FF: Through The Monsoon #3 - last part on pg 60 (21/9) - Page 43

Originally posted by: anushreemishra

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Can i just say that this was the first time that i wasn't happy while reading one of your updates😭no no hold your horses you were amazing as usual but all i could think was that this was the last chapter and made me so so so sad😭😭i mean yes i knew that this was coming and i thought i would be ohk well not really ohk but i would be able to handle this better but no i took it worse than my expectations😭😭sorry for the rant but i really felt sad...the first time that i read the update all i could think was that this is the last update but no worries i read it a second time and enjoyed it like hell...

now well coming to the update need i say it again it was amazing like always

Asad had pulled away a while ago, and he had even let go of her hand, but Zoya hadn't moved at all. She kept her palm pressed against Asad's chest, as she marvelled at the speed of his heartbeats. She looked up after a while, to make eye contact with Asad's smouldering gaze

I loved how you showed that asad pulled away but zoya still had her hands on his chest listening to his heartbeats and looking into his eyes in order to find the assurance that she wasn't just an experiment for him that he didn't remain unaffected by their making out sessions that just like he meant a lot to her she meant a for him too...beautiful significance of a little gesture...

I loved how you showed that they saw the video and finally came to know all what happened that eventful night...

The sound of thunder erupted from the phone.

I love how you never let your thunder get away from the story...when the thunder could be heard in the background it was a reminder of the beautiful phase that asad nd zoya shared and i loved how you brought that out

"Yeh bhi aapke wajeh se Miss Farooqui. Aap agar mere zindagi mein nahi aati, toh shayad mujhe kabhi bhi pata hi nahi chalta ke mere seene mein patthar nahi, dil hai,"

I am so glad that they both heard that i think that was the first time that asad explicitely expressed in words how much zoya affected him and how she melted him

"Sab kuch. And also the fact that nothing happened between us that night, because we'd just fallen asleep next to each other after that,"

These lines are so significant...it shows that since now they know nothing happened between them that night any decision that they made from now on will completely be their own and nothing something forced or taken out of guilt

"So that's why you showed me this? So we can go and tell Phuphi that nothing happened? And we won't need to go on with this nakli nikaah,"

OMG zoya how oblivious and naive are you?women they don't believe until they hear the exact words right

"You're right, we won't need to go on with this nakli nikaah. Because whether we tell Ammi or not, having a nakli nikaah is totally out of the question. Jumme ko nikaah toh hoga. Par nakli nahi, asli nikaah,"

Yes finally finally finally...no more wo actually no more talking in riddles no more confusion asad speaks his heart out with clarity and with no hesitation...i am proud of you my asad miyan and the confidence with which he said that ki nikaah hoga was amazing...zoya may not feel confident about asad's feelings for her but asad had no doubt...beautiful beautiful beautiful

And he drops a kiss again nd this time zoya captures his lips with hers confirming that asad's confidence in his propoal😳and she laces her fingers with his never to part them again😳

A drop of water fell on Zoya's cheek, and another fell on Asad's nose, making them instinctively pull away from each other and look up at the sky. A flash of lightning danced across the sky, as a roll of thunder followed in quick succession.

Can i just say i loved how you brought the rain nd the thunder and the lightening back...asya's monsoon monsoon is here to stay forever...this makes zoya's lines in the previous update about monsoon ending even more significant...she thought that the phase that they have enjoyed so far has ended but it didn't it is here to stay forever and ever

Yet, neither or them made any attempt to get back indoors, choosing instead to reach for each other and involve themselves in yet another kiss, as water trailed down their faces. Why should they hide from the monsoon, when the monsoon is the reason they had gotten where they were now?

They did learn that there is no point hiding from something that will stay with them forever...can i say i have never loved thunder more than i did in your story

Asad gathered Zoya closer to his body, as they found warmth in each others company, kissing and laughing as the thunder continued to roar in the background. If there was one thing they knew now for sure, it was that life isn't about waiting for the storm to pass. It's about learning to dance in the rain.

@Italics you never let go of thunder do you...but well i love that...that thunder in asya's life their passion,their attraction their love is here to stay always with them...they will be together though good time and through storms dancing together and making the best of it...perfect lines to end a beautiful story...it couln't have been better

Sorry i went a little overboard with my comment didn't I?but what could i do i just couldn't stop myself it was like that the thoughts were just flowing into my mind😳and the beautiful lines and the fact that i could dissect each of those and understand what each and every word meant didn't make it easier😳

I hope i did justice to this wonderful story of yours...i am going to miss it like hell..i will miss you n your updates your updates a little more nah i was just joking i am going to miss you a lot too and your till next time makes me a little happy that iu think i will see you soon..please say i am right

neways as promised a long comment infact a very long one now chalo i want a long wala reply

Love you🤗

Ah you're so sweet!! I didn't mean to make you sad. I'm really very sorry for that ): And can I just say that I love how you've quoted parts of my update in green haha, you have no idea how much that pleases me :p I'm obsessed with green, if it isn't already obvious :p

And yup, I wanted both Asad and Zoya to be clear in the end that nothing had happened that night, before they come to a decision to actually get married, with no other obligations aiding them to make that decision (:

Yeah thunder played a huge role in my story, and I'm so glad that you've caught the significance of it so perfectly (: Especially about Zoya commenting about how the rain has stopped earlier, and then you said it was signifying a phase in Asad and Zoya's life? Right on (: And now the rain came back because this phase is never meant to end haha, just like you pointed out (:

Anushree, thank you so much for being such an awesome reader, I have always looked forward to your comments (: So while I'm definitely gonna miss writing this story, I'm gonna miss reading and interacting with you and so many others even more </3

But don't worry, zindagi bohut lambi hai. Hum hai rahi pyaar ke, phir milenge chalte chalte :p

Originally posted by: mochhug

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AHH!!! I was sooo happy!!! Such a fabulous update!!!

