FF: Through The Monsoon #3 - last part on pg 60 (21/9)

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LaVita-E-Bella

@LaVita-E-Bella

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#11

As usual awesome update!

Wish there were some Asya moments, hopefully you'll give us some next update!

But I enjoy Tanveer too, because I love seeing her fail and pissed off! But ugh she is such a pervert, Asad totally felt violated. Yes yes yes she was recorded! Can't wait for Asad to hear the recording.

Najma is hilarious..the way she smartly gave Tanveer the phone to put the blame on her. I was like that's my girl! Will we be getting any cute Najma moments in the future?

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Luckyforever

@Luckyforever

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#12

congrats for the new thread

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EkPagliLadki

@EkPagliLadki

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+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#13

congratulations for d third thread... nice update

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jasminerose

@jasminerose

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Posted: 11 years ago

#14

Congratulations for your new thread. The story is building and it is interesting. I m just waiting how tanveer will be caught and zoya will get out of her misunderstanding. Looking forward to future updates.

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@metoyou

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#15

Yaar, tum mujhe kyun villian bana rahi ho... Meine kab kaha I miss Tanveer 😲 Toh mere wajah se you gave us this update full with Tanveer ...

Khair chodo yeh sab...Thanks a lot for another update 😃 Yes, you are spoiling and you should because you know how much we love your work. Warna, talweer leke I will haunt you down 😆😆😆

Oh ho before I forget: congrats for your 3rd thread, woohoo!!! 🥳👏 Issi baat pe ek sher aarz hai... (No, I will spare you) 😆

Tanveer and her plans to trick Mr. Khan inter her trap. Nice try chick, but ain't gonna work this time! (At least, I hope not!) Waiting for him to get out of the bathroom and looking at him with those kaali billi eyes of her...🤢 That body with all that great-and yummyness is only meant for me (and sometimes Zoya as well) 😳😆

What did she expect him to do? Hug her out of gratefulness for returning his phone to him? (She expects much more than that but Allah ka lakh lakh shukor hai ke aap, Mr. Khan, hopefully itne bewakoof nahin hai)

See what happens to me if Tanveer is too much in the picture...mein theek se comments bhi nahin de pa rahi hoon😭 Phir bhi mera tumse ek request hai: please, jaldi update karo na ...

P.S. Please don't feel bad about anything what I have said, its all in a good spirit.

You know I love your work 😳🤗 And thanks for dedicating this update to me, again 😳🤗

Edited by me2you - 11 years ago

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-RM-

@-RM-

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#16

Oh so finally Asad started using his brains 😆
Hope he hears the Recording soon though i think he ll listen just on time then ll run like maniac to save Zoya 😛

Ps. Keep spoiling us update soon ;-)

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Ayra Nuzhat

@-LazyLamhe-

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#17

Congratulations on the third thread!!🥳

Enjoyed the Tanveer track in here...She is gonna be busted!!😆😆..Najma was silly and unknowingly did a smart act by pressing the recording button😉

Finally Asad thinks there is something up with Tanveer!! yay!!!😆😆

Thank you for spoiling us with frequent updates goingreen🤗

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Nitya Suresh

@TheAutumnFizz

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#18

Congratulations for the new thread..:):)

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Ayra Nuzhat

@-LazyLamhe-

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: -Aswini-
OMG I got the first place on yur thread, that means I've to write a really long comment, which I'm really bad at😆 OK lemme try.. dont get disappointed if it dint reach yur expectations and goingreen's fans pls dont curse me if my feedback is not upto the mark to be on the first place of this thread😆
Congrats on yur third thread🥳I wish yo never stop this story at all😳

Coming to the update...Brilliant setup for the story to move👏I missed Zoya😭 Najma is really silly man..she gave the phone to tannu just to escape from getting caught🤣 That bitch...doesnt she have any shame?🥱 Asad in yur story is million times brillant than the real one😆 Looking forward to more AsYa scenes in the next update😃

Yo are updating frequently these days and I appreciate that😳

Aswini - Love your comment!!😃...esp the one in bold 😆😆