FF: Through The Monsoon #3 - last part on pg 60 (21/9) - Page 47

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: mochhug


It's not bugging me at all. In fact I found out it was a lie haha. So still a little annoyed. But so happy it's not true. And Goingreen ji, you are VERY WELCOME. When the story is that good. Toh comments bhi lambe hone chaiye na! šŸ˜‰šŸ˜† I love that you based this on the Bol Na Halke Halke sequence I swear they should've done something like this after they made them remember (March 23rd Mahaepisode)

Aww you're welcome hun. You're truly a gifted writer. And you deserve all the praise and more. I really hope you get to this as more than a hobby someday. You really should consider it šŸ˜‰

I'm sure you'll come up with something. And writing light hearted stuff is the BEST way to not think about the current "pukish" track šŸ˜†

Hmm maybe do something related to what happens AFTER the airport proposal šŸ˜‰ (but without Tanveer. or maybe her getting exposed again 🤣 we can never get enough of the cat being punished šŸ˜†) Or perhaps a short SS about Asad's attempts to tell her he loves her šŸ˜‰ after Dilshad makes him accept it

I know you would do justice to these tracks if you were to get inspired for sure šŸ˜ƒšŸ¤—

Waiting anxiously! (No pressure šŸ˜†)



Haha thanks for the suggestions Monica!! I'm re-watching scenes, hoping to find something hidden somewhere in my brain! I do OSs or FFs, because I only know how to do really short stuff, or really long stuff hahaha so I don't know about an SS for now! I'll definitely try to think of something eventually (:
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: nisha150

This was d first tym i was nt happiee reading ur update as it was d last chapter...😭

yyy did u end it plzzz continue it...or start a new FF ...plzzz😭


the update had all d mixture of emotions heartbroken-as zoya thought asad didnt love her
sad,happiee,loveee,faith,trust ...i wuld say dis was d queen chapter of d FF


i jst loved d part asad showing d video...and dey remembering all thosee sweett memoriess...asad saying ab yeh toh pakka hai ki nakli nikah nahi hoga kyunki agale jumme asli nikah hai...was d supperbbb line...!!

asad kissing on d dimple smilee of zoyaa was amazingg...ā¤ļø

bth nt bothered of rain at all and immeresd in eachother was reallyy beautifull ā¤ļø

u such a AMAZINGG WRITER...šŸ¤—

plzzz i once again req u either continue dis FF or start a new FF soonn plzzz😭

and i guess dis was my longest commentšŸ˜†



Haha thank you Nisha! I love long comments hahaha. I'm really glad you enjoyed this story (: But I doubt I will continue it! It's come a full circle already, no point stretching it haha. Maybe I'll think of something new eventually (:
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: -Aswini-

goingreen, thank yo so much for giving us such a wonderful fanfic..Its a pleasure reading yur works..Expecting yur come back very soon😳

The last part brought back memories of Mangalpur madness how it rained when they kissed for the first time in the jungle



Haha thanks Aswini, it was a pleasure reading your comments as well (: MM haha how much fun I had writing that! Glad you liked both my stories as much as you did! (:
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: goingreen



Haha thank you Nisha! I love long comments hahaha. I'm really glad you enjoyed this story (: But I doubt I will continue it! It's come a full circle already, no point stretching it haha. Maybe I'll think of something new eventually (:


so write a new FF na soon plzzz..i wuld be soo happieee ever...as i jst hate dis days watching qubool hai

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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow...great update
Am sad it ends here
Loved it to bits
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: lovenderlily

Cool...A good read, enjoyed reading it..can't believe its over so soon...will wait for ur next..

P.s If you get a chance pls read my F.F. Turnaround and leave a comment.

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3744565

Cheers!!



Thanks (: I'll take a look later!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Cant like it as it doesnt works..
But how can u seriously think so cute... As asad nd zoya 's story...
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Posted: 11 years ago
wow amazing
i'll miss ur update
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Posted: 11 years ago
Plz plz plz write a new ff as soon as possible.. :) (pretty plz with extra sugar on top)...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey
The last two updates were beautiful. Sorry couldn't get to reply earlier, I was out of city.
Now the second last part was awesome. I loved the confused Zoe who couldn't catch on any signals from asad & ended up saying that he doesn't let her come near him nor go away. but Asad's reply surprised me, I wasn't expecting him to really kiss her & ask. but seriously can anyone be more dumb than our Dumb Ahmed Khan? I mean how can he forget what he said to Ayaan? okay now he was really amused to see Zoe so gullible & effected by him, wasn't he? I love him when he's on his teasing mode.
the last part was fantastic, perfect ending for the perfect, so in love couple.
I was glad Asad retrieved the drugged apple night video from his cell & remember everything. Zoe's reaction to the video were so real & obvious, because us ko koi sapna to nahin aa sakta na, that Asad loves her too when he never opens that sexy mouth of his.
but I was really glad that he cleared the whole situation with a sentence.
So the rain was there again to bless the two beautiful souls.
please do write another ff soon. you know we all love you & your writing, don't you?
Lots of love till the next we see each other.

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