#3|| AsYa FF: Cupid Strikes (Chp 13 to Chp 17) - Page 42

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Posted: 12 years ago
Sooo... Do we get an update today... 😳 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago

hmm so kal update pakka? 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: nityasuresh93

Sooo... Do we get an update today... 😳 🤗


Originally posted by: Missvishtoofani


hmm so kal update pakka? 😉


Update will come in noon after I wake up (it is already Saturday now)

I have typed it but too tired to proof read and format post

It is 3,000+ words though as always
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Posted: 12 years ago
Trying to keep my comments simpler than usual this time! 😊

Brilliant Update as usual Mahi! 👏

Asad's dream was so beautiful. The lines were so mesmerizing!

Asad held Zoya's hands with his and started "I won't say what I did was not a mistake as I had done it intentionally. I won't say I couldn't think straight as that is no excuse. I won't say it happened because I was brainwashed as that was my stupidity."

"What would you say then?" asked Zoya softy.

Asad with tears in his eyes replied "I would just say that you mean the world to me. Loving you is all I want to do now. I know it will not be easy for you to trust me but all I need is a chance to prove myself. Please don't separate me from you because if you do so then I'll die..."

Zoya on hearing this removes one of her hands from Asad's grip and places it on his lips. She then says "Don't ever say that you'll die because if that happens I'll be just a soul living with no heart as my heart beats only for you."

Zoya then pulls Asad into a tight hug leaving no space between them. Asad hugs her back with equal passion.



This was sheer flawlessness! Nuzzhat and Ayaan are being really rude! But I guess it's Asad's fault on the whole!

Nuzzhat shoved some pictures into Asad's face and questioned "Do you recognize him?"

Asad looked at the photos and was quickly able to recognize the person. He said "This is Raghu. He is Ghafoor and Razia's right man."

"Must be left because you were the right' one" commented Ayaan.


Ayaaan... Mere Asad ko aise bura bhala mat bolo! He ain't that bad! I love him! 🤗

Asad and Dadi's convo was amazing! I loved the way Dadi supported Asad and told him to be strong and not give up! 😊



Zoya pulled out Raghu's Teeth to get the truth out???? 😲 🤣

"You will be needed her. Take out Raghu's tooth if he doesn't cooperate. And for help I am taking Asad with me" announced Zoya.

"Asad! No ways" retorted Ayaan as Zoya's words sank into him.

Zoya gave a stern reply "Ayaan, I am leading this case and I know what I am doing."

With this without any further discussion Zoya left the room leaving Ayaan to simply gape at her.


Zoya took Asad with her! 😲 *mind dance*

Scroll down for comments on the Song Sequence... 😳
Edited by -Mrinalini- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Song Sequence...

Beautiful song chosen for the scenario. 👏

Their breakdown was so beautifully shown throughout the song. The way Zoya trying to avoid Asad and Asad trying to give her space alongside trying the get back.

When Zoya fell and expected to land in Asad's arms but unfortunately fell and then later dreamed of Asad giving her his hand..

The silence in the drive back home... 😒

Asad tried his dream to turn to reality but Zoya shrugged him off. It ain't so easy! 😭 The breakdown was so amazing.


Asad remembering his proposal to Zoya and sitting down on the beach alone. And the RAIN! 👏



Zoya trying to distract her mind from everything! I'm really sad for her! 😭 Flawlessly written Chapter! 👏

I'm eagerly waiting for the next chapter!

Love the whole update! ❤️



Continue soon! 😳

Love you heaps my baby sista! 🤗 ❤️


xoxo

Mina di! 😳
Edited by -Mrinalini- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Finalyyy u updated😊😊

when i started reading d first few lines i thought asya hav reunited but as asad was shattered as it was a dream even i felt d same...😭😭😭

u expressed ver well d emotions of asya ...👏👏

it was really a emotional part😭

plzzz unite dem soon na aise hi show mai toh dur hai ab FF mai hi mila duo...!!

update nxt prt soon and even a long one...😊


Edited by nisha150 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Stalking the ff silently! 😳
this part was awesome! 👏
The song was just like an icing on d cake... 😉
my heart went out for both of them! 💔
I cud feel their pain...beautifully written 👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome part yar
i love their breakdown
how much they love each other but cant reunite
song sequence was amazing nice work dear do cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Waiting for update since long time...Nice update.U showed AsYa's pain very well.Cant see them in so much pain.Hope Zoya forgives soon though its very difficult...waiting for nxt upate😃
Edited by manognasai - 12 years ago

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