#3|| AsYa FF: Cupid Strikes (Chp 13 to Chp 17)

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PreetLuvKSG

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Posted: 12 years ago

#421

Awsm like always...
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Divi.C

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Posted: 12 years ago

#422

superb...i just loved this n this is my fav song...yhanx 4 adding this song bcz the song itselg is heart touching and so as update...

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Mrinalini

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Posted: 12 years ago

#423

Comments Updated! 🤗

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Soumya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#424

cn't take it any more yr. Plz unit them

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rajnid68

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Posted: 12 years ago

#425

with pain between them. .

will they be able to meet midway. .

or one will cut across due to no will power...

trust can be easily broken...but takes ages to mend..

hope asad has a strong strong will power. ..

both near yet far...

thanks for the pm

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aman

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Posted: 12 years ago

#426

superb update... hope asad gets zoya soon

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Mehvish Fatima

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Posted: 12 years ago

#427

wow!!

So painful update

Ateast Asad hav his AMmi nd Dadi by his side!!

lovd d dream seq😊

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snehasya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#428

I didn't got pm for this update but when I saw the topic up I had to watch it and I am relieved that I saw and what a update yaar loved it and song I just loved it it felt properly with the backdrop of the situation and wow she is also waiting for him to come and hold her just like he wants to and she wants him to be there everytime she needs any help ayaan and nujhat are overreacting now I agree asad is at faul but be aleast civil to him poor asad my heart goes to him poor baby he saw all the bad thing at very early age and people used him as a doll give him a chance he will prove it and I hope zoya gives the chance soon cause if something bad happens to him she wont be able to forgive herself to come out form this nice update loved it

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Nitika

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Posted: 12 years ago

#429

Mahi you are an awesome writer👏

Awesome Part

So brilliantly written

The dream sequence was just wow🤗

"Zoya" said Asad with a soft voice.

Zoya just blinked her eyes and started at Asad who was standing in front of her looking at her intently.

Asad held Zoya's hands with his and started "I won't say what I did was not a mistake as I had done it intentionally. I won't say I couldn't think straight as that is no excuse. I won't say it happened because I was brainwashed as that was my stupidity."

"What would you say then?" asked Zoya softy.

Asad with tears in his eyes replied "I would just say that you mean the world to me. Loving you is all I want to do now. I know it will not be easy for you to trust me but all I need is a chance to prove myself. Please don't separate me from you because if you do so then I'll die..."

Zoya on hearing this removes one of her hands from Asad's grip and places it on his lips. She then says "Don't ever say that you'll die because if that happens I'll be just a soul living with no heart as my heart beats only for you."

Zoya then pulls Asad into a tight hug leaving no space between them. Asad hugs her back with equal passion.

Bechara Asad😭

Nuzzhat and Ayaan are very rude😲

Dadi is the best😃

And the song Part was the best👏

I loved the song and it suited the situation so well

Hope zoya give her second chance😊

Best chapter and loved the flow of emotions

Luv Ya🤗

Edited by nuts_22 - 12 years ago

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Ayra Nuzhat

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Posted: 12 years ago

#430

Update kab hua?? Kaise hua? Main kya kar rahi thi?? Mujhe pata kyun nahi chala?? 😭 Ok Ok... Enuf of my crap!😃

Coming to the update!!

Wow!! This was such a beautiful emotional update!! It was beautifully written!! 👏👏

Poor Asad!! he dreamt that Zoya had forgiven him! 😭

Everybody is being so rude and indifferent towards him..They are right though...Asad still has a long way to go for their forgiveness!

Loved Dadi-Asad convo . Dadi in your story is a wise woman😉

Zoya interrogating Raghu made me laugh...yellow teeth...wisdom tooth..asking Ayaan to take his tooth if he does not speak up!!🤣🤣

And the song?? Perfect choice!!👏👏

I read this part of the update with the song running in the background and it gave me goosebumps while reading it!!

Zoya expecting Asad to hold her when she fell?? but it was all an illusion!! Her walking in the sands...His heart wandering towards Zoya while inquiring!! Them coming home silently! Her shutting the door and breaking down...Him sitting at the beach and breaking down!!😭😭 😭😭

Breaking Down!! Beautifully written!!👏👏

I have listened to this song 3-4 times! I want to be happy again so off to listen to "Mann Mera"😃

Love ya🤗

Edited by -HoneyBunch- - 12 years ago