AsYa OS: I'll Be All You Need And More... - Page 15

Originally posted by: blasterrr

whoa...that's what we call a great story...quite emotional..you are quite good at that...very cute indeed!!!!!!!!!

Originally posted by: cutiesanya

Your writing style is just awesome.
This.was.very.new and unique
Zoe losing her eyes , a. Jealous
Zoe is adorable

Originally posted by: rutu83

ok i've reread this one like 50 time in this one day- i LOVE it!!
all i'd say is should you ever publish a book let me know- i'll be buying it 😉

Originally posted by: Oldestfan

Lovely! So pure and beautiful!

Originally posted by: mysticlover

Beautiful...
Asad's love for Zoya is incomparable...

Originally posted by: SmileyStar

Rutu, I think you've gotten real biased 😆 Hahaha, I admit it is my secret wish to publish the best book in the world but I don't have the brains nor the writing capability to do it 😆😆😆

Thanksss 🤗

Originally posted by: mochhug

Unresed on 6

Originally posted by: mochhug

UM. I beg to differ! You have ALL the capablities to write a MING BLOWING book. 😳

Originally posted by: mochhug

Res for a lamba comment ;)

Ok so you're probably mad at me. Sali res karti hai aur phir bhool jati hai.

(hides)

This was utterly beautiful. The pain they both felt, Zoya for herself and Asad for her as well. The way they're so connected. He can sense her every discomfort.

When he tried to let her be independent, I knew. I knew he wouldn't just leave her on the bus. But what really threw me was that he had asked someone on the bus for help the previous day. That I totally didn't see coming.

It's was so refreshing to see him be her strength, without actually being physically there for her. And Zoya, my poor Zoya. I can understand her fear, her hesitance to love him like before after feeling abandoned. But the way you portrayed her realization was amazing! Her friend narrating everything he did for her, while keeping his distance. I can't imagine what he must have gone through seeing her yearn for his help, and then not being as affectionate with him.

But I just loved it. I literally teared up in the scene (yup this was like a movie too 😆) where she realizes how much he loves her. Her friend narrating it all, had me tearing, and her apology to him as well.

You're such a brilliant writer. I'm so happy I get to read your work

Hope this made up for LATEST of comments 😆😳