Twists and Turns in the Lives of Asya FF (Important Note Pg.17) - Page 5

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Posted: 12 years ago
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hi!
just read all the parts in a go
they r awesome yaar
pls do continue and pm me if possible...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Part 9:

At the Hospital:

Night Time:

Najma and Dilshad go and sleep on the couches. Both of them are very worried about Zoya.

Dilshad: I don't think its Zoya for Zoya to stay in the Hospital anymore. Someone took off her oxygen mask and what if tomorrow someone does something else to Zoya. I will tell Asad to talk to the doctor that we want to take Zoya home. She is not safe here. At home we can take better care if her. We can hire a nurse to cheak Zoya everyday.

Najma: Ammi, I agree with you. Anyone can come and harm Zoya again. Even I think that Zoya is not safe here. I will tell Bhaijaan to tell the doctor to get Zoya's discharge papers ready so we can take her home.

Dilshad: Yeah Najma, we will think about the rest in the morning. Its quite late now so we should sleep.

Najma: Okay Ammi. Good Night.

Dilshad: Good night dear.

Next Morning:

Ayan's Residence:

Ayan: Ammi (Shireen), lets go meet Zoya in the hospital. We should find out about her health and if she feels better or not.

Rashid: Okay Ayan, we will go. Anyways where is Razia?

Razia is sleeping in her room. She wakes up and sees Humaira standing in front of her with a angry look on her face.

Humaira: Ammi, How dare you try to kill my Zoya baji (sister).

Razia: Humaira, why will I kill Zoya and how do you know she is your Baji?

Humaira: Ammi, I know everything. My Abbu is also Zoya's Abbu and you are her step-mom. Zoya's Abbu is not dead. You lied to her.

Razia: Humaira, listen to me.

Humaira doesn't listen and slaps Razia hard on the face. Razia wakes up.

Razia: Just a dream don't worry Razia.

At the Hospital:

Doctor enters Zoya's room. Asad wakes up.

Doctor: Good morning. Actually I am here to take of Zoya's oxygen mask. Her breathing is now normal.

Asad: Okay doctor. I will just go freshen up.

The doctor takes off Zoya oxygen mask and leaves. Zoya wakes up wanting water. The water jug is on the table faraway from her. Zoya sees Asad is not there.

Zoya: I think I will have to get the water myself.

Zoya gets up but do to her surgery on her waist, she scream and falls on the ground due to pain. Asad come rushing and sees Zoya on the ground. He picks her up and carefull puts her on the bed.

Asad: Zoya, why did you get up from the bed? You could have called me!

Zoya: Mr.Khan, I was thirsty and you weren't in the room so I thought...

Asad got Zoya water with her medicines.

Asad: Zoya, here is the water and here are your medicines.

Zoya: Mr.Khan, I only wanted water not medicines.

Asad: Zoya, the medicine are important, and the doctor said you have to take your morning medicines.

Zoya: But Mr.Khan...

Asad: If you don't listen to me, I will not talk to you and will be very upset.

Zoya, forced ate the medicine and drank water and smiled at Asad.

Zoya: Happy?

Asad: I was saying it for your good.

Asad kisses Zoya on the forehead and both of them smile.

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Precap: Razia, Akram and Tanveer meet sneakily.

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I hope you enjoyed. I forgot to include when Zoya had a surgery of the side of her waist, her feet got treated too so they don't have burned marks.
Thanks for enjoying and reading. Please comment.
Edited by asya12quboolhai - 11 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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quite intresting plz update soon
Edited by asyaarshilover - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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just read all the parts in a go
I love them
Please continue soon and pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Chapter 9..

Asad convo to zoya...

Some trying to kill zoya...

Lovely asya moment... ❤️
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Razia's dream 🤣 Humeira slap 🤣
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❤️ cute asya moment.. ❤️
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I will continue to updates soon. Starting next week, I will only be able to update on Friday, Saturday & Sunday. Please be patient. PM me if you want to ask or tell me something. If you have facebook, send me a request and I will accept it.


