#3|| AsYa FF: Cupid Strikes (Chp 13 to Chp 17) - Page 50

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: shreya11mehra

Amazing wrk mahi...

Thy love each other so much bt cnt b together...

Song sequence z soo nice...

Very beautifully written...

Plz continue soon



Luv your words of appreciation

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: poojaloveskajen

superb!

loved it:D
pls continue soon!


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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: mariam1368

At first i thought Asya have Reunited bt later i was shattered jst like Asad was since it was a dream...
U really portrayed their breakdown beautifully well through the song.
Zoya was avoiding Asad and Asad is trying to give her some time...its really an emotional update
The love each other but they cant unite...thats really painful you know
Superb update Mahi


I was being wicked by starting with a dream

Glad you understood their heart's emotions

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Shubh007

Awsome update... 😊

Looking forward for nxt part so update soon... 😊


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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: princesbarbie

hey I thot they are united , but wo dream tha:(.
koi ni.. update was fab n amazing as usual. .
cont soon ,,.


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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: aashiqua

it was really a emotional part
plzzz unite dem soon


will try to unite them soon

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: nuts_22

Mahi you are an awesome writer👏

Awesome Part
So brilliantly written
The dream sequence was just wow🤗

"Zoya" said Asad with a soft voice.

Zoya just blinked her eyes and started at Asad who was standing in front of her looking at her intently.

Asad held Zoya's hands with his and started "I won't say what I did was not a mistake as I had done it intentionally. I won't say I couldn't think straight as that is no excuse. I won't say it happened because I was brainwashed as that was my stupidity."

"What would you say then?" asked Zoya softy.

Asad with tears in his eyes replied "I would just say that you mean the world to me. Loving you is all I want to do now. I know it will not be easy for you to trust me but all I need is a chance to prove myself. Please don't separate me from you because if you do so then I'll die..."

Zoya on hearing this removes one of her hands from Asad's grip and places it on his lips. She then says "Don't ever say that you'll die because if that happens I'll be just a soul living with no heart as my heart beats only for you."

Zoya then pulls Asad into a tight hug leaving no space between them. Asad hugs her back with equal passion.

Bechara Asad😭
Nuzzhat and Ayaan are very rude😲
Dadi is the best😃
And the song Part was the best👏
I loved the song and it suited the situation so well
Hope zoya give her second chance😊
Best chapter and loved the flow of emotions
Luv Ya🤗


I am not much of an emotional person so I am glad that the emotions came out perfectly

I love your encouraging comment

but more than that I LOVE YOU

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