Twists and Turns in the Lives of Asya FF (Important Note Pg.17)

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Posted: 12 years ago
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This is the first time I am writing a fan fiction so please enjoy. And all the lines are in english.

Part 1:

At the cafe:

Zoya was about to get married to Akram but she ran away last time. This time Akram had called Zoya to a cafe.

Akram: Hello Zoya beegum. Last time you ran away but this time you will not run away.

Zoya: I never wanted to come here but Mr.Khan made me come here and meet you once. You are such a discusting man.

Four of Akram goons come behind Zoya and one of them drugs her so she grows unconscious.

Zoya, still somewhat awake says This Nikah will never happen. Before she can continue she grows unconscious.

Nikah House:

Akram's goons take her to a house. It is all decorated like for a wedding. Akram calls two women to get Zoya ready for the Nikah. Zoya is still unconscious. The two women get Zoya ready. She is wearing a red lengha with red blouse. The women used a peach net chuni and put it on her head. They put some make up on her and take her downstairs.

Asad's residence:

Dilshad: Zoya has still not come back. Its been over two hours. I am so worried about her.

Najma: I agree with you Ammi.

Meanwhile Asad comes home from office.

Asad: Ammi, Where is Ms. Farooqui?

Dilshad: She hasn't arrived home yet. Asad, I am starting to worry about her. Asad, can you go look for Zoya?

Asad: I will go right now.

Asad rushes out of the house like a crazy man. He quickly gets in his car and drives off. Asad now get stuck in traffic jam.

Nikah House:

Zoya is now somewhat conscious. She keeps on saying this Nikah will never happen.

Akram: This time I don't want you to run away so I will have to do something that will hurt you. Listen you two women, burn her feet.

Akram then passes the two women a long wood with fire on it. They bring the wood close to her feet. Zoya regains consciousness.

Zoya: NO NO. PLEASE DON'T BURN MY FEET PLEASE. I AM SCARED OF FIRE. KEEP IT AWAY.
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Precap: Asad beats up Akram and goons. Police arrives. Zoya is badly injured.
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If you like it so far, I will continue. Please comment.

Index:
  • Part 1: Page 1
  • Part 2: Page 1
  • Part 3: Page 3
  • Part 4: Page 3
  • Part 5: Page 3
  • Part 6: Page 5
  • Part 7: Page 5
  • Part 8: Page 6
  • Part 9: Page 7
  • Part 10: Page 8
  • Part 11: Page 9
  • Part 12: Page 12
  • Part 13A: Page 14
  • Part 13B: Page 16 {Updated}
  • Part 13C: {Coming Soon}
  • Important Note: Page 17
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Part 2:

Nikah House:

The two women bring the wood with the fire on closer. Zoya keeps on screaming and shouting. The women touch the wood around spots of Zoya's feet so she is unable to run away. Zoya is screaming in pain.

Asad: STOP RIGHT NOW!!!
Everyone looks at the door of the Nikah house, shocked. Asad was standing, looking at everyone in anger.

Flashback:

Asad is stuck in traffic so he gets out of his car and goes to the cafe where he had send Zoya to meet Akram. One of the gaurds tell Asad that Akram had taken Zoya to a near by Nikah house. Asad knew where the Nikah house was as he's been there a couple of times. Asad quickly runs to go to the Nikah house and save Zoya.

End of Flashback.

All the guests run away at seeing Asad. Only Zoya, the goons and Akram are left.

Asad startes beating up all the goons. Akram, pushes Zoya in anger and her head hits on a metal pole. She is almost unconscious.

Zoya: Mr. Khan.

Zoya faints after saying Mr. Khan. Akram thinks if I hit the back of Zoya's head, Asad will come running to Zoya and he (Akram) will run away. Akram hits the back of Zoya's head with another pole. Asad doesn't notice as he is fighting with the goons. Akram gets a knife slices Zoya wrist. He slices one side of Zoya's waist and he accidentally makes a cut on her cheek . Her waist, cheek and wrist start to bleed.

All the goons run away. Asad sees Zoya lying unconscious. Asad starts beating him up.

Meanwhile, Zoya somewhat gets unconscious. She sees Asad and Akram fighting. They reach outside while fighting and Zoya is still in the house.

Akram: I put kerosene around the house so if Zoya somehow doesn't marry me.

Akram grabs matches, lights it up and throws it onto the house. The house catches on fire. Police arrive at the place with an ambulance. Asad screams Zoya and runs into the house.

Zoya: SAVE ME!

Zoya is so scared. Suddenly she sees Asad and screams Mr.Khan and then faints.