My facebook ID is:

Angel Pari. It has a picture of Zoya as the profile picture.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wowww,,,,,...this concept is sooo good n i really love it
Pls pm me for the next update
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Part 10:

Ayan's Residence:

Razia and Shireen were cooking in the kitchen. The family had to go meet Zoya at the hospital so Shireen had thought of cooking something for all of Asad's family as they haven't eaten anything for the past day. Nikhat, Noozat, and Humaira were making a big card for Zoya with all her favourite things on it. Noozat found out from Ayan what Zoya likes. Ayan had gone out to buy something for Zoya. Humaira had suggest a anarkali dress. Ayan had agreed with her. Rashid and Gaffoor were at office so Ayan was going to take everyone to the hospital.

Kitchen:

Razia: Shireen, don't you think our family is doing so much for that family unnecessarily?

Shireen: Bhabhi, it doesn't really matter. Even though we hate that family, I consider Zoya my daughter. She is also Ayan's best friend. Noozat, Nikhat and Humaira consider Zoya their sister.

Something was cooking in Razia's mind.

At the Hospital:

Zoya had taken her medicines.

Zoya: Mr.Khan, you should also go home and get freshen up. Phoopi and Najma went. When they come back, you should also go.

Zoya had told Dilshad and Najma to go home and take a shower and come back. She had asked Dilshad to bring her I-pad and also her jeans and a shirt for her to wear. Dilshad had agreed. They were about to come back to the hospital. Zoya was trying to convince her Mr.Khan to also go home and get freshen up.

Asad: But Zoya, I can't leave you alone for a second.

Zoya: Phoopi and Najma can also take care of me.

Asad had finally agreed.

Ayan's residence:

Ayan came home with the anarkali dress he had bought for Zoya. The whole suit was baby blue. The sleeves were white and so was the dupatta (scarf). Ayan had also bought a suit for Humaira. Hers was red with golden sleeves and a golden dupatta. Humaira came running to Ayan.

Ayan: Humaira I got a blue suit for Zoya. I also bought a suit for you. Your is red. I liked it at the shop and I couldn't take my eyes. I imagined you wearing it and you looked so pretty in it so I bought it for you.

Humaira: Thank you so much. I love it. Give me Zoya's dress. I will pack it in gift wrapping paper.

Ayan: Okay Humaira.

Humaira left to go pack Zoya's gift with the card. In the kitchen Shireen was packing the food while Razia was grumbling.

Razia: (To herself): I will have to call both of them to a cafe to meet. I won't go to the hospital. I will make an excuse and stay behind.

At the Hospital:

Asad had left for home and Dilshad and Najma came back after going home. Dilshad had bought Zoya clothes and I-pad.

Dilshad helped Zoya get off the bed and helped her go to the bathroom to change. After a few minutes Zoya had come in her white shirt and blue jeans. Dilshad helped her sit back on the bed. Asad had come back to the hospital. Ayan's family also arrived.

Ayan: Mona darling, this gift is from the behalf of me and my family and this card is on the behalf of Humaira, Noozat, and Nikhat. Ammi (Shireen) has bought food for you and your family since you were in the hospital the whole night.

Zoya: Robert, what was the need for the gift? I can't take it. Please take it back Robert.

Noozat: Zoya take it. Ayan Bhaijaan bought it with lots of love.

Nikhat: Zoya take it. If you gave something to Bhaijaan and he refused to take it, you would feel bad right?

Humaira: Zoya, I consider you my older sister. Take it for your younger sister's sake.

Zoya: If you all insist, I will take it.

Zoya nervously opened it and took out the blue suit.

Zoya: Robert, this is so pretty. I must say your choice is good.

Zoya looked at the card next.

Zoya: This card is so beautiful. I am guessing that Noozat, Nikhat and Humaira made it right?

Nikhat: You are right. Actually it was Humaira's idea.

Shireen: We just come here to meet Zoya and give the food and gift to you. It think we should leave now.

They all left. Asad, Dilshad, and Najma had the food. Zoya didn't really feel like it so Asad agreed with what she said. Zoya is surfing on her I-pad while they are eating.

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Precap: Razia, Akram, and Tanveer meet. Asad carries Zoya home.

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Thanks for enjoying. I will continue soon.
Edited by asya12quboolhai - 11 years ago

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