳
So he did understnad that it was all a prank without even zoya uttering a word😆
man i expected him to shout but he didn't..i guess he was a little too scared after seeing zoya like that
"You got a horrible scare when you thought I was dead?"
oh i want to see what asad has to say to this...so asad was so scared after seeing zoya like a corpse and all zoya can think is about her makeup😆
continue soon
And thanku so much for dedicating this story to me...i can't believe how happy this makes to have been dedicated a story by the marvellous storyteller "goingreen"
continue soon...can't wait for the next part
love you🤗
p.s.-green for you😳
Edited by anushreemishra - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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hey, it ws amezing yr. Updt soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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scared him to death. .
amazing..lovely
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interesting, different and great!! 😃
Edited by vaishnavi22 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Green ji!!! Woohoo, guess who is back...

Yes yes yes, aap bhi yahan, mein bhi yahan aur hum sab yahan 😃
I knew it that we could not stay away from each other for too long, iss liye toh you are here with another creative piece of work. 🥳

I'm more motivated to do things that your bhaijaan is against, mazaa hi kuch aur hai (This is so typical Zoya. And for that, we all love her to do things that pisses off Mr. Khan) 😳😆

she heard the sound of a car pulling over outside (Something in my head told me that this cannot be Dilshaad ammi...Woh kya hai na, our brains are trained to sense that something is coming up) 😆

Anyway my plan was to scare Phuphi, not you," (Bechari Dilshaad ammi...Zoya tum bhi na)

Only you can come up with an unusual theme like Halloween Horror 😆 I like though!
Its different and refreshing from the usual stuff.
Why did you stop there...??? 😡 Ek hint bhi nahin ke agle update mein kya hone wala hai...Not fair! Thank you so much for this. Its really really really nice. You never fail us to smile while reading your stories. 😊

Special thanks to Anushree 🤗 I guess, Green ji wants us to spam her 😆
Update update update, jaldi jaldi jaldi

P.S. Thanks for the PM! 😃
Edited by me2you - 11 years ago

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