Twists and Turns in the Lives of Asya FF (Important Note Pg.17) - Page 3

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Part 5:

Asad's Residence:

Asad is in tears. He is blaming himself for whatever is happening to Zoya. Asad is staring at Zoya who is in pain. Suddenly she faints do to poison spreading her body.

Asad: ZOYA!!!

Dilshad and Najma were looking at Asad in tears as well.

Asad's thinking in his head: I am bad, so bad. I just wanted Zoya to meet Akram one time to solve out the differences. When I reached to the Nikah house, I started fighting with the goons. I hadn't noticed Akram was attacking on Zoya. I wish I had saved Zoya.

Dilshad: Asad, the ambulance has arrived. Carry Zoya to the ambulance.

Asad came out of his thoughts. He picked Zoya up in his arms and carried her to the ambulance.

Asad: Ammi, I will go with Zoya in the ambulance. I told the driver to take you and Najma.

Najma: Bhaijaan, will Zoya be alright?

Asad: Tamatar, don't worry. All of us are with Zoya and nothing will happen to her.

Asad places Zoya in the ambulance and sends Dilshad and Najma with the driver.

In the Ambulance:

Asad is sitting beside Zoya's bed in the ambulance.

Asad: Zoya nothing will happen to you. I will make sure. I will try to protect you every time.

Asad holds Zoya's hand and a tear slips down his cheek and falls on Zoya's cheek. (Sad Mitwa).

In the car:

Dilshad: Zoya has never done any harm to anyone. I wonder why the poor girl has to face this all the time.

Najma: Ammi, if anything happens to Zoya, I will die. She is not only my best friend, she is more than a sister to me.

Dilshad: Najma, don't worry. Nothing will happen to Zoya. Nothing happens to people that do good to others.

Najma lays on Dilshad's shoulder crying badly and so is Dilshad.

At the hospital:

Everyone reaches the hospital. Zoya is taken to the operation theater. Ayan reaches the hospital because Asad called him.

Ayan: Bhaijaan, what happened to Zoya?

Asad explains everything to Ayan and hugs him tight while crying.

Asad: If anything happens to Zoya, I won't be able to live. Like Ammi, Najma and you are a big part of my life, Zoya is too a big part of my life.

Ayan: Bhaijaan if your and your family's love is with Zoya, nothing will happen to her.

Asad: Ayan, I hope what you are saying is true.

The doctor comes out.

Asad: Doctor how is Zoya

Doctor: Her condition is very critical. The next 48 hours are very risky for her. While doing to operation, she lost lots of blood. We need a matching blood group but the blood bank is out of B positive. Someone from her family may have the matching blood group.

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Precap: Someone enters Zoya's ward an takes off her oxygen mask. She has trouble breathing.
Edited by asya12quboolhai - 11 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Chapter 5...

Asya moment and the Mitwa... just love it...
❤️ ❤️
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Very interesting story! Wonder if Humeira or Ghafoor will give her blood!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Asad pain... in losing Zoya...

Precap must be tanveer... or damm akram




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Posted: 12 years ago
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Beautiful story read all parts i One go... Plz pm me whn u update...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Part 6:

At the Hospital:

Zoya needed blood. Someone related to her might have the matching blood group. But Zoya had no one.

Asad: Ammi, we have to get our blood test done to find our blood group. Who knows if one of our blood group matches with Zoya.

Doctor: I am afraid Mr.Khan that we don't have that much time.

Ayan: One minute, Humaira's blood group might match Zoya's. I once heard Mumani (Razia) and Ammi(Shireen) taking about mine, Noozat, Nikhat and Humaira's blood group. Humaira's blood group is positive B.

Asad: Ayan hurry up annd call her and quickly tell her to come to the hospital.

15 minutes later:

Humaira, with Noozat, Nikhat, Shireen, Rashid, Guffoor, Razia, Badi Bi arrived to the hospital. They came rushing to where Ayan was.

Humaira: Ayan, what happened?

Everyone from Humaira's family were so worried.

Ayan: Humaira, you know Zoya who lives at Asad bhaijaan's house, she needs blood and your blood group matches with hers.

Humaira started to remember that Zoya feed her sweets that had poison in it.

Humaira: No, I am not giving her my blood. She poisoned me. How can I forget that?

Asad: Humaira, Zoya never poisoned the sweets. It was Tanveer. Zoya was busy, so she told Tanveer to hold the sweets. Tanveer held the sweets and sneakily put poison in it.

Badi Bi: Asad is right. Zoya told me that she gave no one the plate of sweets but she told Tanveer to hold them.

Humaira: If you are saying so, then okay. I will give Zoya blood.

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Precap: Humaira gives Zoya blood. Zoya gets shifted to the ward. Someone takes of her mask and she has trouble breathing.

