AsYa OS: I'll Be All You Need And More...

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Monica

@mochhug

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#151

Originally posted by: SmileyStar

First off, I can NEVER be mad at you 😳 I occasionally get mad at myself for not following your work though 😔 I have over 400 unread PMs and I still haven't gotten time to check them. I have bookmarked two of your OSs though 😉 Will read and comment when I get time. right now, I'm off to bed 🥱

Awww you know me so well you can predict the story even before reading 😉

You liked the realization?! YAYYY

I made you tear up?! Sorry *hides and pumps a fist in the air* 😃 I'm a brilliant writer?! Not more than you! I can only wish my words flow like yours do flawlessly 😳

This more than makes up for it. Love having you as a friend and reader on this forum! You're AWESOME!! Love ya 🤗

You can NEVER be mad at me? 😳🤗 Aww that's okay. We're all busy. I've been MIA updates wise until now. 😆 YAY! I'll try to be patient and wait for your replies 😳😃

Haha I'd like to thinks so 😉 And yes! I loved the realization! I was hoping it would be someone else telling her how he was so caring. But I really was surprised by how you showed him take EVEN MORE precautions. Like asking her friend to help her, and the bus driver, and even waiting for her to go in at the school. It was sooo sweet. Hayee. I can only with for a man to love me like that.

And excuse me! While I appreciate the compliment 😆 I am not happy with you degrading your own work. Your ability to come up with storylines is brilliant. And it comes through even more brilliantly in your writing. you have a knack for dialogues. You really do 😃

And likewise hun! 🤗 Love you too 🤗

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Sadie

@--starstruck--

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#152

Originally posted by: SmileyStar

Yes, you should be thankful! 😆 If I were you, I sure would've been.

It's been so long since I read your work! I don't think you're updating your FFs these days?? 😔

i recently update Tu Jahan main wahan! and honestly when was the last time you read any of my fiction? 😆😆

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rajnid68

@rajnid68

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#153

glad I came across this os ..

lovely and awesome story..

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SakeenaSidd

@SakeenaSidd

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#154

What an amazing amazing amazing story! I can't help crying! 😭

Asad's love for Zoya is just so amazing! Tq so much for writing this wonderful story 😊

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@metoyou

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#155

Fari right???

Believe me or not, I do not cry that much while reading FFs.

But this OS was one of those highly emotional ones where I could not control myself. I literally cried after reading the part where Zoya's friend explains how Asad would take care of Zoya.

Absolutely very well written, beautiful, romantic, touching and emotional. 👏👏👏

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Amna

@...KSGmiAmor...

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#156

that was beautifulll

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Sweet_Ashum

@Sweet_Ashum

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#157

Originally posted by: SmileyStar

My twinsyyy!! 🤗

*breaks apart from the hug, folds her arms and looks away* I'm not talking to you! You've been ignoring me, haven't you?! You don't even reply to me on FB anymore 😔 I don't like you anymore missy! 😉

But still thanks once again for liking my work 😳 Take all the time you need! You don't even have to comment bus nazar aati raha karo acha?!!

Take Care!! Love yaaa!! Mwahhh!! ❤️

U sent me a msg on FB?
I din receive it
Sachchi!!!!

Otherwise how will i resist replying you

you dont like me???😭

*wails loudly*

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NAVI55

@NAVI55

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#158

Tears of sadness, tears of joy...i have shed them all whilst reading this😭 i'm a very emotional person😭

This was extremely beautifully written and just such an awesome os👍🏼

I really felt your characters emotions...

You have written a mindblowing os👏

I loved the part where the lady was describing to zoya how asad never left her alone...He always opened the door,blew her kiss and saluted❤️ That was just the sweetest thing

I fell in love with this asad of yours

This is one of the best os's i have read👏

Whenever you write more, please pm me if possible...

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Fari

@SmileyStar

Inactive

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#159

Originally posted by: hillykhan
i'm not sure if I left a comment here...
but anywhoot, FABulous OS ! totally different, but loved the change.
You made it thoroughly emotional and that turned out to be a success .. i'm truly sentimental.. so, stuff like this.. gets to me.
Last bit = AWESOMENESS ! i'm hoping people exist in this world who are 'this' true to whom they love and it's so heart-warming to see it in Fiction. sigh ! :')
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& missy, PLEASE update your FF's .. awaiting the updates ! thanks. & do pm.

ps; your dp - FK ! aaah ! he's my fav. <33 x

Yayyy you like this!! 😃

Yes I know I really need to update my works! Eid holidays have just started and I'm going to work on my SS and FF 😉

You love FK too? Come give me a hug 🤗