Sorry for my lack of normal enthusiasm for the last update. Actually half of it was that i was recovering from Jahapana's Don Juan behaviour, I mean was that REALLY him!? The way he so authoritatively pulled her in for a kiss. No questions. And to shut her up 😆 How I wish a man would shut me up like that ☺️ And the other half was that I was feeling shitty about something.. but I'm trying to look at the bright side. 😊

AND OMG WHEN HE PUT HER HAND ON HIS HEART!!?!!!?!?!! I LOVED THAT!?!?!?!! I SO WANT THAT TO HAPPEN TO ME. Sach Goingreen Ji, aapne KAMAL ka update diya tha 😳 And THIS is the comment I should've left for you 😃😆

Now, on to the final (😭) part.

I agree with rutu ji 😆 I could hear Bol Na Halke Halke playing in my head as I read this update, especially when they were dancing in the pouring rain. So sweetly done.

I LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE that you showed the recording of their night! Silly Zoya, still doubting what he means after feeling how she makes him feel. But I love that he just let the video speak for itself, and how she instantly remembered the WHOLE night. Their adorable moments, their banter, their drunken and funny state. Such a nice way to bring back the innocent yet passionate and sweet naivety they went through before realizing what they meant to each other.

Simply brilliant.

Please please please please please please please do another FF. I beg you! Not now. But SOON. Please

Ahh I hope whatever was making you feel shitty is no longer bugging you! But anyway, thank you for the lovely comments Monica ji (: This entire story was inspired by the whole bol na halke sequence in the show, so it was meant to bring all those feels back hahaha, and I'm really glad it did (:

Monica, thank you so much for all of the lovely comments you've left throughout this story, despite the fact that I write such short updates haha, and on top of that you weren't in your element either, yet you bothered and I'm really touched! (:

About writing another FF... I'm totally out of ideas now haha. Need to re-watch old episodes and find inspiration, since the new ones are just making me feel pukish ):

Originally posted by: jasminerose

Hey it was a great story. Thoroughly enjoyed myself reading this. I always looked forward to ur updates. N now I m looking forward to ur next story.

Come back soon and thank you for giving us such great pieces of writing. :)

Hey Jasmine (: Thank you for appreciating my writing, that means a lot (: I will write a new story if something strikes me! (:

Hey, love it. It was the last part. All good things end. But, that is how it should be rite otherwise it appears to be dragging. I am so happy with the way the story shaped. Too perfect. Would love to read a new story from you. When you post a new one do make a note here too so that I wouldn't miss it. Or else if you have an index you could post the link here. That makes easier for me to stalk... :P Love it..

Originally posted by: LaVita-E-Bella

Ha you can definitely do it! I love how you bring in humor to your stories in such a clever way. Love it. With the last update...amazing! I'm saddened you gave it to us soo quickly! =/.

You ended it soo well, not cheesy at all, it reminded me of A Cinderella Story where they kiss at the end with the rain finally coming down after the drought lol.

Loved it all. Aww the video brought me back to the first chapters. I'm going to go back and read them again now!

Yeah, I'm known as the one who cracks the best jokes in my social groups in real life haha, I won't even bother being modest about it :p Really glad you enjoyed the humour and everything else too haha. Ah I really liked A Cinderella Story!! But I didn't write it with the movie in mind, not that I mind if it reminded you of that anyway (: Shall take it as a compliment haha. Really glad you enjoyed it!! (:

Originally posted by: webuser7

😭 👏 😭 👏 😭 👏 😭 👏 😭 👏 😭 👏 😭 👏 😭 👏 😭 👏 😭 👏

That's my mixed reaction! I am crying because this awesome FF is over while giving you a standing ovation for a brilliantly written story. Boohoo! Wah! I am so gonna miss this one! Sob! Sob! Sniff! *Blows nose and comes back*. I hope you are going to start another one soon. 😒

It was a perfect ending with the monsoon. Loved the secret video. What a brilliant touch!! I just loved it.

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Until the next FF, sob, sob. *goes off to cry in the corner*!

Webuser7 ji! Boy will I miss your hilarious comments haha. Don't cry so much, it's making me feel bad!! I'm really glad you enjoyed the story as much as you did (:

Originally posted by: Curiousmind

I am sooo going to miss this story:( but I LOVED how you brought the video back and reminded not only Zoya but us the readers as well about how this story started. The video has made me wanna go back and read the story from the beginning.

Your "mangalpur madness" had me hooked to your writing and this story just affirmed your brilliance as a writer. Looking eagerly to your next story because I know I will love it just like I loved your two other stories. Hurry and write more cause we are waiting:)

Yeah it was my plan all along, to bring back the video at the end (: I'm so glad that you enjoyed both my FFs as much as you did, I thoroughly enjoyed writing them myself (: Thank you!! (:

Originally posted by: Missvishtoofani

Aillah khatam b hogaya AWww😭

bk 2 d update

suprb awsm

It's about learning to dance in the rain. lov this line

Because life really is all about dancing in the rain (: Really glad you enjoyed it (:

Originally posted by: ranz

Beautiful---you began when everything was brown and kept us enthralled while everything around us was 'goinggreen'...the entire country is now different shades of green thanks to the monsoons!give an epilogue please...

Haha thank you! This is such an interesting and cute analogy to use (: I'm really glad to have painted the town green then haha. Nah I don't wanna write an epilogue, coz this is how I wanted the story to end! Maybe something new in the future, when I think of it (: