FF: Through The Monsoon #3 - last part on pg 60 (21/9) - Page 46

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Posted: 11 years ago
i'm gonna miss this😭 now what am i gonna look fwd to read...but as they say "ALL GOOD THINGS COME TO AN END"...but that doesn't mean you get to stop writing...NO SIRREE!! You have loyal readers to appease 😆so pull out another master piece from your mind and make us happy😃 Pls write soon...And PM if you can...Thanks😛
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: goingreen



Ah you're so sweet!! I didn't mean to make you sad. I'm really very sorry for that ): And can I just say that I love how you've quoted parts of my update in green haha, you have no idea how much that pleases me :p I'm obsessed with green, if it isn't already obvious :p

And yup, I wanted both Asad and Zoya to be clear in the end that nothing had happened that night, before they come to a decision to actually get married, with no other obligations aiding them to make that decision (:

Yeah thunder played a huge role in my story, and I'm so glad that you've caught the significance of it so perfectly (: Especially about Zoya commenting about how the rain has stopped earlier, and then you said it was signifying a phase in Asad and Zoya's life? Right on (: And now the rain came back because this phase is never meant to end haha, just like you pointed out (:

Anushree, thank you so much for being such an awesome reader, I have always looked forward to your comments (: So while I'm definitely gonna miss writing this story, I'm gonna miss reading and interacting with you and so many others even more </3

But don't worry, zindagi bohut lambi hai. Hum hai rahi pyaar ke, phir milenge chalte chalte :p

Hey don't be sorry you made me smile everytime i read an update or a reply to my comment so a little sadness was nothing compared to that...
Can i say i didn't quote the parts in green deliberately it was just an accident..your obsession for green didn't even cross my mind once...first i was used blue,then i changed to another shade of green,finally i changed to this one and i was thinking to change it to red but then i dropped the idea and went ahead with this green only so i guess this green was your destiny😳
Oh i am so honoured and overwhelmed that you remember what i had written in comments about the significance of the thunder...just like a writers feels happy when his work is appreciated and acknowleged a reader feels happy that the writer remembers her comments and i am elated right now😳I am glad i could understand your story so well...
Aww i am going to miss you too and the story and i hope you start a new one soon but i really hope to see you around if i ever make a post(our views generally match)and i will be there on your post...
Well i have been an amazing reader only coz you have been an amazing writer😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
OMG... It got over 😭 I didn't even realize it was bound to. It is like reading a good book. I keep checking on all my favourite FFs time to time. Now that this is over I don't know what to do on this forum anymore. Anyways I can always keep re-reading yours.
It was a beautiful ending. Couldn't have asked for a happier or a better one. Zoya can be the really emotionally challenged one at times having the slightest idea of the proximity and feelings in a situation. I am glad you went back to that night where it all began. And also glad that Asad had a way to confront her about his feelings than 'Woh! Actually' you know the Emraan Hashmi ishtyle.
I have mixed feelings about this. Happy that it ended like a fairy tale. Sad that you just ended one of my escapes from the current track.
Anyways thank you for a beautiful FF. Hope you continue to write again 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: goingreen



Ahh I hope whatever was making you feel shitty is no longer bugging you! But anyway, thank you for the lovely comments Monica ji (: This entire story was inspired by the whole bol na halke sequence in the show, so it was meant to bring all those feels back hahaha, and I'm really glad it did (:

Monica, thank you so much for all of the lovely comments you've left throughout this story, despite the fact that I write such short updates haha, and on top of that you weren't in your element either, yet you bothered and I'm really touched! (:

About writing another FF... I'm totally out of ideas now haha. Need to re-watch old episodes and find inspiration, since the new ones are just making me feel pukish ):


It's not bugging me at all. In fact I found out it was a lie haha. So still a little annoyed. But so happy it's not true. And Goingreen ji, you are VERY WELCOME. When the story is that good. Toh comments bhi lambe hone chaiye na! 😉😆 I love that you based this on the Bol Na Halke Halke sequence I swear they should've done something like this after they made them remember (March 23rd Mahaepisode)

Aww you're welcome hun. You're truly a gifted writer. And you deserve all the praise and more. I really hope you get to this as more than a hobby someday. You really should consider it 😉

I'm sure you'll come up with something. And writing light hearted stuff is the BEST way to not think about the current "pukish" track 😆

Hmm maybe do something related to what happens AFTER the airport proposal 😉 (but without Tanveer. or maybe her getting exposed again 🤣 we can never get enough of the cat being punished 😆) Or perhaps a short SS about Asad's attempts to tell her he loves her 😉 after Dilshad makes him accept it

I know you would do justice to these tracks if you were to get inspired for sure 😃🤗

Waiting anxiously! (No pressure 😆)
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: goingreen



Haha me2you ji! Ahh I didn't mean to make you sad or unhappy haha, but this was what I had planned from the beginning, didn't wanna stretch it into something boring haha.

