AsYa OS: I'll Be All You Need And More... - Page 17

Originally posted by: mochhug

You can NEVER be mad at me? 😳🤗 Aww that's okay. We're all busy. I've been MIA updates wise until now. 😆 YAY! I'll try to be patient and wait for your replies 😳😃

Haha I'd like to thinks so 😉 And yes! I loved the realization! I was hoping it would be someone else telling her how he was so caring. But I really was surprised by how you showed him take EVEN MORE precautions. Like asking her friend to help her, and the bus driver, and even waiting for her to go in at the school. It was sooo sweet. Hayee. I can only with for a man to love me like that.

And excuse me! While I appreciate the compliment 😆 I am not happy with you degrading your own work. Your ability to come up with storylines is brilliant. And it comes through even more brilliantly in your writing. you have a knack for dialogues. You really do 😃

And likewise hun! 🤗 Love you too 🤗

Originally posted by: --starstruck--

i recently update Tu Jahan main wahan! and honestly when was the last time you read any of my fiction? 😆😆

Originally posted by: rajnid68

glad I came across this os ..

lovely and awesome story..

Originally posted by: SakeenaSidd

What an amazing amazing amazing story! I can't help crying! 😭

Asad's love for Zoya is just so amazing! Tq so much for writing this wonderful story 😊

Originally posted by: me2you

Fari right???

Believe me or not, I do not cry that much while reading FFs.

But this OS was one of those highly emotional ones where I could not control myself. I literally cried after reading the part where Zoya's friend explains how Asad would take care of Zoya.

Absolutely very well written, beautiful, romantic, touching and emotional. 👏👏👏

Originally posted by: Sweet_Ashum

U sent me a msg on FB?
I din receive it
Sachchi!!!!

Otherwise how will i resist replying you

you dont like me???😭

*wails loudly*

Originally posted by: NAVI55

Tears of sadness, tears of joy...i have shed them all whilst reading this😭 i'm a very emotional person😭

This was extremely beautifully written and just such an awesome os👍🏼

I really felt your characters emotions...

You have written a mindblowing os👏

I loved the part where the lady was describing to zoya how asad never left her alone...He always opened the door,blew her kiss and saluted❤️ That was just the sweetest thing

I fell in love with this asad of yours

This is one of the best os's i have read👏

Whenever you write more, please pm me if possible...

Originally posted by: manori

that was so amazing...and emotional.