AsYa OS: 16 Year Old Zoya's Last Three Wishes

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Monica

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Posted: 12 years ago

#61

Originally posted by: Surish

AWW thanks! 😃

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kiran khurana

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Posted: 12 years ago

#62

GOD! That was beautiful in every sense of word. SO romantic, so magical, so beautiful, so perfect, so flawless, so afkagjbajsfasaksnam. How do you write so well? HOW? You're so talented man! I don't even know what to say Monica. I'm just so happy to have you as a friend. everything in that OS was perfect. I was smiling an idiot throughout. I could imagine the entire thing. Why don't you join Gul's team and show this scene in the actual show? That would be like my dream come true. SO damn perfect! The way you describe the whole setting, emotions, characters is just perfect. That was beautiful Monica. Absolutely beautiful to read. Thank You for writing this! You're extremely talented!

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Monica

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Posted: 12 years ago

#63

Originally posted by: ..Kirann..
GOD! That was beautiful in every sense of word. SO romantic, so magical, so beautiful, so perfect, so flawless, so afkagjbajsfasaksnam. How do you write so well? HOW? You're so talented man! I don't even know what to say Monica. I'm just so happy to have you as a friend. everything in that OS was perfect. I was smiling an idiot throughout. I could imagine the entire thing. Why don't you join Gul's team and show this scene in the actual show? That would be like my dream come true. SO damn perfect! The way you describe the whole setting, emotions, characters is just perfect. That was beautiful Monica. Absolutely beautiful to read. Thank You for writing this! You're extremely talented!

Ahh Kiran you're soo flippin sweet! I don't how I just got this idea and I was gonna post it as a reply to someone's topic about her 5th with, or how he'd complete the remaining ones. But I suddenly got an image in my head 😆 And just had to put it down 😛 Sooo happy and soo flattered that you loved it soo much 😃

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kiran khurana

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Posted: 12 years ago

#64

^ You get same amazing ideas bro. I hope you keep getting such brilliant ideas and keep writing them for us. It's an absolute pleasure reading your work! I hope Surish's glittery gifs inspire you even more!😃

Edited by ..Kirann.. - 12 years ago

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kiran khurana

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Posted: 12 years ago

#65

Monica did you see Jazzy around today??

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Monica

@mochhug

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Posted: 12 years ago

#66

Originally posted by: ..Kirann..
Monica did you see Jazzy around today??

Briefly, in the Date or Dump Game lol. But otherwise, no. She's been hiding today.

Edited by mochhug - 12 years ago

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kiran khurana

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Posted: 12 years ago

#67

^^ She's such a bitch man. Im not even talking to her!-.-

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Monica

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Posted: 12 years ago

#68

Originally posted by: ..Kirann..
^^ She's such a bitch man. Im not even talking to her!-.-

LOL something going on btwn you guys?

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kiran khurana

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Posted: 12 years ago

#69

Na Im just upset.

Anyways Im so bored man. :(

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Tanvi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#70

OMG Monica OMG why is Akdu so perf? Why why why?! I loved all the dialogues you penned down and the way you described Asad and Zoya's emotions and their inner thoughts and their actions and omg you incorporated the 'chand' wish SO beautifully and perfectly It was a wonderful idea! So simple and perfect 😳

And the last line, "As far as they were concerned, in the eyes of God, they were already one. "

SO PERFECT!