Asad reaches where Zoya is lying and carries her to the ambulance. The nurses put bandages around Zoya's wounds. One around Zoya's head, one around her wrist, one on her waist, one around a cut on her cheek and wrap 2 bandages on her feet.

Nurse: When you reach home, call your doctor, he will prescribe medicines. Make sure she doesn't take any stress. She will regain consciousness in 3-4 hours and don't worry, she fainted because of a shock and her wounds.

Asad agrees with what ever the nurse said and carries her home. It starts raining so Asad puts his coat around her.

Asad Residence:

Dilshad: I wonder when Asad is going to arrive with Zoya.

Najma: Ammi, I am starting to get worried. What if something happens to Zoya?

The doorbell rings and Najma answers it. Najma and Dilshad are shocked to see the condition of Zoya. Asad carries Zoya to her room, makes her lay down on the bed and calls the doctor.

Najma: What happened to Zoya?

Asad tells them everything and both of them are shocked. The doctor arrives. He does the cheak up of Zoya. He gives a prescription to Asad and tells Asad to keep Zoya happy and not give her stress. She is in a shock right now and has a high fever. Please take good care of her. The doctor leaves.

Asad thinks this happened because of him. He shouldn't have send Zoya to a cafe alone. Asad has tears in his eyes.

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Precap: Zoya wakes up screaming. Everyone rushes to her room.

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Edited by asya12quboolhai - 11 years ago
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I am writing the lines in English but if you like, you can imagine that characters saying the lines in hindi or urdu. I hope you are enjoying it so far. Please comment and then I will continue after this part.

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Part 3:

Asad Residence:

Dilshad: Asad, go and get Zoya's medicine. Its almost time for her to wake up and we have to give her the medicines after an hour when she wakes up.

Asad: Okay Ammi.

Asad left to go and get Zoya's medicine.

Dilshad: Najma, go to Zoya's room and stay with her until she wakes up.

Najma went to Zoya's room and started talking to her while she was asleep.

Najma: Zoya, why does this always happen to you? You never harmed anyone and infact you tried to help everyone. You put away your all your pains and worries to the side and care about other people's pain. Zoya, please get well soon. Even though you are right beside me, I miss you.

Zoya started moving her head. She slowly opened her eyes. Her head is spinning and her vision is blurred. Her wrist hurt, her waist hurt and her feet hurt. She was feeling so weak. Zoya could feel that she has a very high fever.

Najma: Ammi!

Dilshad came running to the room and saw Zoya with her eyes open.

Zoya: Phoopi.

Zoya repeated saying the same things in a faint voice.

Dilshad: Zoya I am here. Najma is here. Don't worry.

Zoya starts recalling what happened at the Nikah house. Zoya starts screaming NO! NO!

Meanwhile Asad arrives home and hears Zoya screaming. He rushes to her room and sees Dilshad calming her. Zoya has tears in her eyes and is crying and screaming badly.

Zoya: Phoopi, save me!

Dilshad: Zoya, you are safe. You are at your own house. I am here, Najma is here and so is Asad. Najma goes out of the room.

Asad come and sits beside Zoya on the other side of the bed. He hold her hand while Zoya moves it away and lays on Dilshad. Dilshad caresses Zoya's hair.

Asad has realised why Zoya had moved away her hand. He held the hand on which Zoya had gotten a cut on her wrist. By now Zoya was calm but she still had tears in her eyes and her whole body pained, where ever she had gotten a cut. Asad held her other hand and Zoya closed her eyes.

Najma came back in the room with soup for Zoya. Before having her medicines, Zoya needed to eat or drink something.

Najma sits on the side of the bed beside Asad. Dilshad takes the soup from Najma hand and Najma make Zoya sit up laying on her (Najma's) shoulder. Dilshad tried to feed Zoya the soup but Zoya kept saying no.

Dilshad: Zoya, if you don't have the soup, you will feel worse. Please have it for your Phoopi's sake.

Zoya: Phoopi, I will have only a bit for your sake.

Dilshad started feeding Zoya the soup. Zoya hadn't noticed but she had finished all of the soup.

Dilshad tucked Zoya in bed saying good night after giving her the medicine.

Najma: Good night Zoya.

Asad: Good night Ms.Farooqui.

Everyone went to their rooms and went to sleep including Zoya.

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Precap: Zoya in her sleep starts screaming fire and save me Ammi. Everyone rushes to her room.

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Hope you enjoyed. Give me feedback so I can improve. If you want you can give me ideas. Thank you everyone for enjoying.

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