Twists and Turns in the Lives of Asya FF (Important Note Pg.17) - Page 2

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Part 3:

Asad's Residence:

Everyone's asleep. Zoya's has the same nightmare that she has every night.

Nightmare: Ammi, Save me! Save me! Save me from the fire!

Zoya doesn't know but she actually is shouting those words in her sleep. Asad, Dilshad and Najma come running to her room. Zoya wakes up.

Dilshad: Zoya, what happened dear?

Zoya: Phoopi, save me from the fire.

Asad: Ms. Farooqui, there is no fire here.

Dilshad: Yeah Zoya, don't worry, you are safe here.

Najma gives Zoya water and Zoya drinks it.

Zoya: Phoopi, don't leave me alone.

Dilshad: Zoya, nothing will happen, I am right here beside you.

Najma and Asad go to their own rooms while Dilshad stays with Zoya. Dilshad looks at Zoya and she has already slept. Dilshad slept beside Zoya.

Next morning, Dilshad gets up and sees Zoya still sleeping. Dilshad quickly goes to take a shower and comes back to Zoya's room and sees that Zoya is trying to stand up but she can't. Dilshad goes towards Zoya and helps her stand up. Zoya screams because her burnt feet hurt as soon as she touches the ground.

Zoya: Phoopi, I can't walk. My feet hurt, my waist hurts ,my head feels heavy and I feel dizzy.

Dilshad: Zoya go take a shower and you will feel better.

Dilshad takes Zoya's clothes out of her cubbard and she helps Zoya go to her bathroom. Zoya is done taking a shower and Dilshad changes Zoya's bandages.

Dilshad: Zoya, let me dry your hair with a blow dryer so you don't get a fever again.

Zoya: Okay Phoopi.

Dilshad gets a blow dryer and starts drying Zoya's hair. Asad is watching all this from the door with tears in his eyes.

Najma: Bhaijaan, Ammi, breakfast is ready.

Asad: Coming Tamatar (Tomato).

Dilshad takes Zoya out of her room but she can't walk.

Dilshad: Asad, help me take Zoya to the table.

Zoya: No Phoopi, I am fine.

But Dilshad doesn't listen. Asad comes and carries Zoya to the table. Dilshad and Najma are watching with a smile on their faces.

Asad and Zoya are just staring at eachother. Zoya looks away because she is nervous. (Mitwa Moment).

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NO PRECAP!

Hope you enjoyed!
Edited by asya12quboolhai - 11 years ago
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Review: My fan fiction started off with Akram forcefully wanting to marry Zoya, causing her many injury's. Asad saves her. Asad takes Zoya home but she is still in a shock after the incident. In the morning, Zoya has trouble walking so Asad carries her.
Now follow the rest of the story. Zoya is saved but her life is still in danger.

Continued...

Part 4:

Asad Residence:

Asad carries Zoya. Both are staring at eachother. Najma and Dilshad are smiling. Zoya looks away from Asad's face due to nervousness. Asad makes Zoya sit on the chair.

Najma: Bhaijaan, the last time you and Zoya couldn't get married because of Tanveer. Now that Tanveer is out of our lives, I think that you should get married.

Asad stares at Najma and Dilshad with a happy and shocked expression while Zoya is blushing.

Dilshad: Asad, Najma is right. If you don't have any problem, we can get you and Zoya married within 6 months. The best date is after 6 months and the wedding will be completed with all the rituals. I had met the Maulwi two weeks ago and he had said after 6 months is the best time.

Asad: Okay Ammi, as you wish. I wanted to get married to Zoya on the day of our marriage. I never knew Tanveer was going to do something like that. If Ms.Farooqui is ready to get married to me after 6 months, I am ready. (Mitwa Moment).

Zoya: Phoopi, as you and the rest wish. I am okay with the marriage. I hope this time Mr. Khan doesn't do what he did last time.

Asad: Ms. Farooqui, is that how you think about me?

Zoya: No Mr.Khan I was just joking.

Asad got up from the table. He was leaving to go to office. Zoya got up to follow Asad. She fell on the ground since her feet were burnt and she couldn't walk. Zoya was screaming in pain because her waist hit hard on the ground where there was a cut. Asad came running to her. Najma and Dilshad also got up from the table and ran to her. Zoya was still screaming and crying. Asad quickly carried Zoya to her room.

Dilshad: Asad, quickly get the cream used to put on Zoya cuts and leave the room and call the doctor.

Asad gave Dilshad the cream and left the room. Zoya was still screaming and crying in pain. Dilshad took off the bandage on Zoya's waist and put the cream on and wrapped the bandage around her waist.

Asad: Ammi, the doctor is here.

The doctor arrived. He was cheaking Zoya cut on her waist while Zoya was still crying.

Doctor: Asad Ahmed Khan, we have to quickly take her to the hospital to perform a surgery. Its an emergency. I will send an ambulance. Zoya Farooqui's cut is deeper and the knife she was cut with had poision on it which would have shown the effect the next day. If we don't perform her surgery, her life may be in danger.
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Precap: Ayan reached the hospital where Asad and his family are. The doctor said Zoya's in a very critical condition.
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I hope you enjoyed. Please comment and then I will continue.
Edited by asya12quboolhai - 11 years ago
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