FF: Through The Monsoon #3 - last part on pg 60 (21/9) - Page 48

Originally posted by: Rarepearl

Hey

The last two updates were beautiful. Sorry couldn't get to reply earlier, I was out of city.

Now the second last part was awesome. I loved the confused Zoe who couldn't catch on any signals from asad & ended up saying that he doesn't let her come near him nor go away. but Asad's reply surprised me, I wasn't expecting him to really kiss her & ask. but seriously can anyone be more dumb than our Dumb Ahmed Khan? I mean how can he forget what he said to Ayaan? okay now he was really amused to see Zoe so gullible & effected by him, wasn't he? I love him when he's on his teasing mode.

the last part was fantastic, perfect ending for the perfect, so in love couple.

I was glad Asad retrieved the drugged apple night video from his cell & remember everything. Zoe's reaction to the video were so real & obvious, because us ko koi sapna to nahin aa sakta na, that Asad loves her too when he never opens that sexy mouth of his.

but I was really glad that he cleared the whole situation with a sentence.

So the rain was there again to bless the two beautiful souls.

please do write another ff soon. you know we all love you & your writing, don't you?

Lots of love till the next we see each other.

Originally posted by: mochhug

Having Monsoon withdrawals 😭

😛

Originally posted by: goingreen

Haha and the irony is that it's pouring buckets outside my window right now :p

Well I did write a super super short story in the meantime: http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3748967

HAHA. Okay that was just a joke. But I am incubating a storyline for an OS in my head, just haven't perfected it yet. Once I'm pleased with it, I'll write it haha.

Originally posted by: mochhug

🤣

Well I'll be waiting anxiously for that OS 😃😃😃

Speaking of OS's, did you have a chance to read mine? I posted about 3 new ones in the last week 😛

Originally posted by: goingreen

Sorry haha I didn't see them!! Just bought a new laptop so I lost all my favourites. Can you post your index link??