AsYa (TS): His Beautiful Dancer *UPDATED* LAST PART pg.28

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rosamale

@rosamale

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Posted: 12 years ago

#71

Wow girl... it was awesome👏👏👏

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jazsidhu

@jazsidhu

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#72

hey tis is superb...

mind blowing...

beautifully written...

luv the way he said to her "your mine" n hw jealous he get when zoya is dancing with mark...

thx fr the pm n do continue soon n do pm me...

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NAVI55

@NAVI55

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#73

Awesome update👍🏼

I just love a jealous asad💔 especially when he goes all possesive over zoya...

My favourite part:

"Why?" She said almost breathlessly, the air constricting in her throat, making it hard to breathe. His lips curled up into a wicked smile the dimple in his right cheek flashing and disarming her suddenly. She'd always thought he was an exceptionally handsome man but his personality had put a damper on that. Now though, that he was saying these things and he was so close to her, she found her body heating at the closeness.

"Because you're mine." He said with a finality that both surprised and roused her. She couldn't hold back the words that were suddenly bubbling to the surface. "No . . . I'm not." She swallowed hard. He moved even closer if that were even possible and his lips were so close, she could feel his warm minty breath on her face. "You will be." He said simply as his eyes roamed her face before stepping back and leaving, shutting the door behind him.

Zoya placed a hand over her rapidly beating heart and looked at the closed door. What the heck just happened?

I could just picture this entire scene in front of me...My heart was going thud...thud...thud..🤪

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Mishti

@MayurnASYA

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#74

wow...just splendid...👏

excellently written...👏

love asad in your TS...he is different...

loved their conversation...😳

you are mine... gosh that man 😳

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Santhosh Banda

@Santhu.The.King

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Posted: 12 years ago

#75

That Was Simply Amazing... 👏
Continue Soon 😃

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Irisville

@Irisville

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#76

wow awesome, loved it i actually don't think 5 years is too much though, anyway that's my opinion though, just loved ittt😊 plz pm me

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Irisville

@Irisville

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#77

omg the update was awesome i mean part 2, i just wish that we can actually see asad getting jealous in the actual show it would be great to watch the treat. but i loved your writing plz continue

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delena90

@delena90

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#78

That was hot! Asad better not beat up my Mark...I swear I am totally imagining Ballas here. 😆

Poor Zoe how is she going to resist all that smexiness?? 😛