AsYa OS: 16 Year Old Zoya's Last Three Wishes - Page 6

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Posted: 12 years ago
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For me to say this is perfection will definitely be an understatement

Firstly I would like to say THANK YOU for making her wear that dress again..the way I loved it and she just looked overly beautiful in that 😃 yeah Asad just looks amazing with and without everything on 🤣

Since the beginning of the OS all the way to the end, I had this huge ear to ear grin.. 😳 every single bit of description was spot on and you managed to me read this 3 times before commenting 😳

I loved the whole romantic Asad .. It was all like a dream his small gestures like holding Zoya's hand .. Opening the door for her.. Pulling out the chair for her.. Hayyeee ☺️ I swear I would faint if he was in front of me doing all of that 😳

Te whole carried made me smile so much it was unbelievable.. They didn't converse yet so much was said between them just by those little glances and them holding hands .. Just pure love 😳 imagining a blushing and shy Zoya just made me smile.. She's just tooo adorable.. 😆

The set up that Asad had done for her is just sooo romantic and dreamy again your spot on and flawless descriptions made it easy for me to picture everything in my head.. 👍🏼 I was hoping he would propose when he pulled out the first box but then you mentioned earring and I was like ooohhh so that's what it is 😆 her earring since the Akram fiasco .. Just killed the vibe 😆

Their romantic dinner date *sigh* if only they showed it I the show she he had actually planned for a dinner date without Tanveer interfering.. 🤬 But you made my dream come true.. Even if it wis imaginary .. It still happened in my head 😃 and your set up from what they were wearing to where they were is undoubtedly much better than what was happening in the show itself 😆

OMG Asad proposing on one knee is something I definitely want to see I the show.. Your dialogues again here were absolutely perfect.. R,acne with humour .. Wonderful combination.. Asad was being sooo romantic and all Zoya could think of is how many things he is hiding in his pockets 😆 Zoya will always be Zoya 😆

Now he rest of the things In the story.. Especially Asad sliding the ring on her finger and kissing it ☺️ they should show this in the show 😳 their talk was just wow!! I would love to see Asad like this in the show so bad! But we all know the chances of that happening are more negative than positive 😆

Mind blowing OS .. You definitely had to give this one after making me cry in your other OS - Boliye Mr. Khan.. Yeah it is another amazing OS that made me cry so this one made up for it 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#52
That was beautiful! Love how you kept it innocent, just like AsYa <3 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
#53
Monica - hats off to you, kudos and a round of applause - from me to you
for being an awesome writer.

That was beautiful and pure and I felt every emotion was conveyed immaculately
in your writing that I am dumbfounded for words to express how much I love this OS.

LoVe & WiShEs

Ambreen
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Posted: 12 years ago
#54

Originally posted by: Ambreen83

Monica - hats off to you, kudos and a round of applause - from me to you

for being an awesome writer.

That was beautiful and pure and I felt every emotion was conveyed immaculately
in your writing that I am dumbfounded for words to express how much I love this OS.

LoVe & WiShEs

Ambreen


Aww Ambreen thaaank you soo much! I'm really happy you liked it to much. 😳
P.S. When you updating Asad's Birthday 😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
#55

Originally posted by: mochhug


Aww Ambreen thaaank you soo much! I'm really happy you liked it to much. 😳
P.S. When you updating Asad's Birthday 😛


❤️

I have just completed part 2 and started part 3. But I'm just in the process of editing and refining it here and there. I'm hoping to post both parts 2 and 3 at the same time by the end of the weekend. Part 4 will be for later next week. And I'll PM you when it's posted .

😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
#56

Originally posted by: Ambreen83


❤️

I have just completed part 2 and started part 3. But I'm just in the process of editing and refining it here and there. I'm hoping to post both parts 2 and 3 at the same time by the end of the weekend. Part 4 will be for later next week. And I'll PM you when it's posted .

😳


Yay! Excited! I'm actually gonna post my OS this weekend too. People want us to send Forum32 ideas for his Bday so they don't forget it 😆 You should send yours too 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
#57

Originally posted by: mochhug


Yay! Excited! I'm actually gonna post my OS this weekend too. People want us to send Forum32 ideas for his Bday so they don't forget it 😆 You should send yours too 😳




I'm excited to read your OS 😃.
On a funnier note I have no idea how to go about sending the birthday idea
to Forum32, (insert scratch record here) yes embarassing. I'm new to all of this lol.
I'm assuming you post the idea on there in the comments section!
But I think you should definitely send your birthday OS, so far from your thread
- yours is far more appealing to me. 😳

Edited by Ambreen83 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Ambreen83



I'm excited to read your OS 😃.
On a funnier note I have no idea how to go about sending the birthday idea
to Forum32, (insert scratch record here) yes embarassing. I'm new to all of this lol.
I'm assuming you post the idea on there in the comments section!
But I think you should definitely send your birthday OS, so far from your thread
- yours is far more appealing to me. 😳


😆
Funny story, I've never sent anything either 😛. I only joined the forum in April lol. Still learning too. Just have a lot of posts cause I have no life outside of school and IF 🤣

But yours is soo cute. I haven't even planned it out yet 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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you're the best
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Posted: 12 years ago
#60

This is so cute. Where do you find these kinda gifs Surish?😊

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