FS: AsYa - 36 Weeks - Part 4 Updated pg 29 - Page 15

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Posted: 12 years ago
Awww just read the 3rd part and it was so sweet...get well soon and don't worry this was sweet as hell...i liked zoya wanting to invite rashid and m happy that asad finally gave his father a chance and allowed him to come...i never thought it would be rashid who came to the park that was a pleasant surprise and i had no idea that rashid had been such a great support for zoya during the pregnancy and then i actually understood why zoya was so adamant on inviting him to the baby shower...and the baby kicking him was so sweet and i loved how you showed asad and rashid coming closer thru the babies and their fingers brushing against each other was a very nice touching...i loved the scne at the end wen asad was teasing zoya...😉can't wait for the next part...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: anushreemishra

Awww just read the 3rd part and it was so sweet...get well soon and don't worry this was sweet as hell...i liked zoya wanting to invite rashid and m happy that asad finally gave his father a chance and allowed him to come...i never thought it would be rashid who came to the park that was a pleasant surprise and i had no idea that rashid had been such a great support for zoya during the pregnancy and then i actually understood why zoya was so adamant on inviting him to the baby shower...and the baby kicking him was so sweet and i loved how you showed asad and rashid coming closer thru the babies and their fingers brushing against each other was a very nice touching...i loved the scne at the end wen asad was teasing zoya...😉can't wait for the next part...


okay im really surprised that you liked this part! sorry for the relly short update but once i start feeling better ill do long ones again. thank you so much for all your kind words. this one scene is what i bascially wrote the entire FS on. so im glad it came out well. thank you so so so much. your words really touched me🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
Its beautiful, amazing and super se bhi uppar. Please update soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Woww... The update was superb... I loved d Zoya-Rashid convo... N Asad taking care of Mother Zoya...
Zoya's mood swings were so high for Asad...just loved the whole part...
Thanx 4 d pm n pls give us long update next time...



~JAZ~
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Posted: 12 years ago
Just read part 3

Again an awesome job

Gosh you are so good

Are u a medical student??

The update was amazing

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Posted: 12 years ago
That was super awesome!
I loved it so much!
do update soon and dont forget to pm me!
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Posted: 12 years ago
OMG YUSS 😃

Part three was AWE-SOME as expected 😆 I love how you're showing the journey they're taking with her pregnancy 😳 I love how real you're showing things! Lol I hope that makes sense 😆 It's not all fun and games and rainbows and unicorns, it's tough!

So kudos to you! Great update 😊

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Posted: 12 years ago
its amazing and very cute😊
thanx for pm
plzzz pm me for the next as well
continue son
and get well soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Ur story is just so amazing...lovely update..so cute and rightly emoted and I loved it ..thanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
I dont understand u girl...coz such a beautiful chapter with every emotions on earth filled in so accurately in this update and u call this crapppy and short...if this is crapppy and short as per u then plz tell me wat is a nice update and a long update practicallly, matlab ur next chapter...

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