AsYa OS: 16 Year Old Zoya's Last Three Wishes - Page 12

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Posted: 12 years ago
OMG! OMG! OMG!!!! this was BRILLIANT Monica!
I loved this!!! So romantic... hayeee jaan le logi tum meri, itna achha kaise likh leti ho tum!!!! Tooo goooddd!!!!!
Posted: 12 years ago

That was SIMPLY BEAUTIFUL!!! 👏 👏 👏
So romantic!!!! ❤️
How do you write so flippin' well?! 🤣
Do write more for us! 😉
-Fari 😳 ❤️
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Posted: 12 years ago
Beautiful!

When the first velvet box was pulled out, I thought it was the ring, but it was the earring. Very much liked that Asad gave her back the earring that too before his own ring.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Aww Wow!!...
Beautiful Os Dear!!..
Thanks for the pm..
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Posted: 12 years ago
PERFECTION! BAS.


No one sec,

Beautiful, Wonderful, Amazing, Mesmerizing, Flawless... Wait, lemme go look for more words and come back.
Edited by MrMrsAsyaKhan - 12 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: x_Mishti_x

For me to say this is perfection will definitely be an understatement

Firstly I would like to say THANK YOU for making her wear that dress again..the way I loved it and she just looked overly beautiful in that 😃 yeah Asad just looks amazing with and without everything on 🤣

Since the beginning of the OS all the way to the end, I had this huge ear to ear grin.. 😳 every single bit of description was spot on and you managed to me read this 3 times before commenting 😳

I loved the whole romantic Asad .. It was all like a dream his small gestures like holding Zoya's hand .. Opening the door for her.. Pulling out the chair for her.. Hayyeee ☺️ I swear I would faint if he was in front of me doing all of that 😳

Te whole carried made me smile so much it was unbelievable.. They didn't converse yet so much was said between them just by those little glances and them holding hands .. Just pure love 😳 imagining a blushing and shy Zoya just made me smile.. She's just tooo adorable.. 😆

The set up that Asad had done for her is just sooo romantic and dreamy again your spot on and flawless descriptions made it easy for me to picture everything in my head.. 👍🏼 I was hoping he would propose when he pulled out the first box but then you mentioned earring and I was like ooohhh so that's what it is 😆 her earring since the Akram fiasco .. Just killed the vibe 😆

Their romantic dinner date *sigh* if only they showed it I the show she he had actually planned for a dinner date without Tanveer interfering.. 🤬 But you made my dream come true.. Even if it wis imaginary .. It still happened in my head 😃 and your set up from what they were wearing to where they were is undoubtedly much better than what was happening in the show itself 😆

OMG Asad proposing on one knee is something I definitely want to see I the show.. Your dialogues again here were absolutely perfect.. R,acne with humour .. Wonderful combination.. Asad was being sooo romantic and all Zoya could think of is how many things he is hiding in his pockets 😆 Zoya will always be Zoya 😆

Now he rest of the things In the story.. Especially Asad sliding the ring on her finger and kissing it ☺️ they should show this in the show 😳 their talk was just wow!! I would love to see Asad like this in the show so bad! But we all know the chances of that happening are more negative than positive 😆

Mind blowing OS .. You definitely had to give this one after making me cry in your other OS - Boliye Mr. Khan.. Yeah it is another amazing OS that made me cry so this one made up for it 😃


A huge injustice has happened. I did not reply to your reply to my OS. I'm dizzy just saying that

Anyhooo RES! I shall reply to this soon! 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
^^ LMAO!! 🤣 🤣

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