#3|| AsYa FF: Cupid Strikes (Chp 13 to Chp 17) - Page 44

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Posted: 12 years ago
I thought they patched up but alas that was only a dream. It would take some time to trust him. So dadi forgives him. Afterall he is her grandson. Zoya's pain is nearly impossible to take away. I am angry with Asad but want Asya to be together
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Posted: 12 years ago
Beautiful update...very touching...i loved asad nd dadi convo 😃
Asad nd zoya dreaming about each other was beautiful...I feel bad to see both of them like this
I hope everything becomes ok between them very soon
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: -Mrinalini-

Trying to keep my comments simpler than usual this time! 😊

Brilliant Update as usual Mahi! 👏

Asad's dream was so beautiful. The lines were so mesmerizing!

Asad held Zoya's hands with his and started "I won't say what I did was not a mistake as I had done it intentionally. I won't say I couldn't think straight as that is no excuse. I won't say it happened because I was brainwashed as that was my stupidity."

"What would you say then?" asked Zoya softy.

Asad with tears in his eyes replied "I would just say that you mean the world to me. Loving you is all I want to do now. I know it will not be easy for you to trust me but all I need is a chance to prove myself. Please don't separate me from you because if you do so then I'll die..."

Zoya on hearing this removes one of her hands from Asad's grip and places it on his lips. She then says "Don't ever say that you'll die because if that happens I'll be just a soul living with no heart as my heart beats only for you."

Zoya then pulls Asad into a tight hug leaving no space between them. Asad hugs her back with equal passion.



This was sheer flawlessness! Nuzzhat and Ayaan are being really rude! But I guess it's Asad's fault on the whole!

Nuzzhat shoved some pictures into Asad's face and questioned "Do you recognize him?"

Asad looked at the photos and was quickly able to recognize the person. He said "This is Raghu. He is Ghafoor and Razia's right man."

"Must be left because you were the right' one" commented Ayaan.


Ayaaan... Mere Asad ko aise bura bhala mat bolo! He ain't that bad! I love him! 🤗

Asad and Dadi's convo was amazing! I loved the way Dadi supported Asad and told him to be strong and not give up! 😊



Zoya pulled out Raghu's Teeth to get the truth out???? 😲 🤣

"You will be needed her. Take out Raghu's tooth if he doesn't cooperate. And for help I am taking Asad with me" announced Zoya.

"Asad! No ways" retorted Ayaan as Zoya's words sank into him.

Zoya gave a stern reply "Ayaan, I am leading this case and I know what I am doing."

With this without any further discussion Zoya left the room leaving Ayaan to simply gape at her.


Zoya took Asad with her! 😲 *mind dance*

Scroll down for comments on the Song Sequence... 😳


Originally posted by: -Mrinalini-

Song Sequence...

Beautiful song chosen for the scenario. 👏

Their breakdown was so beautifully shown throughout the song. The way Zoya trying to avoid Asad and Asad trying to give her space alongside trying the get back.

When Zoya fell and expected to land in Asad's arms but unfortunately fell and then later dreamed of Asad giving her his hand..

The silence in the drive back home... 😒

Asad tried his dream to turn to reality but Zoya shrugged him off. It ain't so easy! 😭 The breakdown was so amazing.


Asad remembering his proposal to Zoya and sitting down on the beach alone. And the RAIN! 👏



Zoya trying to distract her mind from everything! I'm really sad for her! 😭 Flawlessly written Chapter! 👏

I'm eagerly waiting for the next chapter!

Love the whole update! ❤️



Continue soon! 😳

Love you heaps my baby sista! 🤗 ❤️


xoxo

Mina di! 😳


Simpler than usual 😲

Your comments are never simple

They are brilliant as always

I totally love it

Asad is suffering and yes it is hard even for me to write that

Love you loads

your comment is my main encouragement

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: nisha150

Finalyyy u updated😊😊

when i started reading d first few lines i thought asya hav reunited but as asad was shattered as it was a dream even i felt d same...😭😭😭

u expressed ver well d emotions of asya ...👏👏

it was really a emotional part😭

plzzz unite dem soon na aise hi show mai toh dur hai ab FF mai hi mila duo...!!

update nxt prt soon and even a long one...😊



It is really painful for me too see AsYa like this too but it is important to show that

Because of the show even I am upset

And I totally love your feedback though

This one was 3,000+ words... longer than this is tough

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: elenaa

Stalking the ff silently! 😳
this part was awesome! 👏
The song was just like an icing on d cake... 😉
my heart went out for both of them! 💔
I cud feel their pain...beautifully written 👏


I wanted my readers to feel the pain

I am glad you felt it

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: SacredLove

Awesome part yar
i love their breakdown
how much they love each other but cant reunite
song sequence was amazing nice work dear do cont soon


Glad you liked and understood it

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: manognasai

Waiting for update since long time...Nice update.U showed AsYa's pain very well.Cant see them in so much pain.Hope Zoya forgives soon though its very difficult...waiting for nxt upate😃


Zoya will take time to accept Asad back in her life

But will forgive soon

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: PreetLuvKSG

Awsm like always...
😭


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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: awesome

this part was awesome!


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