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Sorry for the short update. I am busy. I might do another update soon. Hope you enjoyed so far.
Edited by asya12quboolhai - 11 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice continue soon...




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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice update continue soon plz
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Part 7:

At the Hospital:

Humaira: I am ready to give my blood.

Razia: Why should my daughter give blood to that girl. That girl tried to kill my daugter. God didn't give her parents to she took out her anger on my daugter by poisoning her.

Humaira: Enough Ammi. You have no right to say all that about Zoya. I think you didn't hear from Asad so I will repeat, Zoya didn't poison me but Tanveer did.

Razia: You are taking me wrong beta(dear or daughter).

Humaira already left with the doctors, so it was useless for Razia to argue with her daughter.

Razia: Can you see Humaira's abbu, our daughter went to give blood to that ill-mannered girl.

Guffoor: Zoya is like my daughter so I don't care if Humaira gives blood to her. Razia, you don't understand, Tanveer poisoned our daughter so why are you taking your anger on the poor girl's life (Zoya). At this moment that girl is struggling between life and death.

Asad: I thank you (Gaffoor) and your daughter Humaira. You have done a great favour on us. At this moment Zoya's life matters to me a lot. (Mitwa).

Gaffoor: Beta, we are doing it for the sake humanity. Zoya is like my daughter and like Humaira's sister. Zoya may not have parents but she may consider me to be are Abbu.

Razia: Don't call yourself her Abbu. She is an orphan so let her be. No need to consider anyone else your daughter.

Asad: You are Humaira's Ammi so I am respecting you. Zoya is not an orphan. Her Abbu is alive.

Nikhat: Asad Bhaijaan, if Zoya's Abbu is alive, then why does she live with you and not him?

Asad: Zoya came to India to look for her Abbu. That's the biggest mission of her life. When she was young, she lost her Ammi and her father left her. Zoya's Appi (Zeenat) and her Jiju (Anwar) adopted her from an orphanage and raised her. A couple years ago, she found out her Abbu's alive and is here in Bhopal which is why she came here.

Noozat: Bhaijjan, how come Zoya's Abbu left her.

Asad: Zoozat, I don't know.

Shireen: Rashid, Humaira is here and so are the doctors.

Asad runs to the doctor.

Asad: Is Zoya alright?

Doctor: She is alright. The surgery and the blood giving was successful. We are shifting Zoya to her ward. She is really weak and needs oxygen to have on the oxygen mask for 24 hours since right now she is trouble breathing but don't worry, she will be alright.

Asad: Thank you so much doctor.

Ayan's family and Asad's family are both happy.

Rashid: I am so happy my friend Zoya is alright. Shireen, I think we should go home now its quite late.

Asad: One minute, Humaira thank you so much for giving my Zoya blood and saving her life.

Humaira: No need to thank me. Zoya is like my older sister.

Rashid's family now left for home.

Asad: Doctor, can I now meet Zoya?

Doctor: Yes you may but one person at a time. Don't give her stress. Its not good for her health and we have to keep her here tonight and tomorrow the whole day. She can go home that day after tomorrow. Make sure she doesn't speak much. 3 peopl.e can stay with her for the night.

Asad: Thank you doctor. Ammi, we all will stay with Zoya for the night and can I go meet Zoya first?

Dilshad: Yes you may Asad. After all you have been more worried about her.

Asad rushed into her ward and he finds her eyes open with the oxygen mask on. Zoya saw Asad.

Zoya: M-Mr. K-Khan

Asad: Zoya, don't need to say anything.

Asad went and sat beside Zoya on the stool beside her bed. He holds her hand and Zoya put her other hand on top of his. Both stare at eachother for a while. (Mitwa Moment). Asad breaks the silence.

Asad: Zoya, I was so worried for you. I am sorry. I couldn't save you from getting cut with Akram's poisonous knife.

Zoya: No Mr.Khan. It is...

Asad: Zoya, I just told you not to say anything.

Zoya: Sorry.

Asad: I don't think you understand.

Zoya has tears in her eyes and one tear falls down her cheak. Asad wipes it. (Mitwa Moment).

Asad: Zoya don't cry. Me, Ammi and Tamatar are there for you.

Asad kisses both of Zoya's hands. (Mitwa Moment).

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Precap: Someone takes off Zoya's oxygen mask and she has trouble breathing. Asad, Najma, Dilshad, and the doctor rush in her ward listening to her breathing noises. Humaira slaps Razia on her face.

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Hope you enjoyed. Sorry for the same precap for 3 parts. Ican't reach the oxygen mask part until later and now I am sure I will write the oxygen mask part in part 9.

Comment and I will continue soon. 👏
Edited by asya12quboolhai - 11 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thanks for the frequent update

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