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Fari

@SmileyStar

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Posted: 12 years ago

#111

Originally posted by: jazmeen
Awwwn
It was so touching
Loved every single line of it

Thanks Jazmeen!! 😃

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Sweeeeetie

@Sweeeeetie

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Posted: 12 years ago

#112

Oh god its was brilliant
U r awesome
Loved it
👏

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Fari

@SmileyStar

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Posted: 12 years ago

#113

Originally posted by: Sweeetie
Oh god its was brilliant
U r awesome
Loved it
👏

Thank you!! 😊

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Sadie

@--starstruck--

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Posted: 12 years ago

#114

this was amazing although it was exactly similar to this short story that i had once read! exact scenario and everything although it felt nice to read it on AsYa

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Yumna

@Surbhilover

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Posted: 12 years ago

#115

Ohmygosh. Its such a beautiful OS. Wonderfully penned down. I almost cried when Zoya found out what Asad did for her. Wish this happened real. 🤗

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Surya.Ravi

@Surya.Ravi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#116

beautiful..awesome one shot...😊

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princee

@princeegoyal

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Posted: 12 years ago

#117

definition of pure love...

loved it to the core..awesome ,brilliant👏

pari

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Fari

@SmileyStar

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+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#118

Originally posted by: --starstruck--
this was amazing although it was exactly similar to this short story that i had once read! exact scenario and everything although it felt nice to read it on AsYa

Yesss!! I think I've read the same story but ages ago 😃 I don't remember where I read it. All I remembered is that the girl used to teach and the husband would secretly keep check on her 😳 And fo some reason it really was on my mind these days so I wrote an OS based on it 😛

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Fari

@SmileyStar

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Posted: 12 years ago

#119

Originally posted by: Surbhi.Zoya
Ohmygosh. Its such a beautiful OS. Wonderfully penned down. I almost cried when Zoya found out what Asad did for her. Wish this happened real. 🤗

Thank you!! It didn't turn out as well as I had in mind but then it never does 😆