And yes! It was my plan all along to bring back that monsoon-wala night in the end of the story, to bring it to a proper close (: Thank you for quoting me in green hahaha I love green :p

Yeah I'm totally into those kinda quotes hehe, they can be quite motivating (: I wanted Asad and Zoya's journey to start on the note of a monsoon, and end it with the monsoon season still ongoing, because their journey isn't supposed to end (:

Me2you ji, I will miss you a lot too, your comments never fail to make me smile (: And I'm really touched to have found a fan in you haha. My writing style is just as such, light-hearted happy stuff (: I mean, life kinda sucks as it is, why write depressing stuff and add on to the suckiness hahaha.

Main bhi filmy mood mein hi hoon hehe toh isliye... Hum hai rahi pyaar ke, phir milenge chalte chalte! (:


I can understand that this was the way you had planned it. Koi baat nahin. You are the captain of your own story, creativity and imagination. 😊
Bas aise hi likhta rehna. Its your way of storytelling and writing which made me fell in love with your work 😳 Waise, I have a solution about 'I-will-miss-you and you-will-miss-me' wala thing...how about you start with a FF or perhaps an OS? It will be a win-win situation for both 😃Okay, okay, my intentions are not to force you but I hope you understand that we all are maha greedy and selfish 😆

Hum phir zaroor milenge...bahot jald!!! 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
wow


read last 2 parts

can't believe it ended

when do you start next??
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Posted: 11 years ago
this was pure brilliance ... thank u for writing such a beautiful story ... looking forward for your new FF
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Posted: 11 years ago
This was d first tym i was nt happiee reading ur update as it was d last chapter...😭😭😭😭😭😭

yyy did u end it plzzz continue it...or start a new FF ...plzzz😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭


the update had all d mixture of emotions heartbroken-as zoya thought asad didnt love her
sad,happiee,loveee,faith,trust ...i wuld say dis was d queen chapter of d FF


i jst loved d part asad showing d video...and dey remembering all thosee sweett memoriess...asad saying ab yeh toh pakka hai ki nakli nikah nahi hoga kyunki agale jumme asli nikah hai...was d supperbbb line...!!

asad kissing on d dimple smilee of zoyaa was amazingg...❤️

bth nt bothered of rain at all and immeresd in eachother was reallyy beautifull ❤️

u such a AMAZINGG WRITER...🤗

plzzz i once again req u either continue dis FF or start a new FF soonn plzzz😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭

and i guess dis was my longest comment😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
goingreen, thank yo so much for giving us such a wonderful fanfic..Its a pleasure reading yur works..Expecting yur come back very soon😳
The last part brought back memories of Mangalpur madness how it rained when they kissed for the first time in the jungle
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: mandarin26

OMG... It got over 😭 I didn't even realize it was bound to. It is like reading a good book. I keep checking on all my favourite FFs time to time. Now that this is over I don't know what to do on this forum anymore. Anyways I can always keep re-reading yours.

It was a beautiful ending. Couldn't have asked for a happier or a better one. Zoya can be the really emotionally challenged one at times having the slightest idea of the proximity and feelings in a situation. I am glad you went back to that night where it all began. And also glad that Asad had a way to confront her about his feelings than 'Woh! Actually' you know the Emraan Hashmi ishtyle.
I have mixed feelings about this. Happy that it ended like a fairy tale. Sad that you just ended one of my escapes from the current track.
Anyways thank you for a beautiful FF. Hope you continue to write again 😊



Haha even I don't know what to do on this forum anymore since I'm done with this story. I'm really glad you enjoyed this as much as you did, and even I'm a little sad that I'm done with it now haha. Thank you!! (:

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