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sonia555

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Posted: 12 years ago

#111

Nice update continue soon plz

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Posted: 12 years ago

#112

Di, this is just brilliant.👏

I loved this part in particular for many reasons. It is a very fast paced chapter which I liked very much. One thing happened after another.

For the very first time, Asad did not tell his ammi that he left for the ship. And just see what happened; Dilshaad ammi got hospitalized.

Asad asked Zoya to leave the house ASAP but by signing the hospital papers, she delayed her leave from the Khan house.

Secret Mission??? Kaisa mission? Is there any chance Asad will get to know more about Zoya's dad through this mission?

Mr. Khan chaahe mujhey ghar se nikaal dein, but apni zindagi se nahin nikaal sakte. I will continue to live in India till I get to the bottom of all this and make Mr. Khan confess his true feelings." (I wonder how much of time it will take her to let him confess)

"Ya Allah! Meri galti ki sazaa meri phoophi ko mat dena. Unhein salaamat rakhiye ga." (Dilshaad ammi will be fine, hopefully, par daar iss baat ka hai wether Asad will punish Zoya for this action of hers or not)

Lots of questions mark for me now: Will Zoya tell Asad about his ammi? If not, will he get to know about it on his mission? If yes, will he choose ammi over work or not? What if he finds out after the mission and his ammi is still not well, what will he do?

Yeh kaisa cliffhanger hai, Di. Itna suspense wala end mein chapter ek dum khatam. Not fair 😔 I am glad you will update soon, since the story is getting really interesting now. 😃

Mein in saab cheezo ke baare mein sochongi aur jab tak aap agla chapter upload kariye. 😉😆

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bheegi

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: sujataraje
sangi...i just love you🤗
this story is turning into very interesting and unpredictable story i mean in terms of events..you bring some surprising elements every time...
zoya proved to be member of family and a mature person the way she handled the situation...
but you gave cliffhanger😭
looking forward to next part..when asad will come to know about how zoya handled the situation.😳
and i lobe your detailing yaar..its your USP for sure..👏

Thanks for staying up for the update sujata

Remember I had said, Zoya has a lot of growing up to do in this ff...well, the process has started😊

let's wait and see how everything else unfolds...i will update tomorrow evening (US time)

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bheegi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#114

Originally posted by: Yellowdiamond
Omg! This us heartbreaking and scary at the same time! I'm scared fir zoya I hope everything turns out ok! Hope the neurosurgeon gets thru with his surgery and dilshad ummi geeks better! I hope that mr khan first get angry with zoya for signing zoya khan, because it was an emergency! Great update! Anxious fir next part!

Thanks yellow diamond...yes, Zoya has def taken a big chance here but let's wait and see what happens next😉

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bheegi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#115

Originally posted by: ..vidhi..
i was just gng to log out when i saw the update...its been so long since i commented on time lol
the update was as usual fab...loved how zoya took upon her the responsibilities...
ok so what is she gng to tell najma...aaahhh continue sooonn!!!!!!

Thanks Vidhi...I know it's late for you guys

Wait and see...remember Najma is Zoya's well wisher😃

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bheegi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#116

Originally posted by: s120
This was so interesting. Loved the way Zoya took charge and showed presence of mind. She handled it so well. When Asad gets to know, he'll be so proud of her.

Looking forward to the next update.

Thanks Shreya...this is just the beginning of Zoya's growth...aage aage dekhiye kya hota hai😃

Remember, Asad used to call her the spoiled brat?

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bheegi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#117

Originally posted by: anushreemishra
Great update as usual...i felt really bad for zoya but loved how she vowed to stay in india till asad confesses...i loved how zoya took charge of the situations and handled everything so well...i knew that zoya was gonna sign the papers😃So asad miyan has finally admitted to someone that he is in love and his dialogue ki "meri umr bhi use lag zaye"cliche but so sweet😳...i felt so sad for asya while they were chatting on skype...i hope zoya's doesn't telling asad about dilshad doesn't lead to misunderstandings between asad and zoya...Poor najma its good zoya is there...atleast they will have each other's support...looking forward for the next part...

Thanks Anushree. This Zoya is very committed and a changed girl from her early cruise days when she was spoilt and bratty...

wait and see what happens

Najma is indeed lucky to have Zoya by her side. Let's see if Zoya confides in Najma

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bheegi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#118

Originally posted by: angleI8383
omg its really heart breaking 😭
but very intresting and really excited for next chapter 😳
u r awsm diii ..u should write a movie and dis is better den movie 👏🤗

Oh boy...that's a huge compliment. Hope you continue to like the story😃

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bheegi

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: me2you
Di, this is just brilliant.👏
I loved this part in particular for many reasons. It is a very fast paced chapter which I liked very much. One thing happened after another.

thanks Narges...remember, I said next few chapters will be fast paced. I only drag AsYa scenes out😆...rest will go at a fast pace

For the very first time, Asad did not tell his ammi that he left for the ship. And just see what happened; Dilshaad ammi got hospitalized.

u bet he will feel guilty
Asad asked Zoya to leave the house ASAP but by signing the hospital papers, she delayed her leave from the Khan house.

Secret Mission??? Kaisa mission? Is there any chance Asad will get to know more about Zoya's dad through this mission?

he he...u are on to something. Yes, the mission will connect their past for sure😉

Mr. Khan chaahe mujhey ghar se nikaal dein, but apni zindagi se nahin nikaal sakte. I will continue to live in India till I get to the bottom of all this and make Mr. Khan confess his true feelings." (I wonder how much of time it will take her to let him confess)

wait and see😳

"Ya Allah! Meri galti ki sazaa meri phoophi ko mat dena. Unhein salaamat rakhiye ga." (Dilshaad ammi will be fine, hopefully, par daar iss baat ka hai wether Asad will punish Zoya for this action of hers or not)
Lots of questions mark for me now: Will Zoya tell Asad about his ammi? If not, will he get to know about it on his mission? If yes, will he choose ammi over work or not? What if he finds out after the mission and his ammi is still not well, what will he do?

Yeh kaisa cliffhanger hai, Di. Itna suspense wala end mein chapter ek dum khatam. Not fair 😔 I am glad you will update soon, since the story is getting really interesting now. 😃

Mein in saab cheezo ke baare mein sochongi aur jab tak aap agla chapter upload kariye. 😉😆

i will update tomorrow evening (US time)...socho socho😆 tab tak