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-khaleesi-

@-khaleesi-

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#41

Really well written! I'm close to tears.

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jazsidhu

@jazsidhu

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#42

hey tis is really beautifully written...

was having tears edi...

thx fr the pm...

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Kurup

@Kurup

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#43

Wowww...Mona darling...as far as the literacy work is considered...as usual like all ur works this was also beautiful, but when it comes to the plot, cant accept this fact that these two love birds are in such pain and are going away from each other...

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Asya_Maaneet

@Asya_Maaneet

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#44

Monica! This was beautiful! Sad but beautiful! That seems to be the only word I can find to describe this OS! Idk how you do it. But you get to the heart of what I wish would happen and then you bring me back to the reality like that! 😭 I loved this OS, so (here it comes again) it was BEAUTIFUL yaar! 👍🏼 Great job! 👏 😛

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Deleted_Account

@Deleted_Account

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#45

Did it enddd??
Oh! I am stil visualizing the whole thing!!
Beautiful portrayal!!
Thumbs up!! (Y)

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Pori

@Pori

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#46

Beautiful

I love the way you sketched their pain, faith, love and hope

you're an amazing writer

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madhvi4gurti

@madhvi4gurti

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#47

im crying after reading this!!!😭

even i feel something like that only is gonna happen on monday!!!

u wrote it so fabulously...totally loved it! it was heart wrenching!😭

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Monica

@mochhug

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: ranz
The angst so well expressed-- please continue after the next episode too!

Aww thanks! I don't think I'll be able to during the week, but I'll see which precap of the next speaks to me 😆😳

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Monica

@mochhug

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#49

Originally posted by: LuvUAsYa1
IT WAS A DREAM!vn i read ths line i literally hit my head wid my hand! Like oh teri! Ye dream tha! well no doubt it ws a beautiful n tht too written perfectly well! Olthough d ending ws sad bt i so loved it! Tfs dea! N tnx 4 d PM!

Hahaha Aww I'm glad you liked it 😃

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Monica

@mochhug

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#50

Originally posted by: Kaya13

😳😳😳

Originally posted by: Rarepearl
absolutely beautiful!!

Thanks! 😳

Originally posted by: princeegoyal
hey monica..thts a good one dear...but i want u should continue it...make one or two shots...in which zoya helps him to not fall into the crime pool...which he is going to commit..

pari

Aw thanks, Pari! I would but this is one of those pieces that doesn't really have a continuation, ya know? But I did that with Bharosa, and with The Bitter Truth 😃