FF: Through The Monsoon #3 - last part on pg 60 (21/9)

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-Aswini-

@-Aswini-

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: -HoneyBunch-

Aswini - Love your comment!!😃...esp the one in bold 😆😆

Thank yo😃 I reached the expectation of one fan😆

Edited by -Aswini- - 11 years ago

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-khaleesi-

@-khaleesi-

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#22

Tanveer's lamentation got recorded on Asad's phone!

Awesome update!! I loved it!!

Continue soon! 😊

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Prazeena Bhattarai

@Aneezarp27

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+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#23

brilliantly written!
Congo fo d new thread!

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Mehvish Fatima

@MissSparkling

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#24

hey first of all congo 4 #thread!!!

Awww d update was awsm!! bt i was wondring Asad kb apne phone me wo photo dekhe ga yar

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Nim

@Rarepearl

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#25

okay Congrats dear for the third thread. u & this story deserves a lot more of them & yes it's true, your frequent updates have really spoiled me atleast. I'm always checking this thread for new parts every other day.

hmm so you decide to bring back the witch part, it's alright, the story needs to move ahead. I just loved the part where Asad suspects her of being creepy & mysterious in her actions & those eyes. now if he only hears what she said out in the living room, it'll be so much fun. please it's request, don't make Asad so dumb in your story like they did in the show, please yaar let him be the man he is, like his name, a lion.

Congrats once again.

Love.

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Mahima

@Mahima_13

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#26

the best part of this update is that Asad suspects Tanu

yipee

and congo on ur new thread

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goingreen

@goingreen

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: -Aswini-
OMG I got the first place on yur thread, that means I've to write a really long comment, which I'm really bad at😆 OK lemme try.. dont get disappointed if it dint reach yur expectations and goingreen's fans pls dont curse me if my feedback is not upto the mark to be on the first place of this thread😆
Congrats on yur third thread🥳I wish yo never stop this story at all😳

Coming to the update...Brilliant setup for the story to move👏I missed Zoya😭 Najma is really silly man..she gave the phone to tannu just to escape from getting caught🤣 That bitch...doesnt she have any shame?🥱 Asad in yur story is million times brillant than the real one😆 Looking forward to more AsYa scenes in the next update😃

Yo are updating frequently these days and I appreciate that😳

Hahaha long comments are not a must! But thanks for leaving one anyway (: And really glad you liked the update despite the lack of Asad-Zoya scenes haha (:

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goingreen

@goingreen

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: hsvs
Okay, now that you have confessed that you are responsible for spoiling us! Please continue doing so!! And, can you put your books aside for a day and finish this entire FF. This bits and piece - updates arent satisfying! 😛
You do write very well! 😊

Good to see your Asad using his goddamn brains - something I sorely missed in the actual show and thankfully, your Zoya hasnt regressed to a screaming, shrieking, screeching banshee! 😊

Hahaha put my books aside?? Nah, writing this FF will not secure my future haha so I can't possibly do that, as much as I wish I could! Yeah I kinda got that people were expecting some kind of showdown between Asad and Zoya, but that wasn't my plan at all haha. Things can be resolved without screaming and shouting hahaha. Glad you liked it!! (:

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goingreen

@goingreen

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: LaVita-E-Bella
As usual awesome update!
Wish there were some Asya moments, hopefully you'll give us some next update!
But I enjoy Tanveer too, because I love seeing her fail and pissed off! But ugh she is such a pervert, Asad totally felt violated. Yes yes yes she was recorded! Can't wait for Asad to hear the recording.
Najma is hilarious..the way she smartly gave Tanveer the phone to put the blame on her. I was like that's my girl! Will we be getting any cute Najma moments in the future?

Well I love making Tanveer pissed hehe. As for Najma, well I don't think there are any more moments for her hahaha, but let's see if I can fit it somewhere. Really glad you liked it!! (:

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goingreen

@goingreen

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#30

Originally posted by: _Oishi_
CONGOOO For the new thread...
arre..this part is all about Billo rani..oh ho :( Lol

hope this will lead to another ASYA encounter ;)

Hahaha if you know me well enough... then of course it'll lead to an Asya encounter hahaha. Glad you liked it (: