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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hi guys this is my first on SS on Ayaan and Humaira, it will take place after Zoyaan wedding. I don't know ho Gul is going to bring twist in this track, so I am writing my own version. I wanted to write one on AsYa but they have so many fanfics going, so this will mainly be on AyRa, however, it will include parts of AsYa as well.

Part 1

Ayaan stood by his window staring outside particularly looking at the swing in the garden. It brought back memories of all the moment he shared with Humaira from their childhood to youth to their adulthood.

During all those years he had never though he had feel romantically for Humaira, but being apart from her for a month, he realized his importance in his life, he realized that he had always loved her, those feelings were bottled-up behind his friendship. Now when he had finally had her, life played another game and he got married to Zoya, the love of his bhaijaan.

He hit his fist on the wall, one mistake was going ruining for lives and he couldn't even do anything. He could hear the shower running in his bathroom; Zoya was freshening up for dinner. How he wished he could fix this mistake and change what happened in the community hall, but he couldn't he was bound in this marriage for the next six months.

"Bhaijaan, Ammi is calling you and Zoya...um bhaabhi down for dinner" Nuzzat's voice brought Ayaan out his thoughts. "Tum chalo hum aarahe hain!" he replied as Zoya stepped out of the bathroom.

Everyone settled down for dinner, Shirin as usual ignored Zoya's presence. Ayaan's heartbeat increased as he heard her footsteps behind him. "Wow Kabab, thanks Mumani , aaj mera bohut man kar raha tha aapke haath ke kabab khane ka", Humaira took a seat next to Zoya, who flinched a little realizing that she had come between two lovers, she looked at Ayaan and then at Humaira.

Shirin served everyone dinner, besides Zoya, "Oh Zoya Bhaaji, you didn't get any Kabab's here take mine". Humaira put her Kabab in Zoya's plate. Apart from Rashid, Nikhat, and Nuzzat, Humaira was the only person supporting Zoya and Ayaan through this despite the fact that her presence was causing Humaira immense pain. Rashid smiled at Humaira's gesture.

Zoya looked at Humaira and smiled, she wished Asad would support her the same way Humaira was supporting Ayaan, but Asad had clearly told her that their relationship was over, he was not going to deal with her childish mistakes anymore. He had every right to be upset, she left Asad on the day of her Nikah, and returned after marrying correction accidently marrying his brother, no man could accept that.

Sound of Ayaan chocking on his kabab brought Zoya back to reality, Humaira quickly got up from her chair to give Ayaan the glass of water, but Zoya beat her to it. Humaira stood in the middle as Zoya handed Ayaan the glass of water, Ayaan looked at Humaira, he could see tears forming in her eyes. Every member of the Siddiqui family was now looking at the three of them, life for these three had just become complicated.

Please do tell me whether I should continue or not?

Do leave your comments/Criticism😊

❤️Ria

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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice start i could totally imagine this happening... i think you should continue!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Ria,

This is such a beautiful and tragic beginning.

I love the way you've portrayed Humeira.

I hope you will continue soon!

<333 Pari

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