FF: Through The Monsoon #3 - last part on pg 60 (21/9)

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Ayra Nuzhat

@-LazyLamhe-

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#171

Res...

Unres

Tanveer!!! 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣

Let me dance...

I will come back with a proper comment!!

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I know I pleaded to kill Tanveer in the last update but what you did to her in this update was absofreakinglutely awesome!!! 🤣 🤣

Her frustration grew when she realized she couldn't even wipe her own tears, her lifeless body unable to help her in any way.

Tanveer bit back her screams, realizing that she couldn't even feel the doctor's consolation pat on her shoulder.

Tanveer ke Muqqadar mein yehi likha tha!!! ...Nahi ..lemme correct myself...goingreen ne Tanveer ke muqaddar mein yehi hi likha tha!!! 🤣 🤣

Let me continue my dance!!

p.s - When you had planned this FF, did you really think of this for Tanveer or did all angst did the writing in here?? Whatever be it...I'm loving it!!!😃😃

Edited by -HoneyBunch- - 11 years ago

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@metoyou

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#172

Yes another update 😃

Your mood is better or not? If not, let me try to make you feel better with my comments 😛

I liked this part very much. You used the muqaddar wala thing here (I guess you got inspired by the show) but you used it in the right way: Tanveer is paying for her bad deeds aur woh bhi kaise! That is how it should have been in the show as well. This is called muqaddar.👏

Okay so Tanveer is out...lets start with the AsYa romance and nikaah...😳

If you can handle the muqaddar ka khel so well, then I am sure your AsYa nikaah will even be better!!! Looking forward to your next update... aur agar mood theek na huyi, koi baat nahin hai. Take your time 😊

Edited by me2you - 11 years ago

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Santhosh Banda

@Santhu.The.King

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#173

Awesome FF.. Loved It... 👏👏
Update Soon...😃 nd Please Kill Tannu 😆

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Applef

@Applef

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#174

OMG!!! Tanveer...🤢

yeah.. this is what she deserves...

love you so much for doing this..

atleast we can be happy here..

when the cv's are not doing this... and giving us crap..

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Gudduluvs

@Gudduluvs

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#175

wow...d awesum...wat a twist..dis is cald twist...n mukadqr ka khel...luvd it...thnks

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Andreea

@chibi_deea

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#176

🥳🥳 Yes, it was Asad who found out first about.

Tanveer paralyzed 🤣 🤣 I know I shouldn't be happy, but I am. I am glad you didn't kill her because she deserves to suffer and what better punishment than standing there and can't do nothing except seeing those who she hates happy. Inside I'm sure she is slowly dying.

You're right this is what you call muqaddar ka khel.

Fabulous update! 👏

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Linsie

@Linsie

Trailblazer

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#177

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webuser7

@webuser7

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#178

Holy crap! Remind me never to get you upset!! 😆 Indeed the pen is mightier than the sword!

🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣

Jo bhi kasar bakhi thi puri ki puri bhadaas nikaal di aapne. Tanveer to gayi!!

👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

The sarcasm over the Muqaddar Ka Khel was dripping through!! How I wish Gul Khan and her "not so" creative team could read it!! 😉

Best part for me: Asad holding Zoya's hand and kissing it!

Payback is a b*tch and the billi got what she deserved. Can we please get some comic relief now??!! Pretty please!!!! 😃

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Lakshmi

@Chipmunks.

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#179

I just love you 🤗
You didnt kill her but well she is paralyzed, happy to hear that. I am sad about her miscarriage :(
I knew from the
start that Asad knew the truth. But when he said nothing at all at first I somewhat scared then when he said, 'Kithne jhoot bologi Tanveer?' I released my breath.
In your story I loved the word Muqadar ka khel. Gul should learn something from you :)

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anushreemishra

@anushreemishra

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#180

Can I say I am officially in love with you for this update...yes I love you ❤️❤️ 😳

You know at first when that bit** pinned all the blame on zoya I was so freaking angry but man you gave tanveer just the right treatment...I mean how can that bit** blame my poor zoya but well that's nothing new 😡

I honestly never thought that najma handing over asad's phone to tanveer would play out like this...I mean yes you did stress on the phone's whereabouts but I never thought that this was your ingenious plan to expose tanveer...

OMG I want to hug you 🤗

Man m so happy that you showed things logically here something that has been missing in QH...I know you are making up for that and Thanku so much for that...

Everyone knows about her pregnancy...yipee

tanveer lost her child...I am sorry to say but I am not sorry for her...I may sound insensitive but I honestly believe its better that she had a miscarriage coz no child deserves a mother as evil and sinister as her...you know for a second when tanveer was teary I felt a little bad but man when asad stopped zoya from sympthizing with zoya nd tanveer scowled all my anger came rushing back...man zoya was still ready to support her how innocent and selfless is she but m glad asad stopped her that witch doesn't deserve their sympathy and support...

And the best part you paralysed tanveer...karma is a bitch you one eyed evil cat...nd I want to kiss you for this ❤️ but don't get me wrong 😆

One of the best parts is how you used the word 'muqaddar'...the recent episodes really had a toll on you haven't they...CVS look this is how muqaddar ka khel should have been played...take lessons from this girl...I bow down to you👏

Asad intertwining his fingers with zoya and kissing her hand was so sweet...and I loved how asad hugged zoya when tanveer was continuing her nonsense and the last group hug was so sweet😳

So is tanveer finally out of their lives for good...?

P.S.-how many changes did you make to this chapter after watching yesterday's episode?😆

I love you bas 😳

Edited by anushreemishra - 11 years ago