FF: Through The Monsoon #3 - last part on pg 60 (21/9) - Page 4

Originally posted by: Rarepearl

okay Congrats dear for the third thread. u & this story deserves a lot more of them & yes it's true, your frequent updates have really spoiled me atleast. I'm always checking this thread for new parts every other day.

hmm so you decide to bring back the witch part, it's alright, the story needs to move ahead. I just loved the part where Asad suspects her of being creepy & mysterious in her actions & those eyes. now if he only hears what she said out in the living room, it'll be so much fun. please it's request, don't make Asad so dumb in your story like they did in the show, please yaar let him be the man he is, like his name, a lion.

Congrats once again.

Love.

Yeah, I don't understand why Asad never found Tanveer creepy in the show itself hahaha so I decided to add it in my story :p Glad you liked it!! (:

hi - I just started reading your story and its amazing !! I read the mangapur ff and now this one all I one go !!

Originally posted by: zara1ksg

hi - I just started reading your story and its amazing !! I read the mangapur ff and now this one all I one go !!

you write amazingly ! and I love that you give short but brilliant updates !!

my fave update was that kiss scene before ayaan popped up ! it was amazing !!

love , love love everything ! and hate ,hate hate tanveer !

why the hell is she ogling zoyas asad !

I think the phone mayb has a video recorded from that night they passed out ! don't know why I have that thought I my mind ..

but just love this story 😊 - you will see me commenting here now that I have joined your story

already waiting for the next update

Hahaha yay you remembered the video recording from the night!! Yeah it'll come into play soon (: Glad to see you here too then, and glad you're enjoying this story too (:

CONGRATS 4 D NEW THREAD

YOU GOT A NEW THREAD! 😲

plz have lots of asya scenes in next

Congratulations on ur third thread! *hands out boxes of Cadbury celebrations* *plays Lungi dance song* *dances n parties like crazy*
Only one word for dis update! WICKED! ;)

Keep it rocking dudette! Hmmm...wat shud I offer as a bribe dis tym for ya to update quickly??? *puts on her thinking cap* Aaahan! Got it! A sloppy wet kiss from a freshly-showered Jahapanah Six-packs if ya update quickly! Dats a bribe ya can't simply resist,huh??
P.S: loveee ur story!
P.P.S: I just hd dis crazy thought ...d way Billo Rani was eyeing Jahapanah...she is not gonna 'loot his izzat',na? Billo Rani! Back off! I vil spray u wid pepper spray if u make eyes at my Jahapanah!

Originally posted by: ForbiddenFruit

Congratulations on ur third thread! *hands out boxes of Cadbury celebrations* *plays Lungi dance song* *dances n parties like crazy*
Only one word for dis update! WICKED! ;)

Keep it rocking dudette! Hmmm...wat shud I offer as a bribe dis tym for ya to update quickly??? *puts on her thinking cap* Aaahan! Got it! A sloppy wet kiss from a freshly-showered Jahapanah Six-packs if ya update quickly! Dats a bribe ya can't simply resist,huh??
P.S: loveee ur story!
P.P.S: I just hd dis crazy thought ...d way Billo Rani was eyeing Jahapanah...she is not gonna 'loot his izzat',na? Billo Rani! Back off! I vil spray u wid pepper spray if u make eyes at my Jahapanah!

Hahaha actually I hate kisses in real life, I think they're quite literally sloppy and unhygienic :p So your bribe isn't gonna work this time hahaha. Glad you liked it!! (:

Awesome..loved it..