#3|| AsYa FF: Cupid Strikes (Chp 13 to Chp 17)

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Posted: 11 years ago
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IMPORTANT NOTE

Many are upset with Asad's actions while many are thinking (rather hoping) that that Asad is playing a bigger game. But let me clear things out that Asad is not faking it. He actually played with Zoya's emotions. Yes, you all need to face this fact.

My title says Cupid Strikes. Cupid is the god of love. Love is a strong emotion. Another strong emotion is hate. Hate can't make you think straight especially when you are being brainwashed. Same is the case with Asad.

Cupid is one smart dude. He strikes when you least expect him too and mainly when you don't want him too. When he strikes, he strikes real hard. Zoya has been struck by cupid already. I know now you would all be like next time hit both, Cupid.

You all know Cupid never grows up but do you know why. It is because true love never dies. You know why he throws arrows to heart. It is because true love hurts. So it is not possible for me to show an unaffected Zoya too.

So all the readers, I request you all to sit back and enjoy the story as it comes. All kinds of feedbacks whether expressing your approval or disapproval are welcome. But do give them. I value them a lot.

For reading more of my works- Insomniac || Mahima's Index

Edited by MjhtFan_Mahima - 11 years ago
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CONGO FOR THE THIRD THREAD! 🥳

Wooohooo!!!! 🥳


Originally posted by: MjhtFan_Mahima

@ Mina Di

You are someone who I talk to almost daily. It's like a daily routine which I can't skip. You are always ready to clear my doubts and help me out when I am stuck. You have recently become a spamming queen too. And you quote the whole chapter while pointing out your fav lines. I know you love me a loads big sister and I love you too.


And yes of course we are like Bunty and Chintu though we keep reversing roles.




Every word you said about me.. is true! 😉 And I too am gonna keep you forever and ever! 🤗

You are someone who I talk to almost daily. It's like a daily routine which I can't skip.

Almost? 😲 REALLY? 🤣



Indeed we are Chintu and Bunty with role reversals! ❤️



Well, My love note is 2 posts below this! I'm sure you've read it before and you will love reading it again! 😳



The Next 3 pages including this are waiting for you! 😉


Edited by -Mrinalini- - 11 years ago
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Hello... I'm here with my comments for Chapter 13:

Awesome Chapter! 👏

Ahaaan... *RK style*



Zoya is all strong... Yes!!! I love it! ❤️ This is how a girl should be after her break up!

"Phoophi, the SMF has a motto 'Others before you'. And we all are still a team and a storm can't wreck us because our strength is our belief in ourselves" Zoya announced with full confidence.

Haayee...



*Dil jeet liya kudi ne* 🤗

She is a True Leader! 👍🏼

Bloody hell that Razia and Ghafoor are poisonging Asad's brains! He is still worried for Zoya! Well.. Obvious! He loves her! 😳

Zoya and the SMF Team... Truly a MASTERPLAN!!! 👏



The turmoil within Asad and Zoya was Beautifully Expressed through the song and specially the last part where Asad realized his love and Zoya on the other hand ignored her love and worked on the plan! 👏

Asad panted as he reached the rooftop of their hideout. But the site that he met there was not what he had expected. Zoya was standing at the edge of the roof holding the key in her hand. His mamujaan was pointing his gun at Zoya while his mumani was threatening her.

*HELL WITH YOU ASAD AHMED KHAN* 😡



You are one hell of a Complicated Man! 😡



BRILLIANT UPDATE! ❤️ All the things are cleared now! I have no questions and no complaints with the chapter! 😃




This one ^^^ is for Razia and Ghafoor! 😛

The SMF Team would save Zoya! 😉

What the hell did you think? Mad people! 😆



*OKAY?*

Remember one thing Asad...



Love you heaps my baby sista! 🤗 ❤️


Continue soon! 😳

Now I go...



Bye bye...

xoxo

The Next 3 pages including this are waiting for you! 😉
Edited by -Mrinalini- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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My comments on the Note:

As you said,

Why does cupid never grow up? It symbolizes that love never grows old. Why does he throws arrow to the heart? To remind that true love hurts.

I would like to add,

When you lose someone or something close to you, you feel that they've taken a part of you with them. Let this feeling of loss be a good one, that person or something meant a lot to you and that's all that matters.

Love is the most beautiful thing to have, hardest thing to earn and most painful thing to lose.

True love never dies, it lives on in the people who believe in it.

So yes, I shall sit back and enjoy this ride where Asad would woo Zoya and get back his love! ❤️

Protect her, love her, kiss her, hug her, hold her, smile with her, laugh with her. But don't make her fall if you don't plan to catch her.


So Mr. Asad Ahmed Khan... You have hell lot of explanations and wooing to do to get back your love! So work hard, strive harder till she forgives you for the sin you have done!




Edited by -Mrinalini- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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My Love Note to,

My baby sister and one of my best friend ~ Mahima.


The non-biological crazy little sister who drives me insane! She has some crazy ideas and imagination springing in her head! We have a telepathy connection, she knows what I'm going to do even before I tell her!


We know each other for over 5 years and I shall be by your side forever baby! I love you heaps my baby girl! ❤️





xoxo

Mina di

*high five*
Edited by -Mrinalini- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Consolidating ALL my comments here!

So, In the Next 2 pages are all the comments I have made by far on your 'Cupid Strikes' chapters on Thread #1 and #2! 😉

*ENJOY READING*

🤗

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Edited by -Mrinalini- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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PROLOGUE:

Ahaan... Detective-giri..

Mazza aayega... 👏

Beautifully written prologue and well explained.



Congrats for the New FF! 👏

Love ❤️

Mina di
Edited by -Mrinalini- - 11 years ago
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Character Sketch:

New Character Sketch and New Story.. 😃

Completely unique! 👏

Padfoot here???? 😲 😆



Continue soon! 😳
Edited by -Mrinalini- - 11 years ago

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