AsYa (TS): His Beautiful Dancer *UPDATED* LAST PART pg.28

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mrs. varun dhawan but you can call me fari. :)

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Posted: 11 years ago

#91

Awesome! 👏 👏 👏 I love this idea for Zoya's character, her working for Asad, and the fact that she's a dancer. 👍🏼 I've been a dancer for years (well, ballet and lyrical, but you get the point 😆), so I like that Zoya dances too! 😳 And I always like a possessive Asad! Continue soon, I love it! 😉

-Fari 😳 ❤️

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janestone6

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Posted: 11 years ago

#92

This is beautiful. Just waiting for the third part.

How is Zoya going to react to Asad after the "you are mine"

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-AppleOfMaEye-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#93

loved it,,,
buh wanted to read more n more...

thanxa,,,,...

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RAJ

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Posted: 11 years ago

#94

Nice update. So asad is jealous. Update next part asap.

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Shivanya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#95

wow..thats amazing

update soon n pm me

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Archana

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Posted: 11 years ago

#96

I like the confidence of Asad...
He's sure of what he does... both professionally n personally...
Perfect...

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Mahima

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Posted: 11 years ago

#97

part 2 was brilliant

especially the last para

"You are Mine" & "You will be"

WOW

SUPERB

i loved this curious and jealous Asad

update soon

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Tanvi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#98

Aw, this jealous and possessive Akdu sounds so dreamy *sigh*

Just as long as he doesn't beat up Mark - Mark sounds like a decent guy 😆

OR IS HE?!

Great update, Candy! Looking forward to the next one! 😃

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@metoyou

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Posted: 11 years ago

#99

Hey cclove!

Whaaa, I am going crazy after reading the second part. The way you described his movements towards her..UFF... ☺️Please do approach me like that Mr. Asad Ahmed Khan 😉😳

You are doing a great great job. Loved both the parts and I am already waiting for the third part. Amazing!!! 😃

Do you send out PMs? If so, please do not forget me 😉