AsYA OS: Bunty's List for Chintu! - Page 5

Originally posted by: shaz2009

Wow,super,super loved it!Very creatively written with all the right ingredients to strum those heart strings.This is the Asad I would love to see post Tannu's revelation as this Asad is daring,caring,ever so loving and way too sexy and charming.
You really do need to carry on writing for this forum as everyone should get the chance to appreciate your talent and enjoy the creativity in writing that you have to offer.

Loved it!

Originally posted by: sophie420

Loved it!

Nicely written, continue soon!

-Sophie :)

OMGG!! This is the cutest thing I've ever read!! Ahh... everything was soo perfect! Honestly this is everything I would ask for too just like Zoya lool :p I loved the idea of the amusement park its always been my idea of a perfect dream date <3

Honestly everything was just too damn perfect and I will throw flowers on you for this OS! And pleasee you are an amazing writer! After reading this you are definitely one of my fave writers on this forum! Great work girl! I would love to read more from you on AsYa real soon ;)

Btw thanks for the pm :))

I absolutely loved Bunty and Chintu!! Adorable. Loved the way Asad fulfilled Zoya's wishes. It was very heartening to see a carefree Asad let go of his OCD and bring out the little boy stuck inside him. The little boy who had to grow up overnight after his father abandoned him! I went from smiling silly (prompting my little one to ask "Mama, why are you smiling?" Aww!!), laughing and then going aww!

Originally posted by: KSGlover101

OMGG!! This is the cutest thing I've ever read!! Ahh... everything was soo perfect! Honestly this is everything I would ask for too just like Zoya lool :p I loved the idea of the amusement park its always been my idea of a perfect dream date <3

Honestly everything was just too damn perfect and I will throw flowers on you for this OS! And pleasee you are an amazing writer! After reading this you are definitely one of my fave writers on this forum! Great work girl! I would love to read more from you on AsYa real soon ;)

Btw thanks for the pm :))

Originally posted by: webuser7

I absolutely loved Bunty and Chintu!! Adorable. Loved the way Asad fulfilled Zoya's wishes. It was very heartening to see a carefree Asad let go of his OCD and bring out the little boy stuck inside him. The little boy who had to grow up overnight after his father abandoned him! I went from smiling silly (prompting my little one to ask "Mama, why are you smiling?" Aww!!), laughing and then going aww!

👏 If this is your first attempt, then kudos to you! Well done!

Originally posted by: Zarnaa

Thank you so much! your words mean a lot to me. and coincidently it has been my idea of a perfect date as well!!

Thank you so very much! you have no idea how encouraging you are. WIll write soon! Promise😳

Awwee... I'm glad my words mean that much to you :$ and reaallyy!?! Woow we think alike :p and I'm sure you won't let me down :p haha

Once again great work girl :))

Zaarna you r too good baby !!!

Originally posted by: KSGlover101

Awwee... I'm glad my words mean that much to you :$ and reaallyy!?! Woow we think alike :p and I'm sure you won't let me down :p haha

Once again great work girl :))