AsYa OS: I'll Be All You Need And More... - Page 14

Originally posted by: -Mrinalini-

Sheer Brilliant!❤️

I'm awestruck! The relationship between a Husband and Wife shown to perfection!

Do write more!😳

Awww thank youuu!! And yes, will write more Insha'Allah 😛

Originally posted by: MjhtFan_Mahima

This is what you call perfection

Publish this story as a book and I am sure you'll get an amazin response

Awww you have me blushing here! I'm not good! You're just too sweet 😳 Thanksss 🤗

Originally posted by: Chipmunks.

Really no words. So beautiful :)

Thanksss 😊

Originally posted by: princessaaliya

very very beautiful!

Thanksss 😛

Originally posted by: rutu83

that's all i can thnink of right now
i'm going to reread now- will come back for a better comment

Rutu you are so sweet it's hard to believe 🤗

Originally posted by: SmileyStar

Yesss!! I think I've read the same story but ages ago 😃 I don't remember where I read it. All I remembered is that the girl used to teach and the husband would secretly keep check on her 😳 And fo some reason it really was on my mind these days so I wrote an OS based on it 😛

Originally posted by: --starstruck--

yep! i dont know the name because i had this story as an unseen comprehension for my english grammar paper! but during exam itself i had become teary reading this story!

Omg! You get such awesome stories for your comprehension? Ours is the most boring possible paragraphs in the world! 😲 😃

Originally posted by: SmileyStar

Omg! You get such awesome stories for your comprehension? Ours is the most boring possible paragraphs in the world! 😲 😃

Originally posted by: --starstruck--

nah not always even i get such crappy stories of which i cant make a head or a tail maybe the teacher was merciful when she was setting the paper! Thank God for small mercies 😆

Yes, you should be thankful! 😆 If I were you, I sure would've been.

It's been so long since I read your work! I don't think you're updating your FFs these days?? 😔

Originally posted by: Sweet_Ashum

You forced me o come out of my self imposed IF exile :D
How dare you make me cry?
Just because you are my twin doesn't mean you vcan make me cry

Where is Fauzia di ?
I want justice 😆

The OS was awesome
Heart wrenching at points too with your narration

I have read your other FFs too but with guests around n all I cant log on n comment

Consider this as an all round comment for all plz

I need some time before I can come n comment again

Love you loads!!!
Muaaah!

My twinsyyy!! 🤗

*breaks apart from the hug, folds her arms and looks away* I'm not talking to you! You've been ignoring me, haven't you?! You don't even reply to me on FB anymore 😔 I don't like you anymore missy! 😉

But still thanks once again for liking my work 😳 Take all the time you need! You don't even have to comment bus nazar aati raha karo acha?!!

Take Care!! Love yaaa!! Mwahhh!! ❤️