FF: Through The Monsoon #3 - last part on pg 60 (21/9) - Page 44

Originally posted by: rutu83

1st bold: too true.. i kept wanting to ask you about that (RL got in the way and i didn't have time to leave many comments ) but you brought it back so beautifully
2nd bold: I'm with Monica 👍🏼 another ff pls. it doesn't have to be right away- take few hours off 😆- ok fine, a day or two😉 . honestly though, with the not so nice (i'm trying to be polite 🤓) track on the show, we NEED some good ffs. think of the good you'll do. ffs are the only thing stopping some from storming CVs office and...well you know. it's just good karma😃. btw that goes for you too Monica 😉

Yeah actually I had purposely put in the part about Zoya insisting they take a picture in bed so that I could use it here at the end of the story again haha, and I was a little surprised that no one asked about it again hahaha. Because I remember when I hadn't used the apple, I kept getting bombarded with question about it :p

Haha I will try to write a new FF if I think of something! Nothing is inspiring me as of yet, need to keep looking haha (:

Originally posted by: shreya_rc

Alas! It all ended. But of course it has to end so that we can hope for the beginning of a new ff. Ending is brilliantly perfect, green! I had the feeling of watching a lovely romantic movie, going mushy and sighing wistfully.thank u so much of being our polestar in these gloomy nights(of actual asya land)

Hi Shreya! I'm glad that you enjoyed this story as much as you did, I was going for the whole rom-com style feel-good story (: Thank you!! (:

IT'S OVER?! NAHIII! 😭 😭 😭

Originally posted by: Asya-Rm

Ohh my my Asad ka phone toh kamaal hi h!!😲
Apne aap sab record kar leta h 🤣

I loved this so so much 😃

And and this ended 😭
It feels so bad when something so good ends (:

Koi na Hope to se you with some new story very soon 😎



Ps. Aapke us kiss ka kissa humein taumar yaad rahega 😳 😆

I'm glad ke kissa kiss ka has left such a great impact on you :p Glad you enjoyed this story as much as you did (:

Originally posted by: MisHumptyDumpty

you love imran hasmi right? 😆

but happy a new one will start :))

Haha what a cute picture!! Well actually Emraan Hashmi is a close second, my favourite is still Imran Khan <3 Glad you enjoyed this story as much as you did (:

Originally posted by: --starstruck--

It got over? :O

well every great things have to end one day and i really loved this FF! it's always a pleasure reading ur stuff! I hope you come up with an amazing plot super soon! till then please do keep posting OS or drabbles or anything

I'm glad you enjoyed it!! (: I will need to think through another story first haha, but yeah if I think of something short I will definitely write that first (:

Originally posted by: me2you

As much as I want to make a happy face, feel happy and all, its not possible

Tum yeh jaan boochkar kar rahi ho na...kyunki tumhe pata hai we don't like this FF to end... 😭

I just can't believe this is the last part!!! 😲 Was it a good ending? YES. Did I like it? YES

Did it live up to my expectations? BIG YES. Do I want this to end? NO. Am I happy that this was the last part? NO because I wanted more!

Acha theek hai, I don't want to make you feel bad with my 'last' comment...so, like always, I will be nice to you 😆

Loved the way you brought back the memory of that naasha wala night. That was indeed a night to remember, not only for them, but also for us as readers 😳

"Yeh bhi aapke wajeh se Miss Farooqui. Aap agar mere zindagi mein nahi aati, toh shayad mujhe kabhi bhi pata hi nahi chalta ke mere seene mein patthar nahi, dil hai," (Akhri baar..romantic wala Mr. Akdu Ahmed Khan) 😳😆

"Aapko bhi sab kuch yaad aagaya?" (Not only Mr. Khan, but humein bhi sab kuch yaad hain) 😉

Par nakli nahi, asli nikaah," (How I wished to see their nikaah and their...☺️ khair choro, ab batane se kya faida) 😔

when the monsoon is the reason they had gotten where they were now? (Beautiful. This monsoon meant a lot for them and for us)

life isn't about waiting for the storm to pass. It's about learning to dance in the rain (This is not cheesy at all. I guess, you are also very much into famous quotes and all, because I am) 😃

Green ji, mein tumhe kaise batao that I am really sad this one is over. All good things come to an end right... Today, I want to say: I AM YOUR FAN! 😃

I was already a fan of yours with Mangalpur Madness, but I never said it. Woh kya hai na, Mr. Asad Ahmed Khan ka side wala effect hai yeh 😆 (Emotionally challenged) 😛

Your writing skill is so light, that reading your story becomes so easy and delightful. Your romantic scenes are cute, sweet, adorable and have the right amount of romance in it. You are really talented. That is why, I ask you to please please please start a new FF soon.

There are tons of fans waiting for you at the forum to be swept away by your imagination and creativity. I belong to one of those! 😃

Oh if you were thinking that I am gonna say alvida...then you are mistaken miss ji!

Mein kahin nahin jaa rahi hoon aur tum bhi nahin. Tum bhi yahan, hum bhi yahan and once again, we all are waiting eagerly for your next adventure.

Jeena yahan, marna yahan, iske siwa jaana kaha...

(Okay that is a bit too dramatic..lagta aaj mein kaafi fimly mood mein hoon) 🤔😆

Yes, I will miss you! Lekin, I will also say: see you very soon!!! 😃

🤗🤗🤗

Haha me2you ji! Ahh I didn't mean to make you sad or unhappy haha, but this was what I had planned from the beginning, didn't wanna stretch it into something boring haha.

And yes! It was my plan all along to bring back that monsoon-wala night in the end of the story, to bring it to a proper close (: Thank you for quoting me in green hahaha I love green :p

Yeah I'm totally into those kinda quotes hehe, they can be quite motivating (: I wanted Asad and Zoya's journey to start on the note of a monsoon, and end it with the monsoon season still ongoing, because their journey isn't supposed to end (:

Me2you ji, I will miss you a lot too, your comments never fail to make me smile (: And I'm really touched to have found a fan in you haha. My writing style is just as such, light-hearted happy stuff (: I mean, life kinda sucks as it is, why write depressing stuff and add on to the suckiness hahaha.

Main bhi filmy mood mein hi hoon hehe toh isliye... Hum hai rahi pyaar ke, phir milenge chalte chalte! (:

Originally posted by: mysticlover

N there it ends my favorite ff...
Awesome... wonderful... beautiful... I can use a hundred words to describe this monsoon journey but they would hardly suffice the pure bliss this story brings to me...
It could never have such a beautiful conclusion than this...

Aw thank you! I'm really flattered (: And I'm really happy to have made you happy (: Thank you!! (:

Originally posted by: -HoneyBunch-

Fab update as always!! The end was beautiful!!

This FF was beautiful and brilliantly written!!👏👏..I loved the Monsoon😊

I am going to miss this FF like crazy and why do good things end so soon??😭

Please start a new FF when you have time!! Pretty please!!

Hey Ayra, thank you so much (: You have to be the most determined stalker of my story, and I'm really touched about that (: I will write something new if I think of something!! (: Really glad you enjoyed this story as much as you did (:

Originally posted by: DancingDiva.

YOU ENDED IT? HOW COULD YOU?! :(

Lovely update with them in the rain and the dil wala part and I'm glad asad showed zoya the video. <3

And come back soon with a FF *begs*

-Nisha

HI Nisha (: Really glad you liked it haha and sorry for ending it! I hadn't planned anything beyond this, and I didn't wanna stretch it without planning! I will come back with something new if I think of something, kinda blank at the moment haha. But anyway, thank you!! (: